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Reviewer: flibble Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/16/2008 - 02:45 am Title: Plans within Plans

OMG! That was an amazing chapter. Sorry it took me so long to get to it. But I loved it. And their kiss at the end was so absolutely perfect. Spike's actions in this chapter went a long way to redeeming him. I'll be very interested to see how much of the evening Buffy remembers and what her reaction is.

Author's Response: YAY - glad you liked the kiss and Spike's chivalrous attitude. Yup, he's frowing up finally, lol. I'm so thrilled you enjoyed the update hon, man thanks for the review. Huggles.

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/11/2008 - 09:31 pm Title: Plans within Plans

Crumbs for muse and major kudos and hugs for you. Settlar chaps! And I loved "he should do audio books... you could fall alspleep to his voice" (probably quoted wrong, but you know what I mean.) I do that! every night I'm lulled into sweet dreams by James reading me a Dresden book and its very soothing after working long hours with the mega boss-lady!

The last chap was spectacular! I have to commend Spike, he had a hellava chance to get into Buffy's pants and he played the gentleman through and through! I always love "dance scenes" with Buffy & Spike (the Spike persona is one of the most senuous characters I've seen in years!) I am able to pictures every slide of hand, every small tough and tremor when I read about them dancing together (and of course Buffy's no slouch in the sexy dancing either!) I can picture them so perfectily dancing, pratically making love on the dance floor together and your tale just bring it all into focus so clear!

I can't wait for the next few chaps to move our couple along (especially now that they have a oouple champions to the cause - even if they don't know it yet) and of course, I am especially excited by the prospect of Angel getting the boot. I hope he does something crass and Buffy sees the light!

Major hugs darlin. and Thanks for making my mother's day read so ....stimulating! Luv-U long-time!

Author's Response: Thank you, me likee crumbs, lots and lots of them. LOL - couldn't resist the audio books comment - hey, it's true, and we all know it too, lol. Oh yes, a dance scene is always of the good, I mean hellooooo, Spike is the epitome of walking sex, so to have him DANCE.... thud - now that's just sinfully delicious, giggles. Alas, he's grown a conscience when it comes to Buffy and a good thing too - he could have had his wicked way with her, gulp! Yup, friends are rooting for them, that's for sure - Buffy's just still a tad blind - as always. Glad I could brighten your mothers day hon - thanks for the review - luv ya babes.

Reviewer: spikeluv84 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/11/2008 - 09:44 am Title: Plans within Plans

okay first off, just to get this out of the way: this link:

http://youtube.com/watch?v=3tyRNWeqhik

is right in the middle of drunk, dancing Buffy and it is a KICK-ASS video! it's not highlighted either. but damn does that video fit!

back to the story....omg u're so devious!!! i wanted to smack Spike for saying no, but he's turning over a new leaf so i understand. but damnit! if he was drunk and on me going "lips of Monica", i would've went to 3rd base before stopping, cuz u know....drunk guys can't keep their poles up 99% of the time. but i would rub on his chest for a while...or maybe let him cuddle on me and vow innocence in the morning. yeah, that one sounds good. GOD PLEASE!!! let Angel get kicked in the nuts!! that's like my fave all time scene! oh yeah, and this right here: "he’s just… too much twisted steel and sex appeal for me." what the hell does that mean???? it made no sense to me and it rhymed! but it does put a darkly image of Spike in my head. all dommy like. love it! GOD I MISS YOU TINA!!!

Author's Response: Oh yes, glad you like the vid - I thought if I could find a link with a spufy vid - all the better.. Giggles, me? Devious? Maybe a bit, just a teensy bit, hee. And OMG - you soooooooooooooo went there but it is true - drunk guys and stiff poles - unmixy, ya may as well be playing with a wet noodle, LMFAO. As for the too much twisted steel and sex appeal - well that refers to his ooey gooey sexy sinewy muscular body - the twisted steel, and the sex appeal, well, that speaks for itself. I actually stole that line from a movie that starred Holly Hunter and Richard Dreyfuss called 'Alway' - I always thought it was funny, so I threw it in the mix, hee hee. Missed you too sweety and thanks for the review - luv ya girl.

Reviewer: quirks Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2008 - 05:39 am Title: Plans within Plans

it's been a crazy week for me, but it's finally friday night and i got to catch up with this story! i've said it before, and i'll probably say it again - i love how spike's caring and loving nature is emerging under the bad boy. you make sense of his contradictory nature. AND it's in a fun, intriguing plot. :D
Woo HOO! Can't wait to see what happens next.
Lips of Spike ...

Author's Response: Sorry for the crazy week hon, but I'm glad to see you finally had a chance to relax. Squeeeee, I'm so happy you're enjoying Spike's little transformation, I mean to go from A-#1 asshole to caring guy right away just wouldn't be all that realistic. THanks for the fab review my dear - smoochies to you.

Reviewer: GoldenUsagi Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/08/2008 - 11:32 pm Title: Plans within Plans

I can SO see Spike acting all embarassed and shy, pretending he misunderstood about Buffy's birthday! And "Angel or Henry," LOL! Buffy and Spike's night out on the town was great, but what's gonna happen when she sobers up tomorrow? Excellent chapter!

Author's Response: Hahahahahaahhaah, oh indeed, he's a player, but at least the goal is innocent enough, right? As far as when she sobers up -well, she's such a light weight that she won't remember it - and a good thing too. THanks for the review hon - smoochies to you.

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/08/2008 - 06:08 am Title: Plans within Plans

Buffy is finally coming to her senses ;) or maybe only her subconscious is talking, but we all know :p Spending the weekend with Spike is so much better than being with Angel! And the dancing was sweet, you chose the right song :)

Author's Response: She is, slowly but surely. Glad you liked the song I chose for their dance - I thought it had a sexy beat and the words, well, most of them, rang true for their present situation. Thanks for the review darling - huggles.

Reviewer: pixiecorn Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2008 - 08:39 pm Title: Plans within Plans

:O i can't wait for next weeks update hehe its getting so interesting:)

Author's Response: Giggles, oh yes, indeed it is. Thanks for the review hon - smooches to you.

Reviewer: SpikesGoddess Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2008 - 02:07 pm Title: Plans within Plans

That was the best kiss ever! I loved it, they were both so cute and Spike was such a gentleman for having his wicked way with her, and even feeling that he was taking advantage of her by just kissing her, awwwwwww!

Author's Response: YAY - so glad you liked the kiss - as innocently drunk as she was. Yeah - at this point I couldn't have SPike revert to his old self, not now that he's starting to make progress in the growing up department. Thanks for the fab review my friend - hugs you tight.

Reviewer: smlcspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/06/2008 - 12:54 am Title: Plans within Plans

Oh I loved the kiss and maybe Owen was good timeing for her to meet up with him at the bare, and they kissed.

Author's Response: Oh yeah - Owen's appearnece actually did wonders for S&B - though poor Spike is so confused, giggles. I had to throw in that kiss there coming from Buffy's subconscious - couldn't resist - but of course SPike resisting is a sign of how far he's come. THank you for the fab review boo - huggles.

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/05/2008 - 04:30 pm Title: Plans within Plans

Spike finagling an entire weekend alone with Buffy was charming, as was his insistence she come out dancing with him. His overprotective possessiveness was in character, and I enjoyed his self reflection and coming to the conclusion that he's really angling to get into a relationship with this woman and it scares him to death. I just love your drunk Buffy. She's so soft and sweet and open. Buffy initiating the kissing was lovely, and I really felt Spike's struggle to restrain himself.

I can't wait to see what Buffy remembers of their night out. The dancing was romantic, and I can't believe she'd be wasted enough to completely forget the kissing. She really is a light weight, though.

Author's Response: Ah yes - he's growing up and despite being scared of his feelings, he's moving forward on them as well. Poor Buffy - I do love to write her drunk, it's fun, and writing SPike as being chivalrous concerning the kiss he allowed himself, yeah - major struggle there for him. Welll, since she is a light weight and passed out, there won't be much of anything she'll remember, ubfortunetely, but then again, it's for the best she doesn't - especially where the kissing is concerned, *winks* - might put her on the defensive again. Glad you liked the update sweety and thanks so much ofr the review - smooches.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/05/2008 - 04:29 am Title: Plans within Plans

Damn, the are adorable beyond words. I'm so glad that Spike was able to come up with something so very sweet to keep her out of Angel's clutches, and that she agreed so readily. Now, if they could only figure out how totally smitten they are with each other... Hell, I'm a little in love. Such a fabulous story. Really enjoying it. Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Aren't they though? THings will begin to pick up pacefrom here on out as far as them figuring out how they feel, *winks*. I'm so glad you enjoyed the update hon - thanks a bunch for the review - snuggles.

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/04/2008 - 10:04 pm Title: Plans within Plans

I've just come back from seeing James and am a very happy bunny - sorry Anya but I am. Back to story. So Spike has finally realised that a quick shag won't do anymore - yippee. What a revelation it must have been for him to not take advantage of a drunken Buffy - aahh. Loved this (as always) and hopefully some of my happiness can pass over to you and RL.

Author's Response: Hi sweety, so you finally met James huh? I had a pretty good time when I met him too - he's absolutely very lively of a person. If you have pics, please do send them my way tina_trammel@yahoo.com
YAY, glad to hear you like how our Spike is growing up - he's smitten and all noble like, giggles. Hope you enjoy next chapter and thanks for the review darling. Hugs you tight.

Reviewer: Sarah Aless Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/04/2008 - 09:05 pm Title: Plans within Plans

GREAT chapter!! Such a nice kiss too! Drunk Buffy is always quality entertainment for my money hehe - can't wait for them getting closer in the next chapter!!!
Thank you hun
Sarah
x

Author's Response: I feel awful for having Buffy drunk a couple of times here in this fic - but it really is amusing to write her that way, hee hee. GLad you enjoyed their little kiss - even if Spike felt all guilty about it, poor thing is growing up finally. THanks for the fab review darling - smoochies.

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/04/2008 - 03:19 pm Title: Plans within Plans

Aww, Buffy was missing Spike and worrying about him, and Spike is turning into a such a thoughtful gentleman where Buffy's feelings are concerned... things are definitely progressing nicely for the pair. Loved Spike's big plan to keep Buffy away from Angel, I kinda hope Angel finds out that Buffy would rather watch her favorite tv show instead of spend time with him... lol! Great chapter! :D

Author's Response: Good, glad you like the progression of the characters and their metamorphasis. Yeah, Henry over Angel isn't really a fair contest, lol - poor Mr. Broody... NOT, lmao. GLad you enjoyed the update hon and thanks for the review. Smooches.

Reviewer: Blackoberst Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/04/2008 - 01:37 pm Title: Plans within Plans

I cannot wait for the next update and, hopefully, the cold shoulder treatment twards angel.

Author's Response: Hehehhehehe, oh indeed Angel won't be pleased about Bufy's decision, but he's also a right bastard, that's all I can say for now without spoiling it. Glad you enjoyed the chappy darling and thanks so much for the review - kisses.

Reviewer: Sotia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/04/2008 - 11:43 am Title: Plans within Plans

*singsongs* Buffy and Spike, sitting in a tree, k-i-s-s-i-n-g!!!

SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!! Loved the chapter, as always, my friend! Spike is finally realizing he wants more, and of course Buffy chooses Henry over brood-face! YAYYYY!!! Loved the dance-floor Scene, though poor Owen *giggles* being at the receiving end of a Spike glare!

More, more, MORE!!!

Love you to bits, honey!!!

Author's Response: GIggles, you're so funny boo. And Henry over Angel, bah, no contest indeed, lol. I felt bad kicking Owen to the curb like that, but hey - sexy dance, sooooo worth it. Lov you too sweety and thanks for all your help.

Reviewer: Darkrivertempest Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/04/2008 - 11:42 am Title: Plans within Plans

SQUEEE!!!!!! That was so freakin HAWT! (runs to grab another set of knickers)....I LOVED that dance scene and yes, the music fits the mood so well! And Spike is falling, falling, falling...and poor thing doesn't know what to do about it! And I'm sorry RL is being a bitch to you hun, you should have told me! But it's a test of your skill that you can write like this and still keep a smile on your face through all the shit. BRAVA dearest! Lots of love and snuggles!

Author's Response: Hahahhahha, you're tooooo funny my sista. GOd I love that song - I was so glad it seemed to fit within the chapter. I honestly forgot that I hadn't told you what was going on with RL, now that I think about it, I may have, ugh, old age and bad memory is catching up to me, eeeep!!! Anyway, I'll let you in on it hon. Love you lots boo.

Reviewer: hotlipedjen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/04/2008 - 11:08 am Title: Plans within Plans

Good chapter! Bring on the Spuffy goodness.

Author's Response: Hee hee hee, okay hon - I promise I will. GLad you enjoyed the update and thanks for the review - hugs you tight.

Reviewer: Mark Evans Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/04/2008 - 06:54 am Title: Plans within Plans

I always love it when you update :D . This was such a great chapter, and I love the pace that it's going. Can't wait to get Buffy's decision about Angel.

Author's Response: Thank you hon - I appreciate it that you see the pacing is there for good reason - realism, lol. I do hope you enjoy the next chapter just as much and thanks again for the review - hugs.

Reviewer: jeanieofoz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/04/2008 - 06:49 am Title: Plans within Plans

*beautiful* and it was the perfect pick-me-up for my blue day
THANK YOU!

Author's Response: Awwwwww, sorry for the blue day, but I am happy the update cheered you up. Thanks for the review darling - kisses.

Reviewer: Heidi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/04/2008 - 06:34 am Title: Plans within Plans

The dancing....

and

the kissing.....

so hot.

Author's Response: LOL - thank you hon - hugs you tight.

Reviewer: Devin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/04/2008 - 05:51 am Title: Plans within Plans

WOOOOO!!!!!! Hot scenes throughout!!! MY computer is being excruciatingly slow right now, so I'll just leave it at CANNOT WAIT FOR THE NEXT UPDATE!!!!

Author's Response: Hahahaa, sorry for the slow pc hon, but very pleased you enjoyed the chappy. Thanks for the review darling - huggles.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/04/2008 - 05:22 am Title: Plans within Plans

Guess Spike got more than he expected. I love a drunk Buffy! Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Indeed he did, and of course drunk Buffy is always hilarious to write, lol. Thanks for thiew darling - snuggles.e rev

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/04/2008 - 02:04 am Title: Plans within Plans

And Spike is SUNK. YAY!!

Too bad Buffy's still only with the physical attraction.....she doesn't much like HIM, yet.

Author's Response: Not to worry - that'll allllll change during their weekend together - she'll be starting on her own path towards her feelings, *winks*. GLad you enjoyed the updatge hon and thanks for the review. Hugs.

Reviewer: dampersandspoons Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/03/2008 - 11:56 pm Title: Plans within Plans

What a fantastic chapter! I have a question, one I could easily answer myself should I re-read, but I'll just ask you instead. Did you not mention something in this story between Angel and Spike concerning a bet? Am I imagining this? That they bet 'who would get her first'? And if so...I can only see bad things coming from that. ANYWAY...I can't wait for their Blood Ties marathon as well as Buffy's realization of how she acted the night before. God, I love the pacing of this story! Please more!!!! *hugs the shizznit out of you*

Author's Response: Nope, SPike never agreed to the bet, but he got cut of by the unexpected entrance of a colleague of Angel's - so he didn't have the chance to tell him he wasn't agreeing to any bet. He thinks way too much of Buffy for that. But it will come out later, trust me. I'm so glad you liked the update hon - snuggles you close and thank you for the review.

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