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Reviewer: gdo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/07/2008 - 01:32 am Title: Domestic Bliss

aw, kitten, though I was hoping for a rough and tumble

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/25/2008 - 12:58 am Title: Domestic Bliss

Just to let you know I am reading ( Army) right now... need some laughs along with some good NC17...

Waiting for the next update.. of Murphy and hopefully some apologies and reconciliations... or will it be moving out time..



Author's Response: HAHAHAHHAHA, that's awesome, I'm so glad you still enjoy IAN - that was a special one for me to write. Thanks for the review, and no worries about ML - I promise. Hugs.

Reviewer: Sami Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/22/2008 - 10:47 pm Title: Domestic Bliss

I completley and totally love this story!!!! Love how you compared the slapping fight, Cant wait for the next chapter!!

Keep up the great work
Sami

Author's Response: Squeeeee, glad you enjoyed the slapfest for its comedic standpoint. THank you so much for the great reviedw hon, more to come soon. Huggles.

Reviewer: GoldenUsagi Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/21/2008 - 11:08 pm Title: Domestic Bliss

Awww, no happy ending for Spike? So much happened, yet nothing happened! Argh! So, why IS Buffy so timid around guys? Or is it just Spike? What skeleton has she got in her closet? :) And Spike, naughty Spike, you just don't understand that to a girl, a handjob is more than you think it is. "Happy ending, that's all." It's never all that simple! :) Great chapter!

Author's Response: Nope, no happy ending this time – poor Spike. As far as Buffy being so timid around men, well, that’s be revealed in a later chapter – it’s all about timing, trust me. Part of me wants to say you’ll be surprised why, another part me thinks you may not, but either way, it’s a plan of mine not to reveal why until JUST the right moment, *winks*. And yes – I totally agree with you that a hand-job is not just something you can do that means absolutely nothing – silly boy. Thanks for the review darling – smoochies to you.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/21/2008 - 12:59 pm Title: Domestic Bliss

That was one awesome chapter! Can't wait to see what happens next!

Author's Response: Squeee, glad you enjoyed it hon - thanks so much for the review - huggles.

Reviewer: burnkitty Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/21/2008 - 10:36 am Title: Domestic Bliss

Ok so it might have taken me a week to read your story from start to this chapter but it was soooo worth it! I had been meaning to read it for a long time now but I was caught up in other fics and other stuff...Anyway, this story is AWESOME and I'm now currently kicking myself for not reading it earlier. ;)

I love the whole up and down thing going on and its only been like a month, not even. I really do feel that when you meet the right person you know practically from the start at least in your gut.

SO, now that you have me totally hooked I can't wait to read the next chapter!

My thoughts are with you.

Author's Response: Oh but at least when you read it you enjoyed it and tha'ts more thna I can ask for - squeeeee, very happpy you like it darling. (does the dance of joy). It's true you do know the right person for you once you meet them - but in their case, well, they've been fighting it most of the way, hee. THanks for the review and the well wishes sweety, I really appreciate it - hugs you tight.

Reviewer: Blood Faerie Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/20/2008 - 10:58 am Title: Domestic Bliss

awwwww, kitty - i'd rather have a puppy tho

and lambrusco! yay! mom and dad claim its the reason i was conceived, lol

YOU NAMED IT SEBASTIEN LIKE MY COCKER!!

Slap Slap Slap *lol*


Author's Response: Hehehehheeh, I had a cat named sebastin when I was younger - so I couldn't help it, I giggled to myself when you told me via IM about your cocker, it was hard not to tell you then I'd chosen that name. Glad you enjoyed it my friend - luv u boo.

Reviewer: pixiecorn Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/20/2008 - 08:53 am Title: Domestic Bliss

:O:O:O you are soooo evil lol.... you've really got me sitting on the edge of my seat craving more.... i hope to god you update really soon because i can't wait to read what happens next:)

Author's Response: Oh but that's great - that means I did my job as an author, squee, but sorry for the evil cliffy - the muse insisted and i had to listen, lol. Thanks for reviewing boo - smooches to you.

Reviewer: quirks Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/20/2008 - 02:13 am Title: Domestic Bliss

such sweet torture! *glares*
can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Eeeeep, hides - but it is for a better cause as you'll see in next chapter,I promise. Thanks for the review boo - hugs.

Reviewer: Katie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/20/2008 - 01:06 am Title: Domestic Bliss

Dum dum DUM!!! Trouble in paradise I see! Loved the steamy massage and Buffy FINALLY jumping Spike, but of course this is Murphy's Law we're talking about here. I wonder what Buffy's gonna do about Angel now that this has happened. I love their little bitchfight too; it reminded me of Xander and Harmony's fight from Season 4. It also seems Spike hasn't grown up entirely yet, but at least he realizes part of it's his fault. And 2 steps forward you say.... Hmmm..... Definately interested to see how that goes! This story gets better and better every chapter; I am fully addicted! Can't wait for more!
~Katiegrrl1016

Author's Response: LOL - luv the dum dum dum - that about sums it up. As for Angel, Buffy wil do the right thing, she is a good person despite her fallicies. And omg - I forgot about the fight between Harmony and Xander - hilarious and you're so right. Spike still has a bit to go to becoming fully grown up, but also Buffy has a ways to go herself b/c of her path. Yup - two steps forward, trust me, *winks*. I'm so thrilled you're enjoying the whole story so much hon, thank you for the fab review. Huggles.

Reviewer: Steph Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/19/2008 - 09:47 pm Title: Domestic Bliss

"Good lord Lawrence why are you slapping a monkey?"
"Teddy this guy's been pushing me and pushing me and I'm sick of it!" HAHAHAHA after you mentioned it , I just had to watch that scene on youtube b/c I've never seen the movie... it was hysterical. When I first read that he slapped her back I was a littttllle worried but then I saw that he was just being playful so I was ok with it. Besides it lead to some really hot kissage hehe. I just wanted to let you know I adore this story!!! Actually allll your fics are freakin awesome, as are you :). Even though it's been tough to be patient, I will be cause I just know it will definitely be worth it. Pleeeeaaase update soon!!! Thanks. Lots of Love.

Author's Response: LMFAO - I just love that scene from the movie and of course adore Robin Williams. Glad you were able to find that scene on youtube - I laugh every time I see it. Oh yeah, after their little slapfest it was raw lust that came out on top to dominate the both of them. THanks for the compliment sweety, it really does make me blush plus I'm grateful you and other's enjoy my writing - it makes it worth it. This story is slow in the sense its not in my usual style where there is sex upfront - but I chose to write it this way as a personal chalenge to myself that I could indeed write an engagin story without it - er, well, at least until they get to have sex. And when they do...... have your ciggies ready, *winks*. Thanks for the totally awesome review - it made me grin from ear to ear. Hugs you tight.

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/19/2008 - 07:43 pm Title: Domestic Bliss

Honey, I trust you! ;) Spike wanted his happy ending too much, but who was he to object when Buffy threw herself on him? And then she ran away and chose the cold shower instead. Well, good luck with that :p I guess she'll come crawling back for another attack. But he'll probably be too mad and push her away? *just guessing* :p Anyway, loved it!

Author's Response: Thanks for trusting me, I really do appreciate it. I have plans for them, *winks*. Spike did want his happy ending a but too much and of course arguing was so not the way to go about it even if he wanted to understand what the problem was she had with it. As for him pushing her away? Well, he's in too deep and wants her too much to ever push her away, but he has his pride too. Until they suss things out - in next chapter - he won't make a move. Glad you enjoyed the chapter sweets - thanks for the review - huggles and snuggles.

Reviewer: Sarah Aless Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/19/2008 - 07:23 pm Title: Domestic Bliss

Oh and forgot to say the kitten was sooooo cute!!! And he has the same name as one of my loved ones!!!
Also, I know it's not really the place for it but if you're interested in seeing the thing I babbled about it's on youtube http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OBihA7_fSPA&feature=related
The slapping is quite near the end but the rest is not bad to watch (or maybe I'm biased cos i know the back story.
Sarah
x

Author's Response: Oh thank you - I have a persian myself and as a youth, a black cat named sebastian and thought, wel, there's nothing like a kitten to make a girl swoon. And yes, I watched the vid you sent me - OMG, how hilarious is that, AND his name was Spike? LMFAO, thanks for that hon and thanks again for al your review... luv ya.

Reviewer: Sarah Aless Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/19/2008 - 07:00 pm Title: Domestic Bliss

SO HOT!!!!! And they didn't even really get down to it!! Bloody hell!! Wwell done luv - fantastic.
As for the slapping I found it both hilarious and HOT!! People get their knickers in a knot too much about supposed 'abuse' jeezo it's not like he punched her in the face or something. In fact you took me back to my childhood to the first Snarky relationship I ever loved on a British kids show called Press Gang (which is freakin amazing btw) where a guy called (funnily enough) Spike and a girl called Lynda had a serious love hate thing going on and there was a slapping scene that you sooo reminded me of (that was both funny and hot too incidentally)
Anyhoo, anyone who's gonna complain about abuse is probably gonna get their panties in a bunch about something or other eventually no matter what you write so pay it no heed if it happens is what I say!
Thanks for this hun
Sarah
x

Author's Response: YAY, squeeeeee, so glad you enjoyed their passionate moment - just imagine when they finally do get down to the 'deed', *double winks*. And yeah, some people do get their knickers twisted at the mere thought of abuse, but realistically, I only tried to portray it in a funny fashion and sorta like their canon characters - but without using fists. Thanksf or the awesome review hon - smooches.

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/19/2008 - 03:24 pm Title: Domestic Bliss

OMG that was so ...... what's the word I'm looking for? HOT. Now they are both blaming themselves. Please let it be a teeny weeny step back and TWO great big steps forward. They were making such good emotional progress. Oh and the kitten - just too cute for words. I absolutely adore this story and cannot wait for you next update.

Author's Response: Hahahahah, glad you liked the hotness - they're two very passionate people, equal in a lot of ways. Yup, they'll be taking 2 solid steps forward, no worries about that. A door has been opened now that just can't be closed. Thanks for the awesome review honey - luv u.

Reviewer: Record Breakers Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/19/2008 - 01:28 pm Title: Domestic Bliss

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!

Evil cliff hanger!~

Author's Response: LOL, it really was, huh? But I couldn't resist, I really couldn't. Thanks for the review hon - smooches.

Reviewer: jeanieofoz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/19/2008 - 01:24 pm Title: Domestic Bliss

Fantastic chaptter! Will we have to wait until next Sunday for the next update or is there a chance of getting our Murphy's Law fix earlier?

Author's Response: Well, to be honest, I'm going out of state due to family affairs at the moment, so I won't have a chance to update until perhaps sat. Sorry hon. But I will update this weekend, I promise. Thanks for the review darling and your patience. Hugs you tight.

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/19/2008 - 11:22 am Title: Domestic Bliss

The kitten was an excellent present and will be a reminder of Buffy's Valentine present. It's no wonder Spike's frustrated, but asking for a "happy ending," pushing Buffy over the line she's drawn, could have been disastrous.

The adolescent slap fight was more like a pushing match, heightening both their over stimulated emotions, keeping them both close. Their proximity, and both worked up to a fever pitch, it's no wonder she just dove in for the kiss. The result was erotic and intense. I can't wait to see if she offers to ride in to work together any time soon. My guess is she's mortified and looking at anything but Spike in the morning. She's opened the door, though, and there's no way Spike is just going to let her close it again.

Here's hoping this prompts a break up with Angel and more intense, impromptu kissing.

Author's Response: Oh indeed, the gift will be a constant reminder, but kittens are just so adorable, lol. The little slap-fest was like a foreplay of passion - bringing their inner most emotions to a head which Buffy acted on. It's safe to say that yeah, she's mortified at her behavior, but good things can come out of the bad, even if she doesn't know it yet, *winks*. And you're right, she has opened a door she can't close, thus next chapter they will have to talk. And yes, get ready for Angel to get the boot in a most hilarious manner, hee hee hee. Thanks for the awesome review darling - hugs you tight.

Reviewer: Mark Evans Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/19/2008 - 10:16 am Title: Domestic Bliss

What an evil chapter, lol. But I loved it :D . I have complete faith in where you're taking this story, so I'm sure this minor setback will be more than worth it, lol. Thanks for the wonderful update.

Author's Response: Giggles, glad you liked it boo and thanks for having faith in me - I'd never let our couple stray too far from their inteded path. Thanks for the review darling - hugs.

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/19/2008 - 10:08 am Title: Domestic Bliss

Aww, Spike's gift was so sweet. :D And I loved the massage scene. ;) Spike and Buffy are really passionate people so the slappage didn't offended me one bit... besides how could anything modeled after the Ben Stiller/monkey scene from Night at the Museum be offensive... lol! Fantastic chapter!

Author's Response: Good - glad you saw the slapping for what it was - an equal passion for eachother - hey, that was kind of canon too, huh? I'm so happy you enjoyed the chappy darling and thanks so much for the great review - smooches.

Reviewer: jamie_lady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/19/2008 - 06:31 am Title: Domestic Bliss

loved the update..and even though Buffy started it Spike shouldn't have slapped, but see why he did. Love Sebastian, what a lovley thougghtful gift, better than roses:)

more please

Author's Response: Yeah - but they are two passionate people unwilling to back down from either when things get heated - kinda like canon Buffy and SPike - but without the fists and her running from anything emotional. THanks for the review darling - hugs.

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/19/2008 - 05:54 am Title: Domestic Bliss

Silly Buffy.....he's rarely going to be more mad at you than himself, these days.

Love the kitten. We use the laser pointer, too. :)

Author's Response: Hehehehheeh, true. THey both kinda blame themselves, as they should, and it will help them in next chapter to make up, I promise. Giggles, I love using a laser pointer with my kitties too - its free entertainment. Thanks for the review boo, smooches to you.

Reviewer: Heidi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/19/2008 - 05:44 am Title: Domestic Bliss

Excellent chapter- as always. But yes, you are very evil for leaving us in the lurch.

I actually saw the slapping part as heavy foreplay - and thought it was hot (I might be a sick puppy for that - he he)

Looking forward to the 2 steps... ; )

Author's Response: Giggles... I'm kinda evil like that sometimes - it's the muses idea, yeah, that's it, I blame him, lol. And yes indeed, the slapping was very much foreplay for things to get outta hand, leading Buffy to act on what was most on her mind - her want for him. Thanks for the great review darling - kisses.

Reviewer: luxferi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/19/2008 - 05:13 am Title: Domestic Bliss

Wow..., first off, the kitten? Awwwwww!! Really appropriate since Spike calls her kitten all the time. :D Best of all, it doesn't wither and die like flowers. *LOL*

Second, the slapping. *LOL* No, I'm not gonna give you a hard time about it. At first I thought it's a "light slapping" thing, then as it wore on, I did wonder if it hurt. *cocks head* Hmm... then the moment Buffy started kissing him, I knew that it mustn't have hurt... much. :D In fact it's a little like canon Spike and Buffy, punching and hitting each other in the abandoned house before she pounced on him. :D But since they are superhumans and these Spike and Buffy are not, slapping would suffice. *LOL*

Third... OMG!! You're evil!! :D This may be one step back, but it's one HUGE step back and I feel comforted by Buffy's feelings - at least she acknowledged that she wants him. I'm soooo sitting at the edge of my seat now. More, please! Fantastic chapter!!!1!

Author's Response: Oh yeah, a kitten lasts a LOT longer than some measley flowers, hee hee. And no, the slapping didn't hurt, it was a simple back and forth trying to win like a couple of kids, hee hee. And yeah - it really was kinda canon but without the true violence. LMAO - it does seem like a major set back for them, I know. But you'll be surprised by next chapter - at least I hope so - as the door has opened and communication is a must for them now. THanks for the totaly awesome review boo - luv ya.

Reviewer: Sotia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/19/2008 - 04:58 am Title: Domestic Bliss

I think that kiss fried my brain, boo!!!

Where do I start? Guh, I couldn't stop going 'ohhh' and 'ahhh' and 'awww' and 'OMG' for the entire chapter! And don't get me started at how hard I giggled. At work. AGAIN!

The last scene was so intense, the slapping was so in character for them both, and the kiss... the kiss... *brain wanders off again*.... I'm here, I'm here!

Can't wait to see where they get from here ;-) You're brilliant, sister, and I love you to bits!

Author's Response: Hehehehhehe, that was some kiss huh? Oh bad bad Sotia - mixing business with fanfic again? LMFAO....... you are the very epitome of your own fic and god I luv u for it. Thanks for all your help my sister - luv u muchly.

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