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Reviewer: spikeluv84 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/11/2008 - 05:56 pm Title: Explicit Intentions

oh god, there's gonna be crap. lots and lots of crap. there's gonna be a fight and a break-up and some slimey Angel boasting. i can just see it now. i loved this chapter and that picture is awesome! kind of weird but awesome! can't wait for the next chapter tomorrow!! catching up, thank God! but this one chapter a day thing SUCKS!!!!

Monica

Reviewer: GoldenUsagi Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/22/2008 - 05:34 am Title: Explicit Intentions

Ooh, evil Angel, making Buffy doubt things... Though, I'm still wondering if she's a virgin or something....

Author's Response: Hahahhahahahhahaaha, well, I supose you'll have to wait and see. As for Angelus, he's just a big gint ass, lol. THanks for the review hon.

Reviewer: lori Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/21/2008 - 02:21 am Title: Explicit Intentions

Ahh! The great forehead still manages to prey on Buffy even after she gave him the kabbosh—just another sign of how well this story is going. The chapter showed great little couple-y moments, if only to fool the father-son creeps or point-out what’s absolutely great about Buffy and Spike’s relationship. Thanks again for bringing Cordy and Willy together. Even though they never shared a scene together in the Buffyverse, you’ve really flushed out the great snarking potential that would’ve been possible if Willy had wandered over to LA for the Angel series. That Angelus is so evil, that he doesn’t even need to mention the bet at this point.

Author's Response: YAY, glad you enjoyed the couply moments and of course Willy/Cordy. That really would have been neat to see those two interact on the series. And oh yes, I do love writing me some evil Angelus, hee hee. The bet will come out later as well, just when you least expect it, that's all I can say, *winks*. Thanks for the fab review darling - hugs and kisses.

Reviewer: Blackoberst Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2008 - 09:17 pm Title: Explicit Intentions

They really do song and dance a lot, don't they. Is there a part where Spike finally gets to tell his and Angelus' tale? And will there be fisticuffs?

Author's Response: LOL, yeah they do a lot of song and dance. As for Spike getting to tell her how he feels, well, I suppose its not a spoiler to tell you yes, this will be his chance. As for the O'Connor story, that's going to have to wait unfortunetly due to an unforseen set of events I have planned for next chapter. But it will come after that, I promise. Thanks for the lovely review swety - huggles.

Reviewer: Brittany Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/17/2008 - 03:48 am Title: Explicit Intentions

i am yelling at my screen 'DONT FALL FOR IT' when angel is trying to discredit spike. but i have a feeling buffy will have to learn the hardway that angel is full o'crap. cant wait for the next chappy, keep up the kickass work :)

Author's Response: LOL... yeah, she's gona learn the hard way for sure, sorry, but it will be over quickly so the spuffiness can begin, I promise boo. THanks for the fab review - huggles.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/16/2008 - 05:23 am Title: Explicit Intentions

Glad that they've at least done away with one of the O'Connors. Not so convinced that Angel wasn't able to do a bit of damage. Doesn't seem like complete sabotage, but I am looking forward to that moment when they finally get to give in. Fire works I'm sure. Loved the two chapters. Really exciting to log on and find two waiting for me! Thanks for making my night!

Author's Response: That's evil Angelus for ya, always meddling. As for firedworks, it'll be soon, I promise, just have to get the angst out of the way. So glad you were able to read both updates at once hon and that you liked them. Thanks so very much for the great review - snuggles for you sweety.

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/15/2008 - 04:38 pm Title: Explicit Intentions

You did an excellent job setting up the ball, and I could picture the two of them before I got to the picture. Angel and Liam are both very creepy. I can't believe Liam was so wasted he'd forgotten having insulted Buffy with his advances. At least Spike was right that staking his claim on Buffy shut down a repeat performance.

The evening did not turn into the romance fest I was expecting, but I hadn't figured Angel would be able to manipulate Buffy's opinion so easily. The lingering bet is still making me uneasy. Is Buffy going to come clean about what Angel implied and allow Spike to defend himself?

I'm looking forward to next week's answers.

Author's Response: Awesome, I luv to hear that you could imagine the setting and the characters even without the pic, thank you for the compliment. I know the evening didn't turn into what you expected, but it's my picky muse that wasn't happy with the original ending, sorry. He'll be trying to rework the second half of the chapter for ya and god willing post this weekend sweety. Thanks so much for the review - smooches to you.

Reviewer: Francine Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/15/2008 - 03:20 am Title: Explicit Intentions

I am so happy Buffy decided to trust Spike over Angel. Even if she does have some doubts about Spike I applaud her talking to him about Angel's accusations instead of keeping it to herself.

Author's Response: True - she at least did that much, even if Spike should have let her continue to talk instead of cutting er off, lol. So glad you liked the update darling and thanks so much for the review. Kisses.

Reviewer: quirks Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/14/2008 - 09:53 pm Title: Explicit Intentions

Woah! Wasn't expecting that turn of events. But I'm really curious about the Big OConnor secret that you've hinted at. Hmmm this is gonna set our Buffy back a great deal, isn't it? Though she has some hinted at secrets that she hasn't told. Maybe there can be a cleansing truth-telling thing? Angel is a total cad. And what's up with Willy? So many questions! That just means this fic has to keep going for a looooong time. *bats eyelashes*

Author's Response: The O'Connor thing is a bit of a twisted history, but then it wouldn't be Murphy's law without it, *winks*. That'll come out juuuuuuuuuuust a wee bit later... got a few plans up my sleeve first - mainly to do with revealing Buffy's source of insecurities/secrets first, *winks*. I know, I've created many questions here for this fic, but that's also part of the fub - to get readers thinking, guessing, theorizing... I'm so thrilled you liked the update hon and thanks so much for the awesome review. Smooches to you babe.

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/14/2008 - 04:01 pm Title: Explicit Intentions

Angel and his father are both jerks, I'm just glad Angel didn't bring up the bet. Loved the romantic hand kissage. And Cordy was really rockin' this chapter, I liked Willy too. :D Great update!

Author's Response: Yes they are - a real pair there huh? Nope, Angelus wouldn't dare bring up the bet, not now at least, not when he thinks he still has a chance to win. I'nm so happy you liked the hand kiss, willy & cordy and the chapter as a whole darling. I do hope to post this weekend but we'll see, a bit of RL stuff interfering with my time lately. THanks for the great reiew - snuggles.

Reviewer: Darkrivertempest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/14/2008 - 03:24 pm Title: Explicit Intentions

WOW, you DID cut it!

I really like what you did though, with switching some reactions and such, cause you know me - something like a WHAM BAM THANK YOU MA"AM just doesn't do it for me. Glad you took it this direction, even with your medicated self! (still think you need to self medicate more often to get way AWESOME results!) tee hee!

Sotia did an AWESOME job on that piccy, hun - They are very drool worthy!

And I LOVED the line: "And the Oscar goes to..." LMAO! I could SO hear that in my head with Angel's voice. Yes, I think Buffy can trust him with her heart - but I foresee (yeah right, Carrie, foresight? think not) trouble on the horizon...dum dum dummmm!

Great update hun and I can't wait to see what happens next! Thanks for the shout out, means a lot! Wuggles and love.

Author's Response: Yup - I butchered it from the original version, but of course you know why, *winks*. And hey, maybe my meds helped, lol. Sotia's manip was the shiznit, huh? Someday I'd like to learn how to manip - if I could squeeze more hours into my day and grow an extra set of hands that is, hee hee. Touble on the horizon you say.... hmmmm, maybe a bit, yeah, but alls well that ends well, right? GIggles - thanks for all your help on this hon and for reviewing - luv ya my twisted sista.

Reviewer: tammy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/14/2008 - 01:16 pm Title: Explicit Intentions

Loved the updates and I hope RL is going better for you.

Author's Response: THank you hon, glad you liked it. Yeah, things are just getting a bit busy around here lately, cutting into my free time, poo. But hopefully it'll calm down by the end of th week. Thanks again for the review sweety - hugs.

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/14/2008 - 11:35 am Title: Explicit Intentions

You know what I would love to do to that lying,manipulative rotten bastard, well you can't print what I would like to do to horrible. Great chapter TIna, good work.

Author's Response: HAHAHHAHAHHAA, that means I wrote just the right amount of evilness in there if you can't type the ass-kickage you have planned for Angelus, hee hee. THanks for the review darling - many hugs and kisses your way.

Reviewer: luxferi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/14/2008 - 07:20 am Title: Explicit Intentions

Eep! Angel pouncing again. Grrrr! It's a good thing Buffy doesn't seem to be buying it, but she has something to think about. Great chapter, as always. :)

Author's Response: Glad you liked the update hon. I couldn't resist throwing in a little angst, a little something for Buffy to think about - bad muse, giggles. THanks for the review - smoochies.

Reviewer: Sotia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/14/2008 - 06:36 am Title: Explicit Intentions

GAH! I could just strangle Angel or feed him his c**k and then decapitate him! Can't say I blame Buffy for wavering after what he told her, after all letting go is risky, but this is Spike, ffs! Go to him, woman, and let Angel be devoured by the green eyed monster!!! PLEASE!!!!

Boo you're amazing and this story pulls me further inside with every new chapter. You're totally evil for leaving it here, but you're right, it's a hell of a cliffie and has me - for one - begging for more! *bats eyelashes*

Mothing to thank me for, I'm your bitch for life and at your service always, even if I'm not on as much as usual. Anything I can do just e-mail me or ping me and I'll be with you asap!

Love you lots!!!!! *squishes*

Author's Response: SOTIA!!! Such language, But you know I had to throw him in the mix, keep it interesting, a bit of angst and all. And of course you never cease to amaze me with your abilities, both in writing adn your manips, I mean what an incredable job you did honey, everyone loved it as I knew they would - bows to you. Luv you to pieces my friend and hopefully we'll get to chat soon - smoochies.

Reviewer: jeanieofoz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/14/2008 - 03:18 am Title: Explicit Intentions

hope all the secrets are coming out soon. Angel and Spike are half brothers, aren't they? And Buffy is going to find out why Spike was such a bloody sexaholic at the beginning. Because he was always competing with Angel. You write an Angel I love to hate. Please make with the exposition of Spike's history for Buffy soon.

Author's Response: Each secret will actually pour out slowly one by one, but that's only b/c the it's all in my muses masterplan of timing, *winks*. Glad you enjoy my evil Angelus, hee hee, he is fun to write i have to admit. Thanks for the review darling - snuggles you tight.

Reviewer: pixiecorn Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/14/2008 - 02:32 am Title: Explicit Intentions

stupid angel and his gayness *glares*..... i vote we all kick him....

anyway lol, i loved the chapter:)

i hope you update again soon

i'm loving it:)...... Keep up the awesome work:)


Author's Response: Hahahahahha, i think everyone loathes him at this point, which is good, it was the whole point. Thanks for the review darling - huggles.

Reviewer: burnkitty Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/14/2008 - 02:25 am Title: Explicit Intentions

Oh this chapter was great! There was too spuffyness...the tender kiss on the hand OMG *faints*
Stupid Angel curses to him! But it wouldn't be Murphy's law if something didn't go wrong! Sotia's manip was amazing so congrats to her. I think u spelt Buble` (it was spelt Bubble) wrong but I also took it as Cordy being Cordy. Wasn't sure who it was until I recognised the name of the song.
But honey this story is AMAZING and I am so glad I clicked myself in for the ride. Can't wait to read whats next and I hope RL starts treating you right!

Author's Response: YAY - glad you liked the hand kissage - I couldn't resist. And omg - I had a funny feeling I spelt Buble wrong, but ya know - it works either way, whether cordy says it wrong for humors Thanks for the totally awesome review and of course the RL well wishes... sometimes life just gets busy - ughh. I'll try and update as soon as I can darling - again, thanks so much for the review - hugs.

Reviewer: Debbie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/14/2008 - 02:02 am Title: Explicit Intentions

ok, this is the second time I've written, I don't know what happened to the first one, in cyberspace I assume. so I loved the chapter, and that Spike was all protective of Buffy with the big bad wolves. and Angelus is such a prick, using Buffy's tragedy to try and move in, that is low for even him, he is a snake in the grass..........I hope Buffy sees thru him. Great picture by the way. And I loved Buffy saying she "saved the best for last", always my theory on things. As for updating, you have had a lot of things going on lately, take care of you, I hope things are ok, I will be here and will say a little prayer for you tonight. Take care and many thanks.........hugs Debbie

Author's Response: Awww, sorry about that disappearence into cyber space, but I'm so glad to hear you enjoyed the update. Yup, the big bad is in full protective mode of his girl, *winks*. I have to admit though, I really enjoy writing evil Angelus and Liam - it makes for the riht amount of angst, lol. Thanks for saying a prayer for me boo - life just seems to get busy sometimes. I'll try to update asap and thanks for such a fab review. Hugs and kisses.

Reviewer: kudagirl Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/14/2008 - 01:06 am Title: Explicit Intentions

First off thanks for Willy and Cordy. Love them together, but now wonder who Willy thinks would be better for Cordy.

Angel's a jerk , period.

The manip is beautiful. Love it.

Hope Buffy doesn't let Angel cause too much angst.

Author's Response: Hahahhaahha, glad you liked the chappy and pic, and of course that I wrote angleus evil enough for you to hate. It means I did my job well, giggles. Thanks for the fab review boo - smooches to you.

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/14/2008 - 12:34 am Title: Explicit Intentions

Yeah, for VW, she might have chosen this: http://www.verawang.com/maids/Default.aspx?grp=Weddings&sub=FL#MA-FL-112 which also probably would have knocked Spike off his feet. ;) I thought I recognized the design of the dress in the pic.

She's handled Spike so well, how can she not see through Angel? Maybe she needs Cordy there to see...

I've been pretty sure for quite a while that Spike lived with the O'Connors, or went to school with Liam, as there's too much implied history. Son of one of Liam's dalliances, perhaps?



Author's Response: niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiice, I like that, thanks for the link! And I'm glad to see you theorizing on the O'Connor and SPike history. When the truth comes out, it won't be a huge surprise, but it will explain a lot, *winks*. As for Buffy, well, she's never had a reason not to trust Angel, so she's inda torn in her thoughts right now - poor deluded thing, lol. Thanks for the review darling - snuggles.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/14/2008 - 12:33 am Title: Explicit Intentions

Angel, true to form, is messing things up for Buffy and Spike. Now Buffy is back to her original question about whether she can trust Spike! Can't wait until the next update!

Author's Response: Indeed he is, indeed he is, evil as always. Thanks for the review sweety - I do hope to update this weekend - hugs.

Reviewer: IT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/14/2008 - 12:01 am Title: Explicit Intentions

I knew Angel would get his talons in there. Buffy seems to be going with her instincts, though, and I hope she continues.

Great update, thanks.
Good luck with the second half.

Author's Response: Ohh yes, Angelus can never resist an opportunity if it present itself - evil ass that he is, lol. Thanks for the review, boo, glad you liked the update. Smooches.

Reviewer: Dusty273 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/13/2008 - 11:50 pm Title: Explicit Intentions

Can I kill Angel now? Getting in the way of Spuffy love is a no-no or should be. I just hate how he managed to prey on Buffy's vulnerabilities and make her doubt of Spike, although knowing her it wasn't all that difficult, was it? Loved the way you ended it, it makes a whole more sense and of course loved the rest of the chapter, the descriptions of Buffy and Spike, the hotel, the wonderful manip Sotia made, it was all gorgeous. I'm looking forward to more! *snuggles* Love you, sweetie!

Author's Response: LOL - go ahead, kill him, I think everyone wants to, hee hee. He really is an evil bastard but soooooooo fun to write that way - as YOU well know my friend, *winks*. Thanks for all your help on this boo and for the beta before you left for your little getaway - it meant alot to me. Luv you mi hermana.

Reviewer: Fallinfaery Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/13/2008 - 11:30 pm Title: Explicit Intentions

I loathe Angel with the passion of a thousand suns. He is such a manipulative slug.
Please don't let Buffy once again question Spike's intentions. I really want some Spuffy action. Spike deserves it not to mention Buffy.

Author's Response: Hahhahahahaha, that got me giggling how much you bhate angel - but of course that means i wrote him exactly the way i wanted him to come across. As for spuffy action... not too much longer, i promise. I'm thrilled you liked the update sweety and thanks so much for the great reivew. Hugs.

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