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Reviewer: Mars Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2014 - 08:00 pm Title: There’s a First Time for Everything: Part 2

Awww! This story has been a wonderful ride! I've had a great time, thank you so much!

i wish you'd come back, regardless of how lungs its been, and finish their happy ending :)

Hope you're doing great and that life's treating you well!

Reviewer: Kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/09/2014 - 09:14 am Title: There’s a First Time for Everything: Part 2

Remembered this story recently. Didn't remember it ISN'T finished, yet. Where are you, lovely IBE? We miss you. Hope you're well!!

Reviewer: Kirsty Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/10/2011 - 11:55 am Title: There’s a First Time for Everything: Part 2

Still ,defenetly, one of the best stories there is.

Reviewer: rkm Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/01/2011 - 01:11 am Title: There’s a First Time for Everything: Part 2

re-read this, and it's just as amazing as it was the first time!!

even spike was a complete a@#hole from the get go, the slowness of his transformation, and the intensity is just BEAUTIFULLY written. again, i can count on one hand my favorite authors and you are definitely one of them.

thank you so very much for sharing this powerful story; it has everything a reader could possibly want. IT'S SUCH A GREAT ONION STORY!!!

i love willy and buffy's relationship - close but not uncomfortably so (and gotta love him as cordy's date to the ball). and i love cordy/buffy friendship; god bless cordy, telling things like they are ...

you've written this with such grace and humor - it brings me to tears sometimes.

(i'm so very, very sorry about this time in your life. you have new fans that are you sending you well wishes ...)

Reviewer: Shardallinee Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/02/2010 - 02:21 pm Title: There’s a First Time for Everything: Part 2

love the banner, love the plot and absolutely love your writing! :)
can't wait to read more when you get the chance to finnish it! :) i couldn't wait to leave work every day just to read this fic some more when i came home =)
now i'm off to read In the Army Now again... which i totally forgot to review as i just remembered.
I hope all is well with you :)

Reviewer: SpikesGirl Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2010 - 06:59 pm Title: There’s a First Time for Everything: Part 2

Liked ur story so much. You are such a talented writer. Much love and success to you. Thanks for the fic.

Reviewer: iris Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/21/2010 - 04:13 am Title: There’s a First Time for Everything: Part 2

Please don't leave us hanging! This is my favorite ,now....Please continue!

Author's Response: I promise not to leave anyone hanging. I'm just right in the middle of moving from the Midwest to the East coast and allll the tedious work that involves both before & after with two little ones in tote - also nearing the end of my divorce, a big ball of ugly, melting wax that needs taking care of. But never fear, it will be finished, if not right away, within the next 3 months. Thanks so much for the review and I'm thrilled you've enjoyed the fic so far - smooches.

Reviewer: iris Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/03/2010 - 08:08 pm Title: There’s a First Time for Everything: Part 2

I just read this piece for the first time; I love it! Your characters are just perfect for a twist on the original. Any chance of continuing the story? Thanks so much!

Reviewer: lynn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/21/2009 - 04:57 pm Title: There’s a First Time for Everything: Part 2

loved it. took them long enough. now I wonder what the final obstacle they have to get over is.

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/06/2008 - 02:43 am Title: There’s a First Time for Everything: Part 2

Had to come back and reread chapter 28...

Waiting patiently..

Reviewer: spikeluv84 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/17/2008 - 01:59 pm Title: There’s a First Time for Everything: Part 2

damn....i wish my first time had went that well!! go Buffy!!!! no this chapter did not disappoint. although, i will tell u something that hopefully will make u laugh for a minute.

i'm sitting in a library. reading this! do you know how red my face is right now?? and no, it's not a nice big library. it's a small, rinky "they know my name when i walk in the door (which is kind of nice)" library. and guess where the computers are located! right in front of the big ass librarian's desk!! do u know what it's like to try to hide a monitor from their eyes? and scroll it up and down real fast so they can't read it. oh, and do try to keep your place! u're real talented if you can do that!! and let me tell ya, as much as i've anticipated this! scrolling randomly and skim reading S-U-C-K-S!!! plus reading it and watching the reflection in the monitor so you can try to keep a bead on them is REALLY fun too!!!


otherwise, i loved this chapter and am all caught up!! can't wait for the next one!!!

Monica

p.s. please feel free to share my embarrassment, as i am 24 and feel 12 at the moment!

Reviewer: Vanilla Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/07/2008 - 11:32 pm Title: There’s a First Time for Everything: Part 2

I've been falling back on my reviewing lately, and I didn't get a chance to tell you how sorry I am you're having to go through something so horrible. I'm sending positive vibes your way! *hugs*

And this chapter was just incredible! It's definitely a struggle to write virgin Buffy but I think you did the most amazing job. I loved the sweetness, and how their emotions were so clear. Wonderful chapter, sweetie!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/04/2008 - 11:41 pm Title: There’s a First Time for Everything: Part 2

Great virgin Buffy chapter. Liked the way is was a tiny thing and not her reason for being, too. Much more believable that way. Truly enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing.

Reviewer: Debbie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/04/2008 - 08:56 pm Title: There’s a First Time for Everything: Part 2

Well sweetie, I just had a smoke, and I have to say I sure as hell wish my first went that well........you may not think you have a flair for virgin Buffy, but you nailed every girl's dream. So disappoint? Gaaaaaaaa NO. Great writing as usual.
I am hoping things are looking up. You know we all are keeping you in our thoughts and prayers. I hope you and the kiddies get everything and then some. What ever Bozo brain's deal is, he is a jerk. Take care, I send you hugs and warm feelings Debbie

Reviewer: Debbie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/04/2008 - 08:55 pm Title: There’s a First Time for Everything: Part 2

Well sweetie, I just had a smoke, and I have to say I sure as hell wish my first went that well........you may not think you have a flair for virgin Buffy, but you nailed every girl's dream. So disappoint? Gaaaaaaaa NO. Great writing as usual.
I am hoping things are looking up. You know we all are keeping you in our thoughts and prayers. I hope you and the kiddies get everything and then some. What ever Bozo brain's deal is, he is a jerk. Take care, I send you hugs and warm feelings Debbie

Reviewer: Debbie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/04/2008 - 08:54 pm Title: There’s a First Time for Everything: Part 2

Well sweetie, I just had a smoke, and I have to say I sure as hell wish my first went that well........you may not think you have a flair for virgin Buffy, but you nailed every girl's dream. So disappoint? Gaaaaaaaa NO. Great writing as usual.
I am hoping things are looking up. You know we all are keeping you in our thoughts and prayers. I hope you and the kiddies get everything and then some. What ever Bozo brain's deal is, he is a jerk. Take care, I send you hugs and warm feelings Debbie

Reviewer: Braydie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/04/2008 - 07:50 pm Title: There’s a First Time for Everything: Part 2

I think you write a wonderfully realistic virgin Buffy. Altho' she is going to be sore as hell in the morning... ;)*

Reviewer: kudagirl Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/04/2008 - 02:46 am Title: There’s a First Time for Everything: Part 2

Dang, now I need a smoke. That was, well, just hot. If this is what happens when your muse isn't working, I can't wait till he opens up.

Reviewer: astrodex Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/04/2008 - 12:46 am Title: There’s a First Time for Everything: Part 2

How perfect was that? Absolutely.

So worth the wait. If that is what your muse does while on hiatus, no wonder I think you're a Spuffy Goddess.

Reviewer: luxferi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/03/2008 - 07:49 pm Title: There’s a First Time for Everything: Part 2

What on earth are you on about, woman? This is FANTASTIC! For the most part I love it, sometimes I feel it was kinda awkward but I was thinking it's just your nervousness showing through? I don't know. But you have no reason to be. You're an accomplished writer and I have enjoyed and loved all your fics so far - and I think this fic is one of your best ones yet. I'm a little saddened though - I can feel the ending drawing closer and I hate to part with this fic.

Love the chapter, IBE. It's pretty amazing!

Reviewer: dampersandspoons Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/03/2008 - 01:50 am Title: There’s a First Time for Everything: Part 2

So...I'm trying to figure out WHY you don't want to write a virgin Buffy again when you clearly handled it with gusto here. All I kept thinking while reading this, and I hope you find this as amusing as I do, was, "And on the 28th chapter...there was sex. And there was much rejoicing."

I'm glad Spike was so tender here, not wanting to make any part of it uncomfortable for her and even brought her off before hand. What a guy! We can't all say that for our first times, can we? That is the beauty of fan fic, and the reason I heart you like a long lost sibling that looks nothing like my family but has the same kind of awesome that we look for in a family member. Thank you for a wonderful, beautiful chapter that made me go squee in my pants, but not literally because that would have been a serious mess to clean up. Well done, yet again!

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/02/2008 - 01:30 pm Title: There’s a First Time for Everything: Part 2

Spike's need to make Buffy's first time as easy and wonderful as possible seemed a gargantuan taks, but this chapter certainly delivered. He was conscience of her every step of the way, never losing himself to lust. It was erotic and romantic for them both. Buffy's virginity added a level of tension that was lovely to read.


Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/02/2008 - 09:24 am Title: There’s a First Time for Everything: Part 2

You certainly didn't need to worry about this chapter, you did a perfect job of de-virginizing Buffy... lol! Spike was sweet, tender and caring and Buffy was very lucky to have him. :D Excellent update!

Reviewer: IT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/02/2008 - 05:49 am Title: There’s a First Time for Everything: Part 2

Oh. my. god!!!!!! I'm panting!!! :) That was just frickin' awesome, babe!!! Don't know how you do it, but please keep on writing. Have to go and change my undies now... and maybe find a cigarette somewhere, but I don't smoke, so not sure where I'll get one... and I might even need a cold shower... or a vibrating friend....

Reviewer: Taylormaid Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/02/2008 - 04:40 am Title: There’s a First Time for Everything: Part 2

HOT DAMN!!!! The muse is on hiatus and you still came up with THAT!!! Sweetie, you don't NEED to lure him back, you're doing just fine on your own!!!!

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