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Reviewer: Sotia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/14/2008 - 06:36 am Title: Explicit Intentions

GAH! I could just strangle Angel or feed him his c**k and then decapitate him! Can't say I blame Buffy for wavering after what he told her, after all letting go is risky, but this is Spike, ffs! Go to him, woman, and let Angel be devoured by the green eyed monster!!! PLEASE!!!!

Boo you're amazing and this story pulls me further inside with every new chapter. You're totally evil for leaving it here, but you're right, it's a hell of a cliffie and has me - for one - begging for more! *bats eyelashes*

Mothing to thank me for, I'm your bitch for life and at your service always, even if I'm not on as much as usual. Anything I can do just e-mail me or ping me and I'll be with you asap!

Love you lots!!!!! *squishes*

Author's Response: SOTIA!!! Such language, But you know I had to throw him in the mix, keep it interesting, a bit of angst and all. And of course you never cease to amaze me with your abilities, both in writing adn your manips, I mean what an incredable job you did honey, everyone loved it as I knew they would - bows to you. Luv you to pieces my friend and hopefully we'll get to chat soon - smoochies.

Reviewer: jeanieofoz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/14/2008 - 03:18 am Title: Explicit Intentions

hope all the secrets are coming out soon. Angel and Spike are half brothers, aren't they? And Buffy is going to find out why Spike was such a bloody sexaholic at the beginning. Because he was always competing with Angel. You write an Angel I love to hate. Please make with the exposition of Spike's history for Buffy soon.

Author's Response: Each secret will actually pour out slowly one by one, but that's only b/c the it's all in my muses masterplan of timing, *winks*. Glad you enjoy my evil Angelus, hee hee, he is fun to write i have to admit. Thanks for the review darling - snuggles you tight.

Reviewer: pixiecorn Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/14/2008 - 02:32 am Title: Explicit Intentions

stupid angel and his gayness *glares*..... i vote we all kick him....

anyway lol, i loved the chapter:)

i hope you update again soon

i'm loving it:)...... Keep up the awesome work:)


Author's Response: Hahahahahha, i think everyone loathes him at this point, which is good, it was the whole point. Thanks for the review darling - huggles.

Reviewer: burnkitty Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/14/2008 - 02:25 am Title: Explicit Intentions

Oh this chapter was great! There was too spuffyness...the tender kiss on the hand OMG *faints*
Stupid Angel curses to him! But it wouldn't be Murphy's law if something didn't go wrong! Sotia's manip was amazing so congrats to her. I think u spelt Buble` (it was spelt Bubble) wrong but I also took it as Cordy being Cordy. Wasn't sure who it was until I recognised the name of the song.
But honey this story is AMAZING and I am so glad I clicked myself in for the ride. Can't wait to read whats next and I hope RL starts treating you right!

Author's Response: YAY - glad you liked the hand kissage - I couldn't resist. And omg - I had a funny feeling I spelt Buble wrong, but ya know - it works either way, whether cordy says it wrong for humors Thanks for the totally awesome review and of course the RL well wishes... sometimes life just gets busy - ughh. I'll try and update as soon as I can darling - again, thanks so much for the review - hugs.

Reviewer: Debbie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/14/2008 - 02:02 am Title: Explicit Intentions

ok, this is the second time I've written, I don't know what happened to the first one, in cyberspace I assume. so I loved the chapter, and that Spike was all protective of Buffy with the big bad wolves. and Angelus is such a prick, using Buffy's tragedy to try and move in, that is low for even him, he is a snake in the grass..........I hope Buffy sees thru him. Great picture by the way. And I loved Buffy saying she "saved the best for last", always my theory on things. As for updating, you have had a lot of things going on lately, take care of you, I hope things are ok, I will be here and will say a little prayer for you tonight. Take care and many thanks.........hugs Debbie

Author's Response: Awww, sorry about that disappearence into cyber space, but I'm so glad to hear you enjoyed the update. Yup, the big bad is in full protective mode of his girl, *winks*. I have to admit though, I really enjoy writing evil Angelus and Liam - it makes for the riht amount of angst, lol. Thanks for saying a prayer for me boo - life just seems to get busy sometimes. I'll try to update asap and thanks for such a fab review. Hugs and kisses.

Reviewer: kudagirl Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/14/2008 - 01:06 am Title: Explicit Intentions

First off thanks for Willy and Cordy. Love them together, but now wonder who Willy thinks would be better for Cordy.

Angel's a jerk , period.

The manip is beautiful. Love it.

Hope Buffy doesn't let Angel cause too much angst.

Author's Response: Hahahhaahha, glad you liked the chappy and pic, and of course that I wrote angleus evil enough for you to hate. It means I did my job well, giggles. Thanks for the fab review boo - smooches to you.

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/14/2008 - 12:34 am Title: Explicit Intentions

Yeah, for VW, she might have chosen this: http://www.verawang.com/maids/Default.aspx?grp=Weddings&sub=FL#MA-FL-112 which also probably would have knocked Spike off his feet. ;) I thought I recognized the design of the dress in the pic.

She's handled Spike so well, how can she not see through Angel? Maybe she needs Cordy there to see...

I've been pretty sure for quite a while that Spike lived with the O'Connors, or went to school with Liam, as there's too much implied history. Son of one of Liam's dalliances, perhaps?



Author's Response: niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiice, I like that, thanks for the link! And I'm glad to see you theorizing on the O'Connor and SPike history. When the truth comes out, it won't be a huge surprise, but it will explain a lot, *winks*. As for Buffy, well, she's never had a reason not to trust Angel, so she's inda torn in her thoughts right now - poor deluded thing, lol. Thanks for the review darling - snuggles.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/14/2008 - 12:33 am Title: Explicit Intentions

Angel, true to form, is messing things up for Buffy and Spike. Now Buffy is back to her original question about whether she can trust Spike! Can't wait until the next update!

Author's Response: Indeed he is, indeed he is, evil as always. Thanks for the review sweety - I do hope to update this weekend - hugs.

Reviewer: IT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/14/2008 - 12:01 am Title: Explicit Intentions

I knew Angel would get his talons in there. Buffy seems to be going with her instincts, though, and I hope she continues.

Great update, thanks.
Good luck with the second half.

Author's Response: Ohh yes, Angelus can never resist an opportunity if it present itself - evil ass that he is, lol. Thanks for the review, boo, glad you liked the update. Smooches.

Reviewer: Dusty273 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/13/2008 - 11:50 pm Title: Explicit Intentions

Can I kill Angel now? Getting in the way of Spuffy love is a no-no or should be. I just hate how he managed to prey on Buffy's vulnerabilities and make her doubt of Spike, although knowing her it wasn't all that difficult, was it? Loved the way you ended it, it makes a whole more sense and of course loved the rest of the chapter, the descriptions of Buffy and Spike, the hotel, the wonderful manip Sotia made, it was all gorgeous. I'm looking forward to more! *snuggles* Love you, sweetie!

Author's Response: LOL - go ahead, kill him, I think everyone wants to, hee hee. He really is an evil bastard but soooooooo fun to write that way - as YOU well know my friend, *winks*. Thanks for all your help on this boo and for the beta before you left for your little getaway - it meant alot to me. Luv you mi hermana.

Reviewer: Fallinfaery Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/13/2008 - 11:30 pm Title: Explicit Intentions

I loathe Angel with the passion of a thousand suns. He is such a manipulative slug.
Please don't let Buffy once again question Spike's intentions. I really want some Spuffy action. Spike deserves it not to mention Buffy.

Author's Response: Hahhahahahaha, that got me giggling how much you bhate angel - but of course that means i wrote him exactly the way i wanted him to come across. As for spuffy action... not too much longer, i promise. I'm thrilled you liked the update sweety and thanks so much for the great reivew. Hugs.

Reviewer: dampersandspoons Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/13/2008 - 10:57 pm Title: Explicit Intentions

Ok, first of all, i read the chapter title and got a little too excited. Second of all...HE NOTICED THAT SHE PAINTED HER NAILS TO MATCH THE DRESS. *dies* Then..."everything's fine now" made me tear up! Because she looooves him and Spike's there to make her feel better! And I freaking love Cordy. (By the way, I'm logging my reading experience as I read if you haven't noticed. haha!) And why is Angel such a cock sucker? Such a slimy, slithering manipulative prick!! But oh, how he helps a story, dammit! *giggles* And you're evil, because after reading this, I saw nothing explicit!!! *pouty* Ok, ok, I'll patiently await your next installment because you're like freaking crack and I can't get enough of it. Good work, Sotia! That manip rocks and they are so cute!! And I heart you Tina but if you make Buffy freak out and believe Angel I might never speak to you again. And by not speaking to you again, I just mean the regular lull in conversation that happens between updates, haha! MORE PLEASE!!

Author's Response: LMFAO... yup, he 'actually' noticed her toenails. Of course when you're really into someone during the courting process, those small things are noticeable - give SPike a few years with her and he won't notice a haircut, LMAO. And awwwwwww, glad I could touch the cockles of your heart with Buffy's admission of everything is fine now - even if the ending of the chappy suggests otherwise - eeeep! YAY - so glad you like Cordy and of course hate Angelus... I've always enjoyed writing him as the evil prick, hahahahahhaaha. Sorry about the non-explicitnes, but really, the intentions were explicit in the sense of Angel's towards Spike and Spike's towards Buffy. Talk about me being crack, LMAO - I'm anxiously awaiting for you to update too my dear - smooches. You're idle threats will do nothing to sway my muse, *inserts evil laughter here* - but of course alls wel that ends well, *wink-wink* - you'll see. Love ya babes and thanks for the awesome review.

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/13/2008 - 10:25 pm Title: Explicit Intentions

First and foremost, I couldn't get over the fact that Spike noticed that Buffy had changed the colour of her toenails!! My husband wouldn't notice that in a million years. Secondly, is Michael Buble universally known as Michael Bubble? Thirdly, would Angel please just drop off of the face of the Earth. Finally, I loved it.

Author's Response: HAHAHAHHAHAHH, he did indeed notice, but then again he's sooooooo in love he notices every little thing. Hee hee - Bubble vs Buble - either way, it makes for a comedic Cordy to get it wrong. Yeah, I think everyone is totally hating on Angel right now, but at least I got the right amount of tension thrown in there, lol. Thanks for the fab review boo - kisses n hugs.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/13/2008 - 10:03 pm Title: Explicit Intentions

:) Spike sure thought that waiting for Buffy was worth it, the way she looked.
Willy... wonder whom he has in mind for Cordelia. Angel? Maybe then he would stop hunting Buffy.
Stunning dress :) And Grrr to Angelus. Now Buffy has doubts again. Hopefully Spike can convince her he really wants her and wants to keep her.
Take care till next time.

Author's Response: Hahahaha, just wait and see the shocker of who Willy has in mind for Cordy - an unikely match but for the right reasons, *winks*. Yeah, Angel's an ass, but its so fun to write him that way and he does provide the right amount of angst. Glad you enjoyed the update hon and I'll try and set things right within next chapter. THanks for the review hon - huggles.

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/13/2008 - 09:49 pm Title: Explicit Intentions

More "Doubt Seeds" planted by our dear Angelus.. and when the bet leaks out...

Thought there would be a more positive relationship development between our two in this chapter... Oh, well .. waiting patiently for that promised Spuffy loving..

Author's Response: Ah yes - and when it does leak out... *evil laugh*. Well, the night is still young yet for our couple and of course when the spuffyness come around, it'll be more worth it, i promise. THanks for the review darling and for being so patient. Smooches.

Reviewer: jamies_lady Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/13/2008 - 09:49 pm Title: Explicit Intentions

wonderful update, nasty angel....and horrid liam..cookies for the muse and more please

Author's Response: Hahahahahahhahaha, thank you boo. Hopefully I'll be able to post this weekend. Hugs you tight and wishes for more DSotH.

Reviewer: sanityfair Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/13/2008 - 09:29 pm Title: Explicit Intentions

Lovely chapter, the descriptions were phenomenal! Hate that even a tiny bit of doubt has been planted in Buffy's mind. Sweetie, I'm always happy to see an update for the is fabulous story, whenever you're able to post, so don't worry about days of the week! Take care!

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed the atmoshpere of it - that was a toughie to get written out properly. Yeah, had to write a bit of angst in there, just for good measure, giggles, sorry, but I do so love writing evil angelus. THanks for the review boo and for being understanding about my time constraints - hugs you tight.

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/08/2008 - 09:02 pm Title: Conversations

Cordelia having Spike's number is a delight. He's a romantic little thing, isn't he? It's charming.

This made me laugh out loud: “Have to admit though… I kinda like this position. You. Grindin’ your heel into my chest. Kinky an-OUCH-okay-alright, I’ll stop.” Of course Buffy would take direction a little too well. I also love that it led to “S’pose `m young enough that you can train me to your likin’.” Whee! The flirting and shy smiles are reaching critical mass.

Finally broaching the subject of a relationship was a huge step, even if it left Spike confused. Buffy's obviously come to a decision, and I can't imagine a better time to bring this relationship to a new level. Formal wear and dancing are an excellent way to ramp up the sexual tension. I'm looking forward to it.

Author's Response: Hehehehehe, glad you enjoyed the little comedic moments - I love including humor as a way of keeping things light. Indeed emotions are starting to run high between our couple and Buffy took a brave step in having that conversation with Spike. You can bet, despite Spike's confusion, he's determined to make the ball a night to remember, *winks*. Thank you so much for the awesome review sweety - huggles and kisses.

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/08/2008 - 10:25 am Title: Conversations

Oh, I loved the photo :) I really like your Cordy, our favourite couple could need some more help, but it's up to them now ;) Looking forward to the ball, darling! *hugs*

Author's Response: Isn't the photo awesome? It was love at first sight when I saw it and I so did the snoopy dance when Mel said I could use it. And yay for you liking my Cordy - she can be so funny to write, all with the quips but a heart of gold at the same time. Thank you so very much for the review darling - snuggles.

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/08/2008 - 10:10 am Title: When Love and Death Embrace

Finally we're getting somewhere ;) *I'm not complaining* That was so sweet, the "I don't need to pretend” part and sleeping together :) *now I'm off to next chapter*

Author's Response: LOL - indeed they're getting somewhere now. GLad you liked the sweetness at the end boo and thanks for the review - smooche to you.

Reviewer: quirks Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/07/2008 - 08:27 pm Title: Conversations

Dude! That's the best kind of cliffhanger. As always, Cordy is hilarious. I love that Buffy had the courage to start the conversation - even if she didn't actually say much, it was huge for her to even attempt it. But then she just walked away! I just sat here and glared at my monitor for a bit after reading that. *shakes head* But Spike will figure out what to do next. I'm SO looking forward to The Ball.

Author's Response: Squeeeeeeeee, glad you liked the cliffy. My muse can either be evil, or good - depends on his mood, hee hee. It took a lot of courage on Buffy's part to have that conversation with SPike, but of course it means that she's getting ready to take that plunge. As for her walking away, well - typical thinky Buffy had to process what Spike told her - she's still gunshy despite her feelings. And yes, SPike will know what to do in next week's update at the ball, *winks*. Thanks for the awesome review my friend. Huggles and snuggles you tight.

Reviewer: Sotia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/07/2008 - 12:00 pm Title: Conversations

SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE I LOVE DETERMINED SPIKE!!!! *does happy dance twirling round and round till she's dizzy*

God, I never know what to put in my reviews on ML; all your chapters are so full of funny parts and deep parts and hot parts and GAH! You're amazing boo!!! You managed to take a playboy and gradually put a soul in him never once letting the story become anything less than believable. You managed to take a woman that's obviously been hurt and let her open up bit by bit, and become more accepting of the fact she just may need someone... may need Spike. I bow to you my boo! Love you!!! *smooches*

Author's Response: Hahahahahaha, so do I. Love when he gets something in his head and just goes for it. Awwwww, you're so sweet to me boo with the compliments and of course your fics hold lots and lots of humor, MAJOR hotness and I've a feeling in MBWP, we're gonna see some deep emotional parts soon - can't wait for that darling. It's funny how I took a playboy Spike and made him into a man and you've taken a dormant spike beneath Will and made him come forward, hehheehehehhhe. Lve you my darling sister - big hugs and kisses boo.

Reviewer: MarzBar Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2008 - 09:30 pm Title: Conversations

Still loving this story. I usually prefer Spike the Vamp but this is a wonderful exception.

Author's Response: Thank you so much boo, I mean it. I know a lot of readers prefer vamp-Spike, and I suppose someday I should try writing one... alas, I'm so addicted to the endless possibilities all-human fics provide, that I just need to think of a vamp-Spike plot that's original, and its a hard thing to do with so many out there that are so wonderfully written. Thanks again for the review darling - hugs.

Reviewer: Vanilla Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2008 - 09:23 pm Title: Conversations

Aww. He's fallen so hard, so fast, as has she. Looking forward to the intense Spuffyness! They're going to spontaneously combust if they have to wait much longer. As will I. ;) So fantastic! *hugs*

Author's Response: Indeed they have, now for them to get their act together and 'get-together', lol. But soon, I promise, *winks* - can't have them exploding from the UST, lol.. So glad you enjoyed the update my friend, thanks for the fab review - huggles you tight.

Reviewer: astrodex Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2008 - 07:53 pm Title: Conversations

I can do intense. I like intense. I can't wait for intense.

Bring on the intense.

Great chapter.

Author's Response: LMAO - ROFL.... I so love your review darling, omg... so what you're saying is, you're okay with intense? heheheheheheheheh. Love you boo and thanks for the awesome review - kisses.

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