Date: 08/08/2008 - 12:24 am Title: Chapter 13. Bitter Sweetness
i loved this chapter - it had the best moments between Spike and Buffy
Date: 07/17/2008 - 07:36 pm Title: Chapter 13. Bitter Sweetness
He beamed at her, and her heart just about stopped beating in her chest for a second before resuming its mad gallop the next when he pounced on her, lifting her from the chair and into his strong arms, twirling with her around the room.
Buffy could only hang onto him and giggle at his boyish antics, feeling lighter, happier than she’d felt in a long time.
Her bubbling laughter was music to his ears, the way she clung to him a balsam to his soul. And for the first time since this all started, he dared to believe she might be starting to feel for him at least a speck of what he already felt for her..............
It's official and the golden award for most sweetest moment goes to.......................MARI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOL! That was soooo cute and yes it will last me for a week..................then again maybe not! You seriously need to get to writing more sweets! *hugs* I see an update but need more now! LOL! L8RZ!
Author's Response: Awww, that's too sweet of you. I'm glad you thought it cute. It was a delight to write them like that. Thank you so much for your very kind words!
Date: 06/27/2008 - 04:04 am Title: Chapter 13. Bitter Sweetness
i only just found this story and let me say WOW.... i love it:)
i hope you update again soon... i'm really looking forward to what the next chapter holds:) hehe
keep up the awesome writing:):)
Date: 06/25/2008 - 03:42 pm Title: Chapter 13. Bitter Sweetness
wes' reaction to the Earl's arrival was stellar. His seething jealousy bodes well for Spike and Fred's plan to work soon. Here's hoping he doesn't go through a bunch more glassware before coming to his senses.
Buffy has finally just given in. She's smitten, too, and Spike is on the road to happily ever after. I'm sure Angel will show up, throwing a spanner in the works. It's wonderful watching this all unfold.
Date: 06/25/2008 - 07:02 am Title: Chapter 13. Bitter Sweetness
Oh, Mari, this chapter was so beautiful! My heart broke for Wes but I can't blame Fred one little bit for resorting to such measures to make him admit his feelings for her. The man IS too proud for his own good.
And Spike and Buffy? *swoons* The chemistry between them is so intense I really am proud of them for managing to hold back so far.
You are an awesome writer, my friend, and a more than wonderful person. I, for one, will always be waiting patiently for more of your stories! I'm here if there's anything I can do, *huggles*
Date: 06/25/2008 - 06:07 am Title: Chapter 13. Bitter Sweetness
Poor Wes, but this will do him good ;) I loved the interaction between Buffy and Spike, and she seems to have forgotten about Angel, that's good :) I wonder what will happen when and if Angel gets back... Looking forward to read more! *hugs and kisses*
Date: 06/25/2008 - 05:13 am Title: Chapter 13. Bitter Sweetness
Wow! that was hot! What else can I say? I absolutely loved it! I cant wait to see where things go from here! Please oh please dont keep me waiting too long!
Date: 06/25/2008 - 01:27 am Title: Chapter 13. Bitter Sweetness
Wonderfule Spuffy, but I feel so sorry for Wesley. Poor man! Great chapter!
Date: 06/25/2008 - 01:27 am Title: Chapter 13. Bitter Sweetness
Wonderfule Spuffy, but I feel so sorry for Wesley. Poor man! Great chapter!
Date: 06/24/2008 - 10:19 pm Title: Chapter 13. Bitter Sweetness
Ah Buffy misses Spike :-D
If that was his plan it was successful. *gg*
Same here with Wes, he was busy hunting after Fred to speak to her. His poor hand *gg*. That plan (Fred's and Spike's) is definitely working like a charm.
*kicks site a bit to make it behave* It vanished on me. Seems to be tired ;)
Enjoyed the read and loved the spuffyness.
*"edit" - second 5th try. And now I'm waiting that I can read. Reading whilst waiting would be better ;)
Date: 06/24/2008 - 01:37 pm Title: Chapter 13. Bitter Sweetness
Looks like poor Wesley is really gonna have his work cut out for him in winning Fred's hand, should be an interesting ride though. ;) And YAY, for the Spuffyness!!! Fantastic update!
Congrats on your well deserved win!!! :D
Date: 06/24/2008 - 09:57 am Title: Chapter 13. Bitter Sweetness
Fabulous chapter and no wonder women of that era used fans with men like Spike about. Now where did I put mine?!! Loved it to bits.
Date: 06/24/2008 - 08:43 am Title: Chapter 13. Bitter Sweetness
Another lovely chapter!
Date: 06/24/2008 - 08:34 am Title: Chapter 13. Bitter Sweetness
Making Wes jealous is one thing... but making him feel he is not beneath Fred is another.. this plan might backfire if he ends up thinking Alasdair is a more fitting suitor.
And how could Buffy not fall for someone that is going to give you what your heart desires.. swoon LOL
Enjoying.
Date: 06/24/2008 - 07:06 am Title: Chapter 13. Bitter Sweetness
OMG, I got shivers!
And I'm giddy! *fans self and swoons* Lordy, but you write swoon worthy stuff woman! I was so excited to see this, after that little teaser I got to look at and oh my goodness, if Wes turned a little more green he'd look like Oscar the Grouch! hehehhe. And oooo wasn't that awful sneaky of Alisdar to agree to their plans wholeheartedly? LOL, poor Wes won't be able to hold anything if he keeps breaking glasses!
Sorry, I know it seems like i'm going on about Fred and Wes, but this side arc is wonderful and i can't wait to see how far Fred will go to capture Wes. And Buffy is capitulating a little more - yet she still mentions Angel (right poofter) and SQUUEEE she's finding it hard to remember his face! tee hee
Awesome job, awesome characters, awesome jealousy, just.... well...you're just awesome! Sorry, I can't find another word to describe your wonderful talent ;) Mucho amore and wuggles
Date: 06/24/2008 - 06:29 am Title: Chapter 13. Bitter Sweetness
Aww, poor Wes, but he did make things difficult on himself1
Ah, Buffy's given in, at least for that moment. William's definitely worming his way in. She'll hardly remember Angel's name by the time he shows up again.
Date: 06/24/2008 - 06:24 am Title: Chapter 13. Bitter Sweetness
naughty Buffy, but wonderful and I love love love Fred's schemeing...looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 06/24/2008 - 05:15 am Title: Chapter 13. Bitter Sweetness
Seems like Fred and Spike are about to get their heart's desire. With any luck, Wes and Buffy will come to realize that they may deny their feelings to their mind but not their hearts. Look forward to more chapters.
Date: 06/24/2008 - 05:12 am Title: Chapter 13. Bitter Sweetness
Very sweet.
Author's Response: Glad you think so!
Date: 06/24/2008 - 05:01 am Title: Chapter 13. Bitter Sweetness
Tee hee! Poor Wes... he got what's coming to him. It's going to take a bit longer though - I know you want to write the fun that is Fred and Alasdair. :P
And... that scene with Spike and Buffy is just so tender and sweet, yet hot at the same time! :P More, please!
Date: 06/24/2008 - 04:53 am Title: Chapter 13. Bitter Sweetness
So glad to see update. Love ths story. Hope she soon forgets Angel completly. Poor Wes. Will he ever get up the nerve to tell his real feelings. The plan seems to be working. Looking forward to next update. Just e-mailed you about one of your other stories I haven't seen an update on in a while. Hope to hear from youl Jean
Date: 06/24/2008 - 04:00 am Title: Chapter 13. Bitter Sweetness
OMG - you know you're absolutely brilliant, right? I mean the pacing of each scene, the way you left cliffy after cliffy for each???? GAH - kept me on the edge of my seat quite literally. Buffy is sooooooooooooo falling hard, and right alongside of Spike. I don't think he anticiapted much beyond his fascination with her other than to possess her, but he's slowly realizing how much he actually cares for her. And he's so devilishly cute in this. And poor Wes - to be tormented so cruelly by Fred. But he did bring it on himself in a way. I only hope he realizes soon that pride vs love is no contest at all, and sometimes, a little healthy competition can prove what is real where the matters of the heart truly lie. Such a lovely, brilliant and fabulous chapter carino... I am in awe and honored to help you out in any capacity I can... Luv you boo with all my heart.
Author's Response: *blushes* Not sure I deserve such high praise, but I thank you for it anyway. *smooches* And I hope you know this wouldn't be half as not bad as it is, if it weren't for you? I swear, honey, I don't have words to express how much you mean to me, to thank you for being there for me. I love you, sweetie. *huggles* I think you're right about Spike, he never anticipated falling for Buffy, so hard or so fast. And Buffy is well on her way of joining him there. Hee, being evil with Wes was too much fun, there was no way I wouldn't not give in to my muse's wishes in that regard. ;) Again, a million, a gazillion thanks for everything, sweetie! *snuggles*