Date: 06/30/2008 - 05:51 am Title: Lost
Aww. That part with the video from 'Storyteller' almost made me cry. Off to the next chapter
Date: 03/17/2008 - 06:42 am Title: Lost
omg this is great! i think buffy is gonna regret throwing that amulet down though.
Date: 02/22/2008 - 03:57 am Title: Lost
You need to edit your summary:
It's "could HAVE" not "could OF"
Wolfram not Wolfman
upon not apon
The last one could have been caught by spell check. When I see this many errors without even opening a chapter, it makes me think that the author doesn't really care what they post.
Author's Response: Ah well that is where your wrong. Sometimes errors are overlooked even by the best of us. I do apoligise for being so careless by making 3 mistakes in my summary. Like I did say, its an OLD story and I carelessly forgot to check it over before I posted it. However, thanks to your tackless attack on my 3 errors I shall be more careful in the future. My partner always says there are two ways of saying things to someone. I thought you were being quite rude, even though your thoughts were in the right place. Maybe you could keep that in mind next time you say something to someone about their grammer.
Date: 02/21/2008 - 01:12 am Title: Lost
Very well written i was enthralled everything else melted away cant wait to read some more your best friend alice
Date: 02/13/2008 - 10:29 pm Title: Lost
Great beginning! Can't wait to read more!
Date: 02/11/2008 - 10:10 pm Title: Lost
If I should make a guess I would say that Spike will become human. Be careful what you wish for, huh?
I would like to read the end too :)
Author's Response: Thank you for the comment, its very encouraging to know that my stories are good. I hope I don't disappoint :D
Date: 02/10/2008 - 03:11 pm Title: Lost
Promising beginning. Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thank you for the comment, its very encouraging to get good reviews about a story, I hope I won't disappoint :D