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Reviewer: Thundercat Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/08/2008 - 03:14 am Title: Chapter 7

I'm so glad I came across this story! Your writing is wonderful, and the story gets more exciting with each chapter. I've no idea how often you update, but I have a hunch I'd better slow down or I'll be disappointed to find I'm at the end of what's written so far.

Author's Response: I've loved reading all of your comments, Thundercat, thank you! I love it that you picked up on the William-Slayer connection so early on and the Emma/Anya. lol I didn't know if anyone would get that one. So happy you're enjoying the story--an update's coming soon! : )

Reviewer: Shadowsbabe Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/21/2008 - 12:51 am Title: Chapter 7

I love the depth you've woven into this story.
It's going to be hard for Buffy to go back to the repression of her home after this. And I also have to wonder if her family will take her back without a lot of doubt about her virginity after being away unchaperoned for so long.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Shadows! It will definitely be difficult for Elizabeth to just go home after all she's learned. And that's a good point about her family--it will indeed be a very complicated situation.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2008 - 09:46 pm Title: Chapter 7

*nods* with his sister being the Slayer William should have learned some things.
And Giles is (was) their watcher first before he became family. This Sukáyuw sounds like their own hellmouth there.
~ Enjoy your time off :)

Author's Response: Thank you, cordy! The field is indeed very hellmouthesque : )

Reviewer: serenity Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2008 - 04:11 am Title: Chapter 7

Wow, this was a great chapter! The whole explanation about his past, the Slayers and the evil place in the woods was brilliantly written. Eagerly awaiting more!

Author's Response: Thanks, serenity! I'm happy you enjoyed the chapter of backstory! It's great to hear that it was still interesting even with the long explanations...The next chap is currently in my beta's hands. : )

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/12/2008 - 01:32 am Title: Chapter 7

“What’s a slayer?” hee
“Wow. Could you please get a little more poetically vague for me?” hee.

I like William. Things arn't simple

Author's Response: I've really enjoyed reading your comments GDO! Thanks so much for the feedback! No Andrew in the cards so far, but you never know. He might make an appearance : )

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/11/2008 - 10:38 pm Title: Chapter 7

I really like the way their characters are developing and love the insight into Williams past . They both seem so lonely and living in that town among such repression is depressing, hopefully they can find some solace in each other. Update soon, you write very well.

Author's Response: Thank you, JO! I'm so happy that you're liking the story! Indeed, more bonding time to come now that Elizabeth can experience a taste a freedom.

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/11/2008 - 04:04 am Title: Chapter 7

OHHH I LOVE THAT THEYRE GETTING CLOSER AND I CANT BELIEVE THAT HIS SIS WAS A SLAYER!! i LOVE this story and am so happy that u updated. im glad that things are gong well between buffy and william and that theyre starting to open up to each other. also im glad that she knows the evils that live in her world and can be more careful. i really hope that they continue to get closer and that she doesnt return to her home. also i hope that everything works out well and that they end up together and happy. PLEASE update as soon as u can, i CANT wait to read more. THANX

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Sarah! I'm so happy to hear you're eager to read more and that you like the developing relationship! : )

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/10/2008 - 09:18 am Title: Chapter 7

I enjoyed learning a bit more about William's past. I also enjoyed learning more about the village and the goings on in the countryside... the atmosphere of the story so fascinating. Loved the chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you--I'm glad that you found the backstory interesting!

Reviewer: Devin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/10/2008 - 05:16 am Title: Chapter 7

This whole story is just so RICH! I'm loving every chapter, it's getting more in depth and exciting with each update. Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thanks Devin! I was worried about this chapter being a little too talky, so I'm happy to hear you're still enjoying it!

Reviewer: PennyDrdful Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/10/2008 - 12:31 am Title: Chapter 7

Love the new chapter and all the interaction between Elizabeth and William. Your description of the 'evil, grey bitter field' is really interesting and makes for an intriguing setup. It feels a bit like foreshadowing. Can't wait to see how the plot unfolds!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Penny! Haha I'm glad the bitter field was intriguing.

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