I have to say I really love all your stories and I'm sorry that I've read them all because that means I don't have any more to read lol. You always have angst but never in a negative way and your characters are always so loveable! Good read!
Bloody brilliant, that was! Fluffy, sweet, and hot with just a smidge of angst. Perfect!
Another reread... Still cute!
Rereading this...so cute, but there are some spelling errors.
Sweet Spuffiness... I like the reference to Emma for Buffy's birthday... William makes a good Mr. Knightly here, doesn't he?
I looove this fic! It's so brilliant, the way you make the characters so flawed but they seem perfect when they're together. & the ending was great, because you didn't plan everything, you just made sure they were happy. Keep up the good work. Can't wait to read more from you. :D
"The sight of her on her knees before him was a bit too much like one of his more graphic fantasies. William jumped slightly. “Pet! No.” He reached down to try and push her away."
Granted I haven't read much spuffy fic, but I'd bet $50 that this is hands down one of the best and funniest moments in all of spuffy ficdom. No, really. I was highly amused. As a matter of fact, this may make it as my favorite chapter in this fic. But we'll see.
*Buffy stood with Cordelia and Faith, the newest member of their squad, as their couch/COACH finished giving them a pep talk for the next game.* Sorry for pointing out it like that but I can't help it. I laughed quite hard picturing a couch giving pep talk. :) But it's not a laugh at your expense, I understand perfectly well how these kind of typos weasel themselves into the text. It's just so funny :) Great story btw. :)
I just read this story straight through without stopping - it was so brilliant, loved it when they got together and oh my the sex was hot and phwoar and wow all at the same time. Amazing fic, absolutely adored it.
awwww. wonderful, wonderful story. long high school fics are my FAVORITES, and this one was amazing.
Author's Response: Thanks Jess! :D
Thanks for such a great story. It nearly brought me to tears. And the sex scene... oh so hot!!!
Also, I really liked that you didn't bash Angel. In reality, he is not such a bad guy as he is always portrayed in Spuffy fanfix.
Author's Response: Thanks!! I'm glad you liked it. :D
Love this fic, really enjoyed reading it.
Awwww! This was one of the sweetest and romantic stories I have ever read! You definitely gave romance to our young couple along with the angst. It wasn't all wham-bam-thank you ma'm stuff, definitely sweet and romantic! Can't wait to read more of your stories!!!
Wow, I can't believe I'm saying this, but poor Angel! I'm almost upset for him but I'm too much of a Spuffy fan at heart, so its too bad!
Great story. You did such a great job with the characters. I think you were true to them and yet still gave them new depths. I am so pleased that you kept Angel a good person. So many authors with demonize him and I think your approach added strength to the story. Kudos.
A happily ever after. So very well deserved. And a final making of peace with Angel, that's a good thing too. And Anne is still around now that they are the happily married parents. Wonder if Angel and Faith truly got to have a thing... but even with that small question, I truly enjoyed the whole story. Sad to see it go, but glad they had a perfectly, perfect ending. Thanks for sharing.
LOL THAT WAS A PERFECT ENDING!! i LOVED reading this story and im so glad that everything worked out. THANK U SOOO MUCH for writing this fic, i really enjoyed reading it and i CANT wait to read more of your work
Oh no, it`s over! It was such a nice story, loved it!
Naughty morning for these two :)
I liked Angel's talk with William (like a closure too).
The epilogue was a good way to end it.
Sorry to see it go.
Awwww!! I can't believe this is the ending already. And what a sweet journey they have taken. I truly enjoyed this piece tremendously, and is sad to see finished (I guess I am that way about most fics) and I want to commend you on a job VERY well done. I love it. :)
Great ending, I love that Angel and Spike had no hard feeling for eachother.
a little confused. huh?
I absolutely LOVE the epilogue. It made the whole story even better. :) Thanks for writing it.