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Reviewer: ScoobyDawn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2013 - 03:50 am Title: Chapter Four

Brilliantly written.

Reviewer: EvilKat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/15/2008 - 02:51 am Title: Chapter Four

Dear Addie Logan,

I just got done reading chapter four and maybe it's partly the fact that it's really late here and I'm the only one awake right now, though I really think it's your writing, but I cried and cried all through second half of it. You weren't kidding when you said it was dark. That said, I'm going to keep reading..

I've read your stories before and I'm curious as to whether you've ever considered writing professionally?

Reviewer: Rogue Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/01/2008 - 06:34 pm Title: Chapter Four

Excellent chapter. You did such a great job of conveying what Spike was going through. Determined to get justice for his wife, but sickened by his own actions. Truly, great work. God I can't wait for the next chapter. I have a feeling Buffy's not going to get the homecoming she expects...

Reviewer: Nika Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/01/2008 - 02:53 pm Title: Chapter Four

Is it weird if I almost feel bad for Spike in this chapter? I feel bad for Buffy, but Spike to. I can't wait to see more.

Reviewer: pixiecorn Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/01/2008 - 08:20 am Title: Chapter Four

oooo i hope angel does something to piss buffy off so she can go back to spike hahaha.... loved the chapter:) hope their's another one soon to come

Reviewer: Wen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/01/2008 - 02:18 am Title: Chapter Four

This is totally unlike Spike. I hope he makes up for it and apologizes to her over and over.

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/01/2008 - 01:18 am Title: Chapter Four

Oooo, interesting!!!

Of course, Angelus probably won't have the home coming for Buffy she's hoping for.

Reviewer: annie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/01/2008 - 12:15 am Title: Chapter Four

i kind of loved the chapter... does that make me sick? hmm... it's very well-written, loved how you portray buffy as a vampire (without a soul), which of likes i haven't read before. One small question though, how old was she when she was turned? just curious :D truly a joy to read your story and i can't wait for your next update!

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/31/2008 - 08:35 pm Title: Chapter Four

THATS SO SAD, IM JUST GLAD THAT SPIKE LET HER GO!! i LOVE this story and am so happy that u updated. i REALLY hope that everything works out well and that they get together. PLEASE update as soon as u can, i CANT wait to read more. THANX

Reviewer: smlcspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/31/2008 - 09:47 am Title: Chapter Four

OH I loved it. I wonder what Angelus will do when he sees her.

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/31/2008 - 08:08 am Title: Chapter Four

Wow that was - intense. Whole new experience for me because I really didn't like cruel Spike and I have never felt that before. Loved the chapter (in a grim way) and I wonder how much Angel's going to love Buffy now?

Reviewer: Tigress Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/31/2008 - 03:12 am Title: Chapter Four

it was a very good chapter. you've got another loyal reader :). I'm not going to miss these updates

Reviewer: dicecanntcry Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/31/2008 - 02:45 am Title: Chapter Four

Wow. I'm just amazed... Beautiful chapter Addie.

Reviewer: BloodStainedSnow Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/31/2008 - 02:32 am Title: Chapter Four

Wow, the torture is vivid and heart-wrenching. The emotions given by both are raw and intense. Spike's wavering between wanting to be the tough-revenge guy and the good man he used to be is well done as is Buffy's naive beliefs that Angelus loves her. Looking forward to more.

Reviewer: Michelle D. Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/31/2008 - 02:20 am Title: Chapter Four

Wow - fantastic chapter! I love the insight into how Spike is being changed by his search for Angelus. “He remembered he’d been a good man at some point in a distant past.” - That line made me think of Buffy and the effect of years of slaying had on her.

Looking forward to more…

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/31/2008 - 02:05 am Title: Chapter Four

He tried. Evil vampire seems to be bringing out some of the humanity in him. Wonder what he thinks of that. Of course he may just be waiting to follow her back to the lair. Dark for sure, but I'm enjoying it. Thanks for sharing.

Reviewer: Devin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/31/2008 - 01:40 am Title: Chapter Four

That was intense but very very good. Loved the characterization of both Buffy and Spike, and am eagerly awaiting more!

Reviewer: ochit Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/31/2008 - 01:15 am Title: Chapter Four

Just read this and i found this story great! Please continue cause i'm dying to know how Buffy and Spike will finally be together!

Reviewer: GDO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/31/2008 - 01:05 am Title: Chapter Four

ah, the victim turning into a monster thing. Though poor Spike, with his dead wife to avenge. And he had to realize that Buffy actually felt love. Poor Buffy. I can imagine Spike following her...or at least thinking about that after she left.

Reviewer: Pyro63 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/31/2008 - 12:36 am Title: Chapter Four

Very heart wrenching. Buffy does still seem like a teenager, talking about how Angelus loves her. I wonder what he's gonna do when he finds out that what has been done to her. Will he be angry at her for running off? Or just will he actually be worried? Awesome chapter, can't wait for the update.

Reviewer: R Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/31/2008 - 12:36 am Title: Chapter Four

I understand the hardness of this chapter but I can say you did it beautifully. Kudos to you for making a difficult thing something to read and, well not enjoy, but work it into the story. Thank you.

Reviewer: Jenn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/31/2008 - 12:33 am Title: Chapter Four

I just read all four chapters of this story. I love Buffy as a vampire and Spike as a human searching for Angelus. Keep writing - I can't wait to see where you take this and how (if they do) Spike and Buffy get togther.

Reviewer: Shadowsbabe Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/30/2008 - 08:34 pm Title: Chapter Four

Such a powerful chapter. I can't wait to see what happens when Buffy's eyes are opened to Angelus's kind of love. He's never going to care for anyone but himself.
And I'm hoping that Buffy is going to have to realize that the only one who could help her, is the man who tortured her in the first place,

Reviewer: Jordy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/30/2008 - 08:33 pm Title: Chapter Four

I can see this going very badly from here. I'm imagining all the possiblites of her return to Angelus. Can't wait to find out what happens to see if my suspicions are confirmed or not. Great update

Reviewer: gemma Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/30/2008 - 08:28 pm Title: Chapter Four

loved it please let there be more it was great

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