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Reviewer: katie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/04/2008 - 12:15 am Title: Prologue

I am so intriged! I love time travel fics

Reviewer: janice Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/28/2008 - 08:14 pm Title: Chapter 7: To Make a Mockery Part II

oh gosh this fic is an absolute treat; i really hope you update soon!! thank you!

Reviewer: tammy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/23/2008 - 02:17 pm Title: Chapter 7: To Make a Mockery Part II

OK. Color me a little confused but I still like this and will continue to read.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/22/2008 - 05:16 pm Title: Chapter 7: To Make a Mockery Part II

Sad... it's like seeing a train wreck (train accident)happen.
Seems Buffy takes the role of Cecily here. (But that won't help her to have [make] him love her.)

Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/22/2008 - 01:58 am Title: Chapter 7: To Make a Mockery Part II

Why oh Why must William's heart be broken. I guess there is no other way for him to become Spike. I hope it won't be as bad as it is now. Thanks for the update

Reviewer: sara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/21/2008 - 08:21 pm Title: Chapter 7: To Make a Mockery Part II

i can't believe buffy would even consider that. why is she listening to these idiots? she's not really from this time, she doesn't have to take crap from anyone. the whole point was to come back so she could have william, why would she go and ruin that? i feel bad that he was listening, but i hope buffy wouldn't have actually gone through with it.

Reviewer: Blackoberst Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/21/2008 - 05:47 pm Title: Chapter 7: To Make a Mockery Part II

Gah! I thought this would be free of tons of angst. I do like your writing and I will continue to read, I just fooled myself.

Please try to clear it up fast! Please?

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/17/2008 - 08:09 pm Title: Chapter 7: To Make a Mockery Part I

*wonders* This chapter doesn't make sense; William is suffering because of something what Buffy wrote (I guess, not told William), Buffy is waiting for William to make contact.
Someone interfered and that someone seems to be Rawlings with the help of Mrs. Fairfax.
Till soon I hope! *repost*

Author's Response: Interfered....someone is on the right track. Thanks so much for being so involved and trying to work out the plot. I love it. Thanks for reading and for the review!!!!

Reviewer: tammy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/13/2008 - 02:25 pm Title: Chapter 7: To Make a Mockery Part I

You are evil. I need the update. I thought I must of missed a chapter when I started reading.

Author's Response: Why thank you! *smirk* No, you didn't miss anything. I wanted the chapter to work backwards, so to speak, you'll find out what I mean in part two. Thanks so much for your review and keep reading!!!! :)

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/13/2008 - 12:41 pm Title: Chapter 7: To Make a Mockery Part I

Great to see this updated and I will be in agony until you get all this horror straightened out for William! At first I was thinking Dru slipped into his mind and made false memories, but if it was something as weak as a note with Buffy's name on it then there's hope for a quicker resolution! And Rawlings should be smacked around a bit by the Slayer IMHO.
Great chapter and looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I was hoping for responses like this...trying to puzzle out the plot and waiting for the next chapter. You made my day!!! Will post the next chapter shortly....it's off to my beta.

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/13/2008 - 10:28 am Title: Chapter 7: To Make a Mockery Part I

Oooooooh I hate that nasty Rawlings! They'd better figure out his machinations soon, I suspect Buffy might get impatient and go to visit William's mum to make enquiries about him and find out he's not out of town at all!
Congrats on your graduation!

Author's Response: THANKS SO MUCH!!! It was a blast. I wanted you to hate Rawlings...I'm glad that worked out! *hehe* Thanks so much for the review and I'll update soon!!

Reviewer: VICTORIA Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/13/2008 - 03:42 am Title: Chapter 7: To Make a Mockery Part I

So am I to assume that Rawlings sent Buffy a letter supposedly from William stating that William would be away on business while another went to William supposedly from Buffy which said that Wiliam would never be good enough? How positively evil and Shakespearean. So...may I hope that the next chap involves the slow and exceedingly painful death of Rawlings and could I help in some way? hee...hee

Please don't have William get turned while in this frame of mind. I don't think my poor heart could take it.

Congrats on your graduation!! I'll be waiting anxiously for your next update.

Author's Response: Slow and exceedingly painful death, huh? Maybe I shouldn't write anymore cliffhangers...*gulp* All will be revealed in the next chapter, which has just been sent off to my beta. Thanks also for the congratulations. Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: sara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/13/2008 - 02:02 am Title: Chapter 7: To Make a Mockery Part I

yeh, okay, i'm confused, why do i feel that i missed something? or have you just not explained it yet? like why william seems to think that about buffy, i had to look over the last chapter again to make sure i didn't forget something. i don't get that ending either, hopefully all will be explained soon.

Author's Response: Confusion was my goal...okay not really. I just wanted to throw in a plot twist with a bit of cliffhanger-y-ness. My next chapter will be posted soon. Sorry for the delay. But thank you so much for reviewing!!!!

Reviewer: Vickie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/04/2008 - 12:15 pm Title: Chapter 6: Lesson the First

I love William!!! Don't get me wrong, I love the 'Big Bad', Slayer of Slayers, William the Bloody" Spike, but there's something about William that makes me want to cuddle him!! You really did a great job with writing him.

Question, since Buffy went back in time and stuff, does she have her slayer powers?

Please update soon!!!! I love it!

Author's Response: Cuddle all you want....so long as we can work out which weekends and holidays I get him! :) Sorry it took me so long to respond...yes she does have her slayer powers since she isn't going back on her own time stream. (Boy do I watch too much sci-fi!) This fic isn't really about Buffy as the slayer....just a girl in love. Also, she can't risk exposing her slayer-ness when someone else is supposed to be the slayer in this time period. Thanks for the great question and for reviewing. I love hearing from you guys.

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/03/2008 - 08:34 pm Title: Chapter 6: Lesson the First

I'm not usually one for William fics, but I do adore time travel fics so I thought I'd give this one a chance. I'm so glad I did!
Don't worry, the poetry is quite... er Williamish and therefore fitting!
All I can think of though is that William was supposed to run out of the party after being upset by Cecily to meet Dru. Has Buffy buggered up the future?
More please.

Author's Response: THANK YOU! I'm quite proud of my Williamish poetry. Hehe. Maybe I can go around as "Inara: William the bloody's awful student." Thanks so much for the review!!!!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/03/2008 - 08:06 pm Title: Chapter 6: Lesson the First

Whom does Mrs. Fairfax fear I wonder...
Awe :) They told about their feelings. So truth is out now in the open.
At the end of the chapter I wondered why William was so bold now :) Buffy rather would have see it come true :)

Author's Response: William can enter my dreams anytime. Thanks so much for the review!!

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/03/2008 - 04:56 pm Title: Chapter 6: Lesson the First

I love seeing Buffy and William, and the similarities to Spike as William grows more confident in his feelings for Buffy. I'm really looking forward to seeing more, and the bit about Ms Fairfax was perfect and suspenseful but didn't make me impatient with the lovey-dovey stuff after. What will happen now? *gasp* !
Please update soon~

Author's Response: You're not going to like much after the next chapter...I was kinda naughty and made a cliffhanger. LOL! I can't tell you about Mrs. Fairfax yet! Thanks for the review!!!!!

Reviewer: tammy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/03/2008 - 04:12 pm Title: Chapter 6: Lesson the First

This is a great story. I love the fluff and all the emotions in it. Keep up the great work.

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing and I'll try!

Reviewer: maddonna001 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/03/2008 - 04:08 pm Title: Chapter 6: Lesson the First

oh, that was so sweet and lovely and hot!
Too bad Buffy had to wake up from the wet dream...
But I also feel sorry for William because I know he has to loose Buffy and being turned into a vampire. Baby, you and your story rock! :-*

Author's Response: Thank you Maddonna! I'm glad you're enjoying it. We'll have to chat soon. I feel like its been forever.

Reviewer: VICTORIA Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/03/2008 - 01:38 am Title: Chapter 6: Lesson the First

Guh!! That was ever so lovely. More please. I'm addicted!

Author's Response: Addicted is good. Hehe. Thanks so much for the review. I'm glad that you're enjoying the fic.

Reviewer: tammy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/29/2008 - 06:07 pm Title: Chapter 5: One Good Day

Oh I love William and Buffy. This is so sweet. Maybe she can get stuck back in time. I love it.

Author's Response: Hmm, stuck back in time with William. I could go for that....although, I would seriously miss my hairdryer. LOL! Thanks for the lovely review and for reading!

Reviewer: fyreburned Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/29/2008 - 02:58 am Title: Chapter 5: One Good Day

Loving this fic! I always love to see a fic with William in it! But how is Buffy going to change the future with these acts? Looking forward to seeing more of this ASAP, please!
~~K.~~
~~fyreburned~~

Author's Response: Willow's spell ensures that William will have a "ghost" of a memory of being loved so that he won't die in the Hellmouth unloved by anyone. *Wink* don't worry it will all work out!! lol! Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/28/2008 - 08:12 pm Title: Chapter 5: One Good Day

More problems for Buffy? A chaperone could complicate her plan.
Ah a sleepy Mrs. Fairfax is to bear :)
Awe, they even managed to get time of their own! Loved the end of the chapter / how the chapter ended.

Author's Response: When has anything in the world of Buffy been easy? Thanks for reading and reviewing!!

Reviewer: June Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/28/2008 - 05:24 pm Title: Chapter 5: One Good Day

Wonderful chapter, and I loved Anne and her take on Buffy and William together. Using those words about Buffy from canon, like delivering him from mediocrity, makes me feel that Buffy is going to leave the time after having much more of an effect on William than she realizes. There are so many things in their plan for time-traveling but then blurring William's memories that could go wrong, and the timing of William's turning, and I can't wait to see more!
Great update, more soon please!

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing. Will it or won't it effect his turning? *Leaves June wondering....* Thanks for the review!!!

Reviewer: maddonna001 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/28/2008 - 11:01 am Title: Chapter 5: One Good Day

Wow, what a long and nice chapter!

It was worth the wait, I loved it how you showed both of their reactions to the kisses.
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Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing Maddonna. I love knowing what you think of things.

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