Date: 07/23/2010 - 11:32 pm Title: Soulless
Hey itoy! It's me from BuffyTube!
Your story has an excellent premise, and I only noticed a few punctuation errors. Your style was slightly stiff, but don't worry about it too much, it'll loosen with practice.
Overall, I really enjoyed it! So nice to have a decent version of Seeing Red out there. I love it when Spike stands up for himself!
Keep writing! I'd like to see what you have up your sleeve next!
Author's Response: hey there, sweetie
i know about the punctuation and stffiness it's just with no Beta this was the best i could do...maybe next timeit'll be better...and when i'm good enough at it i think i might rewrite this one as well
thanks a lot for taking time to read it and for the comment ;)
Date: 07/30/2008 - 10:41 am Title: Soulless
OMG how i really wish that is what happened.
Author's Response: yeah..me too...................lol
thanks you so much for the review
Date: 06/30/2008 - 09:12 am Title: Soulless
Love it so far, please continue! :)
Author's Response: thank you so much...i'm so glad you love it...i'll start the buffy pov right away
Enny
Date: 06/30/2008 - 08:58 am Title: Soulless
Hey, this one was really good, please bring on the Buffy`s POV one!
Author's Response: ok..thanks alot...buffy's pov will be there soon
glad you like it
Date: 06/30/2008 - 12:14 am Title: Soulless
Lovin it. I read a lot of Spuffy but this start is totally different than anyrhing that I've read before in this time line. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: thanks a million time....that was a very nice of you to say...it gives me the power to go on writing
love
Enny
Date: 06/29/2008 - 11:21 pm Title: Soulless
I wish that had happened in seeing red. Loved it and can't wait for more.
Author's Response: thank you so much...your openion really means a lot
i'll be starting the buffy pov now
Date: 06/29/2008 - 09:11 pm Title: Soulless
this was awesome!!!!!! i love it!!!! please keep going!!!!
good job!!
Author's Response: thank you so much...i'm so happy you love it...i'll start the buffy pov right away