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Reviewer: Sotia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/03/2008 - 07:55 am Title: My daughter's well being

What did she feel about it? You can't leave it there, baby, I want mooooooooooore!!!

I totally loved Joyce being all growly, and I would have applauded at Xander's comeuppance if I wasn't at work! But most of all I loved how Spike came clean about his feelings. I know it was the Gods' influence, but I still loved how he said what he said!

You're so writing more while you're here, mister!

*hugs and kisses*

Author's Response: I shall endeavor to satisfy your desires. ;) *smooches you breahless*

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/02/2008 - 10:10 pm Title: My daughter's well being

Loved (bossy) Joyce telling Xander what she thought of him (and getting Spike to confess his love for Buffy) :)
And looking now forward to Buffy's reaction.

Author's Response: More to come. I have big plans for our people!

Reviewer: Darkrivertempest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/02/2008 - 09:02 pm Title: My daughter's well being

Arrrgh! You left it there?????

Ok, has Deanna showed you the art of evil cliffies then? (sniffles) I'm glad you were able to obtain her as a beta, she's super cool!

And ooooo you touched on Xander's wanting the Slayer during the Hyena episode - which I thought, god, someone needs to just stop him flat out! Good to know he won't be getting away with it!

Ok, you need to like update... NOW, cause I wanna know what she says! Great update hun! And I don't know why you mentioned me... I had absolutely nothing to do with it! Crazy silly man... (I think the snuggles from Sotia are getting to you)

Author's Response: I've known about evil cliffies before. And I've told you a few things about what I wanted in Ch. 11 back when it was in it's first incarnation (I'm ashamed to say, but it took nearly a month to finish this chapter due to the numerous rewrites). Some of the modifications were ideas that came to me as I spoke to you, so the praise is there for a very good reason. I'm really happy about Deanna as well. I'll try to update as soon as I can.

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