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Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/08/2015 - 05:37 pm Title: Chapter 35 Consequences

This was just ok. The plot jumped around too much, too unfocused, and the ending is pretty unsatisfying, as Buffy doesn't seem to have gotten any smarter about Spike. Also, Buffy's dialogue sounds a bit too British. But I liked the idea for this one, and the scenes were believably WWII-like.

Reviewer: Zeitsu Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/15/2011 - 06:27 am Title: Chapter 35 Consequences

More more more plz :) sequel???

Reviewer: yubi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/11/2010 - 09:30 am Title: Chapter 35 Consequences

lovely story

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

Reviewer: bitchee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/08/2010 - 04:02 pm Title: Chapter 35 Consequences

Brilliant as usual. A Rollicking good adventure that I was sad to see end.
Great fun to read, just wish there were more out there like this.l
Hope to read your next one soon.

Author's Response: Thank you for taking time to comment. So pleased you enjoyed the story.

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/07/2010 - 02:40 pm Title: Chapter 35 Consequences

What a great ending, I especially love that you're open to the possibilty of a sequel. :D This story has been a pleasure to read, thanks so much for sharing!

Author's Response: Thank you for commenting! Been such fun to write. Off on holiday, will think about what next when I return!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/07/2010 - 04:45 am Title: Chapter 35 Consequences

Love how all things seemed to come full circle. Though one has to wonder quite how the locket came back to her. I can imagine, but thinking of time travel often gives me a headache. Love how it seems the slayer that we saved this time around is Buffy herself. And the connection that she and Spike have maintained from their time back in time, whether they realize it or not. Lovely story. Always a blast to go back in time with them. Would surely love a sequel if you feel motivated. Otherwise, thanks for sharing.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Time of Change Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/07/2010 - 01:16 am Title: Chapter 35 Consequences

So clever! I love the twist, and I love the ending.

Author's Response: Thank you! So pleased you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/07/2010 - 01:03 am Title: Chapter 35 Consequences

A good history of how Buffy save her lineage and Spike's hide! Loved reading this. Thanks so much for the entertainment.

Author's Response: Thank you so much.

Reviewer: Nikki Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/06/2010 - 10:50 pm Title: Chapter 35 Consequences

Have really enjoyed reading this story. I love the time travel. Just wanted to give you a heads up on something in the most current chapter. You mentioned 'monsters from his Saturday morning cartoons.'" There were no Saturday morning cartoons during that time period. They didn't appear until much later.

Thank you for the consistently well- written stories you have done for your fellow Spuffy lovers. They are definitely appreciated.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/06/2010 - 10:46 pm Title: Chapter 35 Consequences

Oh I really like the small stories told about what happened to certain people. And YAY for Henry being back and having 'rescued' some papers to be used by the Walsh's. :D
And the charm being based on magnetism.
So maybe Buffy had to go back to get the link to Spike.
Mmmh Aurora. Send to the colonies - America?
And Quentin saved Dorcas' life. Coincidences....
OH! The locket.... Wow. So it was about Buffy saving a slayer. Clever twist.

I have left one tiny loose end flying....just in case anyone wants a sequel!!!
I wouldn't mind reading one. Please? :)

Reviewer: jamies_lady Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/06/2010 - 10:14 pm Title: Chapter 35 Consequences

not how I expected it to end, but she did save the world...really enjoyed it all

Reviewer: Sibb Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/06/2010 - 08:04 pm Title: Chapter 35 Consequences

I didn't see that one coming! What a wonderful ending--very clever. This was one of the most original stories I've ever read. Thank you so much for sharing it with the rest of us.

Author's Response: So glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: Sandy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/06/2010 - 05:31 pm Title: Chapter 35 Consequences

Great story - YES we want a sequel.
Please, please, PLEASE!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you! Off on holiday soon but will have a good think while I'm away!

Reviewer: anon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/06/2010 - 03:37 pm Title: Chapter 35 Consequences

Absolutely brilliant! A sequel? Yes, please: you've left plenty of clues for us. Besides being well-written and in-character, your story was funny, and angst-filled, happy, sad and fluffy, and captured the push-and-pull relationship between Spike and Buffy perfectly. And it had a toad as a major character--what more could anyone want?

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your kind words. The story was a delight to write but I had to be careful that Henry didn't take over! He still thinks Life and times of a Witch's Toad would be fascinating reading!

Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/06/2010 - 03:15 pm Title: Chapter 35 Consequences

What a great ending. So the legacy of Joy lives on. I would like to read a sequel. It seems their memories are like a whisper.

Author's Response: Thank you. Yes, the memories can only get louder inside their heads!

Reviewer: nea Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/06/2010 - 02:00 pm Title: Chapter 35 Consequences

How interesting that Buffy saved herself by going back in time. Never would have thought Aurora was her ancestor. I will say that I was interested to see how Buffy and Spike were drawn together, but I really wanted more of them here at the end. It was a good story, though. Maybe there will be a sequel for more Buffy/Spike time.

Reviewer: Kirsty Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/06/2010 - 01:39 pm Title: Chapter 35 Consequences

Yes, a sequel, pretty please.
There jjust wasn't enough Spuffy here in the end.. :D

Author's Response: Sorry you were disappointed with the amount of Spuffy, but it was important to tie up everyone's story!

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