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Reviewer: Brittany Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/08/2008 - 03:30 am Title: An Unexpected Guest

You cant leave me hanging like this!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: I'm sorry!! *runs and hides behind rock* I promise I'll update again soon. I already have the next 2 chapters ready to go but I wanted to give a few days for people to read that one by its self. Thanks for reading and keep reviewing for me, hun! =)

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/07/2008 - 10:30 pm Title: An Unexpected Guest

Buffy might have made a mistake by not telling Spike she didn't totally break up with Riley, but she certainly didn't deserve this! Looking forward to more!

Author's Response: Indeed she did not, and they'll both realize this and then more wackiness will ensue. Thanks for reading, keep reviewing!!! =)

Reviewer: Laur987 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/07/2008 - 09:32 pm Title: An Unexpected Guest

please update again soon! i'm dying to know what happens next, i really like this story, you're doing a great job! great premise!

Author's Response: Aw thank you so much that means a lot to me. There will be an update pretty soon, I've already got the chapter typed up and ready to go but I like to give people time to read each chapter by its self. Thank you so much for your review!! Hope you continue to like the story!!

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/07/2008 - 07:08 pm Title: An Unexpected Guest

I'm feeling really bad for Buffy right now. :( I get Spike had the best intentions in mind where Buffy was concerned, but eating with Dru in the same cafeteria as Buffy was just like an accident waiting to happen. Can't wait to find out what plays out between Buffy and Spike next. Great chapter!

Author's Response: Yes, Buffy is hurting now and she will hurt much more in the next chapter but it will get better so please bear with me. Thanks so much for your review!!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/07/2008 - 06:01 pm Title: An Unexpected Guest

Uh-huh... not sure if Dru is really there to make things right; for now she made everything only worse.
I feel sorry for Buffy now. :(

Author's Response: Yup, having Dru around is going to be a big slap in the face for Buffy, one she didn't quite deserve. Thanks for your review!! =)

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/07/2008 - 04:41 am Title: An Unexpected Guest

Buffy did wrong by not being truthful to Spike. And I do agree that Spike should feel hurt about that. But Spike should have known that being with Dru is going to hurt Buffy. Why can Spike still talk to Dru when she dumped him and not Buffy. It just doesn't make sense. I feel so bad for Buffy. She loss her friends. They may not have been nice people but they were her friends for a long time. And now this thing with Spike. My heart aches for Buffy. I really hope that there isn't a lot of angst left. I also really want Buffy to kick Dru's ass. And please do not let Spike do something with Dru. Or I don't know if I will be able to forgive him.

Author's Response: We are in the height of the angst here, but it wont be over quite yet. Please bear with me, though, cuz when its over there will be lots of good spuffyness.... and don't worry about Spike, if he was so stupid to do something with Dru I wouldn't be able to forgive him either, lol. Thanks for the review, hun. =)

Reviewer: tammy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/05/2008 - 08:39 pm Title: Tears Fall

I love this and Buffy definately deserves it but Dru. What a mess it will be.

Author's Response: Dru is definitely going to make Buffy and Spikes resolution much more difficult, alright. Of course she chose now to come visit lol. Thanks for your review!!

Reviewer: Brittany Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/05/2008 - 02:27 am Title: Tears Fall

YOUR EVIL!!!!!!!!!!!!! I need more!!!

Author's Response: Oh there's more on the way hehe... maybe I'll update a couple of days sooner than planned, just for you lol. Thanks for your review hun!!

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/05/2008 - 01:26 am Title: Tears Fall

I just love Willow and Xander, I like that they're trying to help their friends out. As for Dru... even if Spike isn't interested she's bound to cause trouble. :( Can't wait to read more! Great update!

Author's Response: You hit the nail on the head, Midnight, and wait til you see what trouble Dru causes... Thanks for your review, babe.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/04/2008 - 09:22 pm Title: Tears Fall

And here I thought things couldn't possibly get any worse! Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Oh things are going to get a lot worse... just you wait and see! lol Thanks for your review!! =)

Reviewer: PennyDrdful Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/04/2008 - 08:38 pm Title: Tears Fall

Ooh, now things are really going down the tubes for our favorite couple. Can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response: Indeed, they are... Thanks for your review, hun!!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/04/2008 - 07:22 pm Title: Tears Fall

That doesn't sound good for Buffy and Spike to get back together. Both are hurt and now Dru is back?
Hopefully there's a way to fix it.

Author's Response: There's always gotta be more angst before the happy ending!! hehe Thanks for your review, hun!!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/18/2008 - 09:18 pm Title: Party's Over

Darn... such a good start for them both and then Riley is at the door. Well now Buffy can tell him it's over.
~ What she did... but it didn't end so well *sigh*
Hopefully Buffy can convince him that she really loves him.

Author's Response: Ah we'll have to wait and see now, won't we?? lol Thanks for your review!!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/18/2008 - 09:07 pm Title: That Glowy Kind of Feeling

(Had to grin about Joyce question if Spike would drive.)
Enjoyed the chapter :) Good to see them so happy at the moment (the teasing - pizza - was fun). And again they were watched... not good.

Author's Response: I couldn't just let Buffy drive and have no one question her on it, now could I? hehe my omage to the show. Thanks for your review hun!!

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/16/2008 - 04:16 am Title: Party's Over

It's so sad that things took such an angsty turn for Spike and Buffy. :( Can't wait to see where things go from here. Good updates!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review, hun!

Reviewer: RedSnake Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/16/2008 - 03:56 am Title: Party's Over

This story is so good. I read chp 1-16 in one sitting. I had stuff to do but I couldn't take myself away from the computer. I can't wait to read what happens next.

Author's Response: Haha awww you just made my day!! I'm sorry if I inturrupted your plans hehe but I'm really glad that I did!! Thanks for your review, hun!!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/16/2008 - 12:02 am Title: Party's Over

Damn that Riley! More please!

Author's Response: Hehe thanks for your review!!!

Reviewer: lacey Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/15/2008 - 09:10 pm Title: Party's Over

okay, i don't get it, why was he so upset? how did she break his heart? if anything, i thought she would be pissed because he knew about riley cheating and never said anything, he has no reason to be upset. buffy did break up with riley, whether she said they were on a break or not, that was still a break up, and spike should have known that she wouldn't have gone back to him. i feel like the angst was just forced in this chapter, it doesn't seem like it really belonged, but maybe that's just me.

Author's Response: Well, this chapter was loosely based on something that happened to me a while back. With Spikes point of view, I was just trying to convey the dissapointment of having her lie to him even after he thought he had gotten her to basically change her ways. Perhaps I should consider re-wording to get the point across. And with the whole break/break up thing... where I live a break doesnt mean the same thing as breaking up. A break would just be like 'we need to stop spending so much time together or we'll get sick of each other, but you're still my boyfriend.' Sorry if I confuse you. Hopefully you'll enjoy the rest of the story. =)

Reviewer: ShortStuff Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/15/2008 - 07:57 pm Title: Party's Over

This story is pretty good but you need a beta.

Just a couple of examples:

strait = a sea which connects two areas of land
the word you're looking for is straight

bullocks = young male cows
the word you're looking for is bollocks

It's a shame because it's putting me off reading any more. I think you are a talented writer and this is an interesting story so please take this as the constructive criticism that it's meant to be.



Author's Response: I appreciate your advice on everything and I just want you to know, I do have my own beta. She helps me a lot with my mistakes but not every one is noticed all the time. I think its unfortunate that little things like the word strait/straight are going to keep you from reading a story you supposedly like.

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/15/2008 - 07:28 pm Title: Party's Over

That was really a heart breaking chapter. Although, I agree with Spike. Buffy should have told Spike the truth instead of saying that they broke up for good. I feel bad for Spike especially reading the line "you broke my heart Buffy" That made me cry. But I feel bad for Buffy too. She loves him so much. She was planning on ending it with Riley for good when he came back. My heart breaks for them both. I wonder how Buffy is going to get her Spike back. :)
But I was happy to see Riley get hit a few times. He deserves it so.

Author's Response: Everyone likes to see Riley get hit hehe... yes, I too am on Spikes side (in this chapter anyway) and he really got his feelings hurt in this one. Thanks for your review hun!!

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/15/2008 - 10:24 am Title: Finally

The three new chapters were great, and so was your first love scene. ;-) Thanks for posting all the new updates! :D

Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review, hun!! =)

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2008 - 09:58 pm Title: The Morning After

Wonder what will happen when Riley gets back! Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Wacky wacky mayhem in the life of Buffy, of curse!!! Thanks for your review, hun!!

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2008 - 04:05 pm Title: The Morning After

I just read all of the chapters last night but forgot to leave a review. I don't know how I missed this wonderful story.

How Spike just brings out the inner good in Buffy. It is really beautiful. How he says that "I see the real you" What a sweetie he is. He is a keeper alright.

Author's Response: Of course Spike's a keeper, it wouldn't be Spuffy without it hehe. Thanks for your review hun, you just made my day!! =)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2008 - 12:08 pm Title: The Morning After

Awe :) Loved the teasing.
So sweet, the epiphany. But now there's still the fact of being only on a taking a break with Riley / a one sided break up. In theory Riley shouldn't complain because he was cheating all the time... but I don't think he'll take this easy, loosing a 'trophy'.

Author's Response: You have hit the nail on the head, my dear!! lol... Riley is going to see red when he finds out his girl has been having more fun than him while he was away. Thanks for the review!!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2008 - 11:35 am Title: Finally

Hot :)
You did well. ~ I hope Buffy will stand up against Riley if he pressures her because of her wish to break up.

Author's Response: Thanks hun!! I appreciate your reviews!! =)

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