Date: 09/24/2009 - 06:31 am Title: If I Dared You Now?
Very nice! gave me warm tinglings!
Date: 10/05/2008 - 11:40 pm Title: If I Dared You Now?
The story is sweet and romantic. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 10/05/2008 - 09:45 pm Title: If I Dared You Now?
Loved the chapter! So sweet! Can't wait to read more!
Date: 10/05/2008 - 02:50 pm Title: If I Dared You Now?
I know you say you have a beta, but there are a ton of mistakes both in spelling, punctuation, and grammar in this story. You really need someone else to look over it.
In this chapter, for example, you say "bought" instead of "brought" in the first paragraph, and in the 3rd paragraph, pastor is spelled "paster."
Also, you use possessives when you should use plurals, and misuse their, there, they're and your and you're.
All of this makes your story look as if it was written by a 13 year old.
Date: 10/05/2008 - 02:17 pm Title: If I Dared You Now?
Ok so your getting a double review here. I loved the first chapter, it showed how shaky their relationship was. And go mum for intervening without making Buffy feel as though she was meddling. This chapter was wonderful too, I love the flash backs, I found myself laughing at all the child silliness. So you got yourself another reader hun, coz I have fallen for this fic. Hook, line and sinker.
Date: 10/05/2008 - 01:44 pm Title: If I Dared You Now?
Good to see Joyce was right; seeing the photos helped Buffy remember. :)
Looking forward to more (of the past and the present)