Date: 12/13/2008 - 02:35 am Title: Part I
i LOVE this. run over by a train on her first day? ha HAH!
Date: 11/02/2008 - 10:34 am Title: Part I
oh, i love this chappie!
Date: 10/14/2008 - 01:50 pm Title: Part I
You're doing an excellent job balancing the sadness of Buffy's situation with Spike's slapstick efforts to pull her out of her paranoia and just accept she's the slayer. She may not suck as bad as the slayer who got hit by a train, but she still sucks...You've taken this premise and run with it. It's making me laugh.
Date: 10/12/2008 - 10:36 pm Title: Part I
This is a great premise.
Date: 10/10/2008 - 08:59 am Title: Part I
Very interesting. please continue. you got my attention.
Date: 10/10/2008 - 04:55 am Title: Part I
LOL This is going to be one crazy fic - I love it! More, please! And the slayer getting hit by the train? ROTFLMAO!!!
Date: 10/10/2008 - 04:46 am Title: Part I
“So you want to improve my mental health so it’ll be more fun to kill me?”
Lovely idea. Really think this one is gonna be a whole lotta fun. Wonderful start.
Date: 10/10/2008 - 03:23 am Title: Part I
This story is perfect. It's funny and sharp. Don't take too long updating this treasure.
Date: 10/10/2008 - 01:55 am Title: Part I
I don't know how you keep coming up with these amazingly fantastic story ideas! I DEFINITELY want to see more of this one; such a fun idea! Plus no Angel baggage and Dru's out of the picture which will make the journey to the Spuffiness all the more fun. Great first chapter, can't wait for more!
Date: 10/09/2008 - 10:56 pm Title: Part I
Oh yes, I remember the prompt; sounds like an interesting story :D
And it indeed is; I had fun reading it. Loved the way Spike's plan did or better said didn't function and how they 'danced' around one another. And the banter (witty conversation).
~ Yes please, more of it.
Date: 10/09/2008 - 10:52 pm Title: Part I
The site is full of new fics with twists of plot I haven't seen before, and this is one of them. Great, innit?
I can't wait for YoungBuffy to fall for Spike *before* she ends up in Sunnydale and Angel accosts her... Of course I'm assuming that that's where you're going with this and I could be wrong...
Date: 10/09/2008 - 10:31 pm Title: Part I
Not sure if you meant it this way or if I'm just in an odd mood, but I found parts of this chapter absolutely hilarious. I particularly liked "no vampires, no vampires/uh, yeah vampires" - for some reason that really got me! You are so good at writing BS snarky banter. I can't wait for more!
Date: 10/09/2008 - 09:08 pm Title: Part I
Great beginning! Can't wait to read more!
Date: 10/09/2008 - 08:54 pm Title: Part I
HELLA GOOD, CANT WAIT TO READ MORE!! THANX
Date: 10/09/2008 - 04:13 pm Title: Part I
Sweet story, love the subtle humor.
Date: 10/09/2008 - 04:05 pm Title: Part I
I love this premise, so good job on the prompt. But also, you've turned it into an amazing story! Keep it coming, because I totally want to read more.
Date: 10/09/2008 - 03:48 pm Title: Part I
This part of the chapter made me laugh like crazy
(I’m the worst Slayer in the history of Slayers.”
“Actually, there was one who got hit by a train the day after she was Called.” Buffy looked at him blankly, and Spike added, “No lie. Very next day, she was chasing this big slime demon thing, and she just ran right across the tracks without looking. Little bits of Slayer everywhere. Wasn’t pretty.”
Buffy looked back down. “Okay, so I suck a little less than her.”)
That sounds so like something Spike will say on trying to comfort someone. He is like don't be too hard on yourself Buffy. You are not the worst slayer ever but pretty close. Some other slayer got hit by a train and there was slayer bits everywhere. LOL That has got to be one of the funniest things I read. I am just glad that I wasn't eating or drinking anything when I read it. That is it Spike. That is the way to make Buffy feel better about herself and being a slayer. LOL
Date: 10/09/2008 - 03:37 pm Title: Part I
Totally love this story! Quite frankly, it made my whole morning. Thanks for that. More please?
Date: 10/09/2008 - 01:54 pm Title: Part I
Please do continue. We can't very well leave our heroin slightly crazy now can we?
Date: 10/09/2008 - 01:02 pm Title: Part I
good story so far please update soon
Date: 10/09/2008 - 12:21 pm Title: Part I
Oh, I totally want to read more of this! So far Spike's thoughts have been perfect and funny and true and you show Buffy's struggle very well. I also love the thought of Spike taking Buffy out for a fight and standing back to watch her and I can't wait to read it!
Please update soon! Great opening and setting the pace and letting us know where the characters are at!
Date: 10/09/2008 - 06:45 am Title: Part I
Loved the pizza crust. I have to say, one of the more original ideas I've seen in a while. And I'm very interested in where you're going to be taking it.
Date: 10/09/2008 - 05:58 am Title: Part I
Of course I want more, interesting to have him meet her this early on
Date: 10/09/2008 - 05:28 am Title: Part I
This one is very very good, you can just feel the sexual tension between them.
Thanks for a great fic Addie
Date: 10/09/2008 - 04:51 am Title: Part I
LOL hit in the forehead with pizza crust. Great start. Im looking forward to reading more of your stories.