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Reviewer: Brittney Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/29/2008 - 08:58 pm Title: Chapter 6

Yay! Finally! Buffy is slowly letting that wall down. I can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response: She's finally starting to think. :D I'm so glad you're liking it!

Reviewer: Jaden Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/29/2008 - 08:54 pm Title: Chapter 6

Finally, a real breakthrough! Though if I know Buffy, it's three steps forward, two steps back. I have to say I love your development of this other world. It's intricate and realistic, and I think the Quenya and Diarchy would be interesting even without our favorite characters ^_^ Can't wait to see what's next!

Author's Response: Oh, thank you for saying that! I really wanted to make an interesting and believable new world. I'm so glad you like it!

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/29/2008 - 08:52 pm Title: Chapter 6

Oooh shapeshifters! Outstanding! Now Xander's showing his true colours and Anya's had enough. I don't blame her. Buffy's learning acceptance too, and slowly recognising how important Spike has become to her. "Need you with me. Don’t want to lose you.” Oh yeah... Xander's not going to be happy about that either...

Author's Response: They're all coming to understand things. But Xander won't be happy. Thank you for liking it!

Reviewer: LadyE Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/29/2008 - 06:45 am Title: Chapter 5

OOOoooOO...Buffy's jealous!

great chp!

Author's Response: That should make her think. :D

Reviewer: marta Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/29/2008 - 05:21 am Title: Chapter 5

Fantastic! A really fun read.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you're liking it!

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/29/2008 - 12:48 am Title: Chapter 5

I like this Serrai...has the hots for Spike.. and the Quenya controls big cats.. and what else?

Waiting to hear more..

Author's Response: Maybe having competition will wake Buffy up. :D Thank you for liking this!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2008 - 09:52 pm Title: Chapter 5

Lioslath noticed sooner what Spike did then Spike hoped *g*
Seems Buffy is already a bit 'bending'. At last she started to think. Xander is the only one that isn't happy about how things are developing, neither Spike becoming a part of the team, nor Anya's freedom. Instead of being happy for her like he should.
Guessed about the dragons but the big cat is far more dangerous for them if they can't leave the road and don't have the right weapons.
But wearing a collar. Pets indeed.
Ah... at last the cats won't be a problem now. Hopefully this twist will be good for them in the end.
Hehe... (Serrai argument that Spike got the wound for them and they had to give him blood. True.)
And Buffy found out that she's jealous... but she's not ready to confess to herself that's the feeling she has, being angry. And having a rival in Serrai. I hope she (Buffy) will get her head out of the sand (out of denial) before it's too late and she will feel only regrets.

Author's Response: Oh, I'm so glad you liked it! Buffy now has to think what she really wants, with Serrai around. And I got the action right *whew*

Reviewer: AMI Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2008 - 09:48 pm Title: Chapter 5

Loved this chapter , it was really exciting, love the descriptions of this wild and dangerous world..Liked the scene with Serrai , it was sexy and Buffy is sooo jealous *hehe* I liked the way Serrai reprimanded them for not feeding Spike after what he had done for them.Spike is really a hero here and they need to realize that! Can't wait for Serrai to attempt Spike! Wonder what Buffy will do?

Can't wait for tomorrows chappie, this is so GOOD ! =)

Author's Response: A rival might make Buffy think :D Thank you for liking it!

Reviewer: Nicka Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2008 - 09:44 pm Title: Chapter 5

Oh how I love that jealous streak, more please soon.

Author's Response: Serrai's given her something to think about. :D More coming.

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2008 - 09:22 pm Title: Chapter 5

Oooooh lovely long chapter!
Oh this is getting better and better. Everyone's character is being put under the microscope as happens naturally when you're stranded together in unfamiliar circumstances for an extended period. Xander is showing his whiney immaturity and callousness towards Anya (always hated that), Tara is showing her gentle caring self, Spike is showing his adaptability and loyalty, Anya's just being Anya (no side to her at all), Willow's feeling her way with the magic and learning to trust Spike, and Buffy is having her automatic dismissal of Spike's efforts shoved under her nose... and she's already comparing his attitude to the Scoobies' and consequently wishing it was just her & Spike! Love her jealousy regarding Serrai.

Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it! Thank you! Serrai's given her something to think about.

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2008 - 04:47 pm Title: Chapter 4

What an intriguing character you've created in Lioslath. His observations of the gang and their dynamic was entertaining and enlightening. I loved this capture of Buffy: "There are walls all around you. You exist within them, folding yourself to fit that small space. How can you breathe, constricted like that, with so little air?" Here's hoping she takes his advice and becomes more flexible and less judgmental. At least she's trying.

Author's Response: Someone had to break Buffy out of her narrow focus. Lioslath's a catalyst for all of them. Thank you for liking it!

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2008 - 04:28 pm Title: Chapter 3

This was another sharp, vivid chapter. This steady, in charge Spike is a joy to read. He's keeping the gang afloat in this dimension. Buffy's off kilter and combative, but in this chapter she was a bit less harsh until they hit the inn. Spike keeps pushing and goading, and she doesn't like the truth of her attraction being thrown in her face. It's all very entertaining.

Author's Response: 'Harsh Light of Day' showed a Spike who kept his team together and worked steadily towards his objective. I could see him doing that through his 120 years. But he also never can keep from pushing and of course Buffy reacts badly. I'm so glad you like it!

Reviewer: undeadgirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2008 - 08:48 am Title: Chapter 4

Oh dear...just brilliant!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so glad you're liking it!

Reviewer: LadyE Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2008 - 06:29 am Title: Chapter 4

I love Lioslath ... he's so fascinating! Excellent chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you! I wanted a different kind of wizard. I'm so glad you liked it!

Reviewer: LadyE Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2008 - 06:00 am Title: Chapter 3

excellent chapter! I love how Spike is getting back his own : )

Author's Response: I hated the way he was treated through most of Season 5 and really wanted him to rub it in. Thank you for liking it!

Reviewer: AMI Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2008 - 03:41 am Title: Chapter 4

Hopefully Buffy will open her eyes now and see Spike differently . Loved the conversations in this chapppie..
BOO Xander , God he's annoying ! Can't wait for the adventure to begin .
Great chapter,can't wait for more:D

Author's Response: Everybody's going to be learning something in this dimension. I'm so not a fan of Xander and I'm having fun kicking him around a bit here. Thank you so much for liking the story!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/27/2008 - 11:38 pm Title: Chapter 4

Had to check the chapter out today :)
Interesting twist in this chapter; so they are found out now. At last this man (Lioslath) sounds as if he can help them (and that's way better then trying to kill them all).
Mmmm but things got a bit more difficult with the gate destroyed. *wonders if we'll meet dragons again (not really though, Lioslath didn't knew of them)*
Loved the support of Anya, showing her her strength. Xander didn't like it. But Anya was like Buffy when she thought it's her fault that something is wrong (reminded me because Buffy and her men leaving her, starting with her father).
Too bad they won't have Lioslath around when they are gone. He's good, organizing and all. And judging / helping too (Willow).
Seems his works did make Buffy think a bit (that can never hurt, huh?)
~ Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: I hoped Lioslath not knowing about dragons would let people know there wouldn't be any. I didn't want to repeat things. And Buffy really needs to start thinking! I'm so glad you like this! Thank you!

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/27/2008 - 11:21 pm Title: Chapter 4

Oh, I do like Lioslath! He's giving them a real wake-up call. I love the way he immediately understood Anya and tried to help her, while Xander resisted with all his might. He is so uncomfortable thinking about her true character!
I'm really looking forward to this road trip...

Author's Response: Xander always wants to forget what Anya was and keeps nagging at her. I hated that. I'm so glad you're liking this! Thank you!

Reviewer: undead girl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/27/2008 - 12:20 pm Title: Chapter 3

*panting* - Amazing story. I am so grateful for the daily chapter...You spoil us. Thank you.
I looooooooooove this Spike so much. I would gladly let him bite me...OR I would bite him instead...mmmm. *o* BitchyBuffy!

Author's Response: Oh, yeah! Gorgeous thought! :D I'm so glad you like it! Thank you!

Reviewer: Abbie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/27/2008 - 12:03 pm Title: Chapter 3

I forgot about the Judge stuff.

Good to see more Spuffy.

Can Xander just die? lol

Author's Response: More Spuffy definitely coming! And Xander's gonna get his. Promise. :D

Reviewer: AMI Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/27/2008 - 12:30 am Title: Chapter 3

God I really love this story! Another excellent chappie,hon :) It's good that Buffy and Spike had a kinda normal talk, but she's still being a bitch and was jealous of Spike with the maids but just won't admit it..

Oh the UST between Spike and Buffy is really heating up !!

Can't wait for tomorrows chappie..;D

Author's Response: That's Buffy - always in denial. But she's going to get her eyes opened. Thank you for liking this!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/26/2008 - 11:11 pm Title: Chapter 3

Didn't expect to find another chapter today :)
Spike knows his way around; experience from the past. Being careful in a strange world is a good start. Seems the Scoobies - city slickers - still have to learn this.
Buffy can't stand the truth Spike is telling her. Maybe she has to see it with her own eyes.
~And again, looking forward to more, tomorrow or later.

Author's Response: More coming tomorrow. The Scoobies can be so naive about humans - humans good/ demons bad. Yeah, right. And Buffy closes her eyes to the truth even when she's looking right at it, doesn't she? I'm so glad you're still liking this!

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/26/2008 - 11:07 pm Title: Chapter 3

And i want her dead, guess we all win. i don't think i've ever wanted her dead so much before in a fiction, but i really hate her here.

Author's Response: Hang in there. This is Buffy from most of Season 5, blaming Spike for exposing Riley and constantly giving him a hard time. But she's got a few lessons coming up!

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/26/2008 - 10:55 pm Title: Chapter 3

Love the longer than average chapters!
It's so painful for Buffy to relax her principles, isn't it? She'll have to though, if they're all going to survive! I hope they start to accept that Spike knows what he's doing soon or there are going to be a few bruises going around. Oh yeah, Buffy is sooooo deep in denial! LOL

Author's Response: It's hard to accept that there are grays when you've been living a black and white life. But Buffy's going to have a few lessons. Thank you for liking this!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/26/2008 - 10:35 pm Title: Chapter 2

BTW - in case if you're posting at Vampires Kiss too, the site is back now. :)
Mmmh for a moment I thought Buffy would come out of denial. But not really, huh?
Anya is right, it would have been easier to look for shelter when it was still light out there. *wonders if the light belongs to Spike*
*nods* it was; Spike at last didn't expect the witches to do wonders.
It will be a rocky way. Buffy must come to terms with the facts Spike told her.
~ Looking forward to more :)

Author's Response: You know Buffy - absolutely refuses to see anything she doesn't want to. I'm so glad you're liking this! Thank you!

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