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Reviewer: quirks Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/04/2009 - 04:06 am Title: 10

aw! spike's pain is sad, so close to everything he wants but not close enough. oh, kennedy, what silly scrapes she gets herself into.

Author's Response: Kennedy is in a mess... Dun dun dun dun, will she make the right choices?? More up soon. Thank you for reading and reviewing! *hugs*

Reviewer: DragonflyLady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/24/2009 - 05:53 am Title: 10

*gives Spike a big hug cos he needs one*
Kennedy seems to have an excellent memory. I wonder what the Immortal has planned for her. *ponders*
Poor Willow and Dawn, shooting blind.
*smoochies*

Author's Response: Spike will get his chance at happiness. What do you think I am? A monster??? :P Thank you for reviewing, babe! *mwah*

Reviewer: laura_exist2inspire Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/12/2009 - 06:47 pm Title: 10

Am I seeing a hint of Xander and Dawn-ness?? Bless them! Poor Spike, it must be really hard to have to go back to a Buffy that doesn't love him like this one does. If he can get there that is! Brilliant chapter, hope your muse doesn't keep distracting you with smut, altho I'm not exactly complaining lol I think you are doing very well with character formation so far but I can imagine AU-AH would be easier as you have more freedom to do what you want with them. You are doing good, well done, looking forward to more when you can :-)

Author's Response: Tehehe, there may be some X/D in the future, yes. AU is easier mostly because I can pick and choose which characters to use. This story means I have to write ALL of them, and that is really exhausting at times. Nevertheless, it's slowly coming along again, so I'm all happy about it. Hope to have more for you soon (next chappie is with my betas, so yay!) Thank you for the awesome review! *squishes*

Reviewer: pixiecorn Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/06/2009 - 05:13 am Title: 10

i'm loving this story :) i can't wait to see where you take it. Will they finally get past spike back into the right dimension and time?? and i can't wait to see what perks you're going to add to Buffy and Williams claim:) *gins*

update again soon hehe

Author's Response: Thank you, thank you, thank you!!! I'm sorry to have kept you waiting so long, but Andrei was here and there was no time to write. The next chapter is now with my betas, so it will hopefully be with you soon! *huggles*

Reviewer: Blackoberst Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/05/2009 - 10:31 pm Title: 10

Pain or no pain, I love this story. The pawns are slowly moving into place and the tone is ominous enought to get the attention. I love you very much!

Author's Response: Thank you, baby. I love you and I'm really glad you give this story your seal of approval! *MWAH*

Reviewer: callmekitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2009 - 01:28 am Title: 10

Baby I love this story :) dont give up. I like the claim/mate issues and glad they were address. I feel Buffy, William, and Spikes pain as if it was my own. That should tell you something. Well done. Keep up the good work. Love Ya

Author's Response: Thank you so much, honey. You can't imagine how much it means to me that you like the story so much. *hugs tight*

Reviewer: Im_bloody_English Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2009 - 01:18 am Title: 10

Eeeeep - I'll be so damn curious to see what's in store for Kennedy and how she'll react. She can be on the outs with Willow and hate Buffy all she wants - but in the face of Berto, I hope she'll do the right thing.

As for Spike - I feel so bad for him and Buffy in realtion to finding his universe, but I do so hope that maybe the thought the 'other' Buffy needs her Spike will help them both in the end. It will be a bittersweet solution.

I'm so glad you updated boo - this was an excellent chapter!!! Luv you my darling sister.

Author's Response: Kennedy will do what she thinks is right. The question is, will she realize what IS right and what only seems that way? Thank you for reviewing and for EVERYTHING, boo, I love you lots and lots!!! *smooches* ♥

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/03/2009 - 11:25 pm Title: 10

Ah so it was because of Spike having to leave that he refused.
Kennedy is in deep trouble; I wonder how long it will take the others to figure out that she is gone (and where she went).
Seems Buffy will keep Spike for a while? Nobody knows where he has to go to.
~ Looking forward to more :)

Author's Response: Kennedy is in trouble, and it'll get worse for a while. Buffy hopes she'll manage to keep Spike, but... well, can't tell you that :P Thank you for reviewing, honey, and for still being with this story!!! *SQUISHES*

Reviewer: spikeluv84 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/03/2009 - 09:13 am Title: 10

i really liked this chapter! i would've never figured to use Dawn as a key again. i always figured once Glory was dead, she couldn't be used again. but they never touched on that so good job!

i know exactly what u mean! i usually have it all played out in my head, the whole film. but it just doesn't want to go down on paper right. it is so frustrating!

i'm a dunce, but what is AU-AH? is it alternate universe and het?? i understand the AU part. just not AH. and what the heck is HET??? i've never understood. speak to me o' wise one and make my brain stop hurting!

poor Spike. i kinda do and don't want his universe to be found. it's a no win situation. but i seriously do hope Kennedy gets a few smacks!

Monica

Author's Response: I'm really glad you liked the chapter! WOOT! I'm also glad that I'm not the only one whose characters are mutinous and refuse to play nice with the plot. AH is all human, and het is HETerosexual smut (opposite of slash, see?) Kennedy will play her part in the story and Spike will go back, but think about it: won't it be better if TWO Buffys find happiness? ;-) Thank you for the review, gurlie *squishes*

Reviewer: fyreburned Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/03/2009 - 08:49 am Title: 10

Awww, honey, I'm so proud of you! Our little author is growing up! LOL! But seriously, FWIW, I seriously LIKE your venture into more serious writing. I think it shows growth and forethought, and depth of character and plot. I love the twists you're building into this (I think--I hope! Even if I ain't so much into angsty stuff!) and I literally can hardly wait until more and more is posted by you. Of course I can't HELP but love these characters---hey they're spuffy or billiam or whatever the three of them are called!-- they're this gorgeously sexy trio whose very "existence" oozes sex and smut all on it's own to the point that, heck, you don't even HAVE to write the smut for these three it plays out in autopilot in our (my?) head(s) at the mention of these three...would these be B+S2 ("squared")??? ...Anyhow, can't help but to love them and this fic (which the prequel came about after/during a scary time in my life and helped me have something fun to think about at the time---and for that I DO thank you, BTW!), and do look forward to more of it so to see what you will do with it. I know AH/AU may come easier to write, or fluff/smut, but don't abandon this kinda fic entirely---you're doing quite well and good things come along after a little trial & error, work & toil, etc etc===nothing good comes easy! So, more, more, more! OK, honey?
~~Kara

Author's Response: I'm all misty-eyed, woman. Thank you so very much for this review. I'm really glad you like this story and find it to prove some growing up on my part. It's hard to write, but responses like this make it all worthwhile. A couple of days ago I was telling Andrei that I was thinking of giving up writing all together. He changed my mind, and after this I'm more than glad that he did. Thank you, from the bottom of my heart! *hugs tight* ♥

Reviewer: AMI Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/03/2009 - 07:38 am Title: 10

I'm so happy to see an update on this.Another good chappie. My heart was breaking for Spike when he told her why he couldn't claim her.Poor Buffy, I'm glad William is helping her to see where Spike is coming from, or else I think she would have made it worse for Spike. :( Is Giles gonna go to see The Immortal or Buffy and Spike?God. I love this story so much, it has me anticipating every new chapter.

I'm sorry you're having trouble with your smut -loving muse.;D Don't worry we'll stick by this story, you write it how you want to. (even tho smut is good.*giggles*)

Loved it, honey..more when you can. *squishes*

Author's Response: Thank you, honey! It means a lot that you like the story, AND that you're willing to stick by it. I swear I have it all planned out, outline and all, but then Buffy decides to get silly, or Spike wants to be a sexy bastard, and it's hard keeping them in line. I WILL finish the story, however, and I'll make it as good as I can! Thank you again, you rock! *squishes*

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