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Reviewer: xoChantelly Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/11/2009 - 10:55 pm Title: 8

awww! I loved this chapter! The smut was short and sweet. Buffy had her first real 'no-help-needed' orgasm and william proisem more. I cant believe Dru is pregnant tho! I could understand better is she was faking it to get william back but knowing that it is real just makes me go "Oh no! What is William going to do... or is it Angels?" off to find out more!!

Author's Response: Thank you for your reviews, hope you'll like the rest of the story as well! :)

Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/25/2009 - 04:27 pm Title: 8

I liked the chapter but I don't like the idea that Drusilla is pregnant. It is just another roadblock for Spike and Buffy. However, it is your story and I am just along for the ride. I have hopes that Drusilla will eventually get what is coming to her.

Author's Response: She will. Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/21/2009 - 08:53 pm Title: 8

Dru is such a witch! Can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response: That she is. Next chap is up, hope you'll like. Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: iamghost Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/21/2009 - 08:46 pm Title: 8

Ugh.. I hate Drusilla, she is so evil! But I'm nervous now that there won't be a happy Spuffy :(
But I think you will figure out a way right? *hopes*
Great chappie!

Author's Response: Of course there will be happy Spuffy! :) Glad you liked the chapter, thanks for your reveiw!

Reviewer: Dorians Kitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/21/2009 - 06:10 pm Title: 8

Love! Love the new chapter.

Author's Response: Yay! Thank you! :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/21/2009 - 11:12 am Title: 8

Uh-huh... besides the spuffyness I enjoyed reading things just got complicated. I hope it won't get too bad (or William going back to Drusilla) because of the pregnancy. She even doesn't know who the father is - I hope too that William isn't so silly to trust her.

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! Hopefully you won't have to worry too much. :)

Reviewer: AMI Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/21/2009 - 02:23 am Title: 8

Loved the Spuffy sexiness! So, so sweet. And now crazy ho bag is pregnant. Hopefully William will not fall for that trap and insist on a paternity test, and Buffy will stick by him no matter what. Dru is really delusional...feel so sorry for any kid she has.

Looking forward to the next chappie!

Author's Response: Thank you so much, just posted the next chap. :)

Reviewer: Spikes_slayer08 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/20/2009 - 10:02 pm Title: 8

Awesome update so sweet and sexy, more please.

Author's Response: Thanks, glad you liked it! :)

Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/20/2009 - 07:32 pm Title: 8

I hope that Drusilla's plan does not cause Spike and Buffy any additional pain. I hope that her nefarious plan is short lived. Please update soon. Spike deserves to be happy and not always so sad.

Author's Response: You're right. Thanks for your review! :)

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/20/2009 - 02:24 pm Title: 8

Drusilla - pregnant.. And of course is going to try to use William ..

Yuck..

Enjoying.

Author's Response: Good to hear. Thank you! :)

Reviewer: TammyAsh666 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/20/2009 - 02:10 pm Title: 8

Well, that won't be a fun conversation. Drusilla really does live in her own little delusional world, doesn't she? If she thinks William will give a damn about her being pregnant, he knows she cheated a lot, so his first thought will probably be that it's not his, and I'm still hoping it's not. I feel sorry for this kid, having a complete nutcase for a mother.

Author's Response: I agree. For some reason, I just love writing evil/crazy Dru. :) Thanks for reviewing!

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