Date: 05/07/2010 - 11:00 am Title: Just Rewards (Part 2)
Typical misunderstandings. It wouldn't be Spuffy if they didn't get crossed wires occasionally, they're both so insecure! Nice twist on the Hainsley episode, and typical Angel, trying to keep Buffy & Spike from each other. Chapter's a nice length, I find very short chapters very unsatisfying.
Author's Response: Thanks. I agree short chapters are unsatisfying. I'm looking forward to your review of the next chapter. And any advice about how to present the one after that would be appreciated.
Date: 09/30/2009 - 01:38 am Title: Just Rewards (Part 2)
It was good to see Buffy telling Angel off, that Spike was important to her :) But I wish she hadn't upset Spike by asking to speak to Angel alone - d'oh! The misunderstanding is very Spike and Buffy lol
I liked all the original content you had in the chapter, good job!
*smooch*
Date: 09/27/2009 - 10:30 pm Title: Just Rewards (Part 2)
It's coming along very nicely. eager for more
Date: 09/27/2009 - 10:19 pm Title: Just Rewards (Part 2)
I like this so far, you have inserted Buffy and crew well, the chapters are not tool long at all, good work.
Date: 09/27/2009 - 09:04 pm Title: Just Rewards (Part 2)
Looks good.