Not too may errors, just a few wandering tenses. I like the way you're weaving Buffy & Dawn into the events of Ats season 5, but surprised that Spike isn't making more of an effort to get close to Buffy. IMHO his competitiveness with Angel would have made him try to influence her towards him even if he did think she was trying to get back with Angel. Sorry, can't help with the next chapter, only you know where you want the story to go...

Author's Response: Thanks. I know I must have made some grammar mistakes. English is not my 1st language. I apologize for that.

As for Spike, he is in an inner turmoil right now. He still has his soul. And he is not in a strong position to approach her right now (being ghost). After seeing her with Angel, he feels insecure especially since Buffy hasn't mentioned what she said to him in the cave.

For the next chapter, I am worried about plagarism. Because those who saw Angel season 5 may be able to follow the storyline but those who didn't will get confused about what is happening unless I write the same scenes from the episode. I want it to be authentic like so I don't want to change the dialogues. That's why I'm confused on how to proceed.

Please keep reviewing.