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Reviewer: iris Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/15/2009 - 07:49 pm Title: Four

I love love love this.....

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Date: 06/15/2009 - 05:34 pm Title: Eleven

Awe, loved the scene in the kitchen with both 'Kids'. Spike was cute (even if he didn't intend to be).
Good to know for us readers that Maggie Walsh has no clue where Buffy and company are. Seems the first part of the plan worked fine. :D

Reviewer: Pet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/15/2009 - 02:16 pm Title: Eleven

Great updates! Still enjoying this story very much. Looking forward to more. :)

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/15/2009 - 01:22 pm Title: Eleven

I really like how you are choosing to write Riley. In this chapter you find the perfect balance between the decent guy, soldier, and black-and-white view that Buffy needs to admit she is a 'good demon' and it is alright for them to find some way to control her against her will to use her, for a greater good. It's hard to find a fic without Riley-bashing or over-the-top love for Buffy, but you've managed to keep Riley an individual, realistic character.

Joyce's interaction with Spike, Giles, and Buffy is very well done, too, and I look forward to seeing more. Buffy's thoughts about Angel are a step in maturing for her. glad she noticed how hot Spike was after just waking up!

Looking forward to the next chapter and Buffy's conversation with Angel. I think it will be very enlightening. Please update soon!

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/15/2009 - 06:03 am Title: Eleven

I like the accomodations Buffy and crew have arranged. Seems like her "counter-initiative" headquarters are in effect. I like that fact that friendly demons are all with helping the slayer to bring down a common foe. Look forward to more.

Reviewer: IT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/15/2009 - 05:11 am Title: Eleven

Just caught up with two chapters - woohoo! Still enjoying this fic. Hope more is coming soon. :)

Reviewer: jackson Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/08/2009 - 08:42 pm Title: Ten

great story can't wait for more

Reviewer: Awesome Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/07/2009 - 03:45 pm Title: Ten

This is one of my fav fics you are an imaginative writer with an excellent style of storytelling. My only worry is that your beta is letting you down. Just a small amount of tweaking is needed with punctuation and a couple of typos eg: Treat = Threat

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/07/2009 - 10:01 am Title: Ten

Always glad to see an update :)
Would indeed be bad if lets say Buffy would loose the charm and an unwanted guest would be able to cross the wards. Well they have to know first what they are made for so she should be save too. But maybe not able to return to the mansion. ;)
Willow seems to be on Spike's side too. Can't hurt to have a supporter. And Spike really tries to get along / be helpful. And mainly because of what Buffy would want. :)
Willow saw it too.
~ Looking forward to more, enjoyed the read.

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/07/2009 - 06:26 am Title: Ten

Glad you like the banner and I love the update, looking forward to more.

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/07/2009 - 02:30 am Title: Ten

Another great chapter. Your way of showing Willow's character is perfect; not too-sweet and yay for Spike, but not desperate with fear, but reasonable and brave in a Willow way. i liked how Spike was with Willow, too. And I'm glad Buffy isn't in total denial about something happening between her and Spike.
update soon!

Reviewer: fyreburned Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/22/2009 - 06:01 pm Title: Nine

Loved the update! Thanks! More soon please!
~~Kara

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/06/2009 - 06:38 am Title: Nine

Loved reading this chapter, I jumped for joy when I saw it. I enjoyed reading on how they comfort each other. I need some Gourlack demons in my home! Where can I get them? LOL! More chapters please.

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/05/2009 - 10:44 pm Title: Nine

Happy to see another update, hope things are getting better for you... 'cos I want more! Glad to see Buffy & Spike sharing confidences and becoming even closer, loved the sweet little kiss. Loved the description of the mansion, we never saw much of it on the show, probably because it was practically a ruin. Handy having their rooms away from everyone else's......

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/05/2009 - 09:25 pm Title: Nine

The mansion sounds very lovely now that it is cleaned. Very thoughtful, having the rooms decorated for everybody / chosen (like the 'library' for Giles).
And Buffy + Spike = the time in the Initiative has brought them near to one another.
So good to see this updated :)

Reviewer: Gina Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/05/2009 - 12:45 pm Title: Nine

I'm happy that this updated, and I really like how you showed Spike and Buffy having naturally gotten so close. Spike realizing how his feelings have changed is very natural in this story, as well as their comforting each other in the Initiative. Next chapter I hope to see what those humans are planning, and a part of me hopes Spike figures out a way to get rid of the chip before the showdown is complete.
Another great chapter.

Reviewer: Lou Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/05/2009 - 12:42 pm Title: Nine

Awww - such a sweet first kiss.

Reviewer: IT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/05/2009 - 04:47 am Title: Nine

Hope RL's treating you better now. I missed this fic! So glad you're writing again.

I love the little tender moments between Buffy and Spike. Thanks for updating.

Reviewer: Shell Presto Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/27/2009 - 09:33 am Title: Eight

Gotta say I love the analysis of slayer vs. soldier here. Sometimes I get bogged down in philosophy within a fanfic, but not here. *applauds*

Besides that, nice flow, nice detail, natural voices.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/25/2009 - 10:53 pm Title: Eight

Having both bad memories helps to know what the other may feel - good Buffy acted on it and took Spike's hand.
Neat - having the help of the Gourlack demons :)
Ah Buffy got a reminder too if all demons are evil or not.

Reviewer: Pet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/25/2009 - 04:01 pm Title: Eight

Buffy and Spika are getting closer. Great update! Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/25/2009 - 03:34 pm Title: Eight

Fascinating discussion about how slayers are trained to think like soldiers are, and Spike unafraid to state his evil nature with Buffy accepting it when he'd like to kill the humans. Great job on this chapter and i'm looking forward to seeing more.

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/25/2009 - 11:43 am Title: Eight

I love the way the friendship is slowly growing between Buffy & Spike. Relying on each other while in captivity is one thing, continuing the alliance once they're free is a far more tricky proposition and you're handling it very well.
Looking forward to the inevitable awkwardness once they're all cooped up in the mansion...

Reviewer: IT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/25/2009 - 03:11 am Title: Eight

Thanks for the update. I really enjoyed the exchange between them at the end of the chapter. It was very open and honest.

Reviewer: GoldenUsagi Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/23/2009 - 05:27 am Title: Four

Poor Buffy. I hope she can deal with whatever the Initiative did to her, and talk to someone about it. Like Spike? :)

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