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Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/07/2009 - 01:37 pm Title: Seven

Well it's not as if they have many places to chose from for hiding so they must take what they can get.
Mmmh sound if somebody is jealous, huh? Buffy protested too much :)
Looking forward to more.

Reviewer: Carol Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/07/2009 - 03:55 am Title: Seven

Still enjoying this. I can't imagine all of them together in one house. They'll drive each other crazy!

Reviewer: shayhop Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2009 - 04:49 am Title: Six

Great story! Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! New chapter was just put up...

Reviewer: callmekitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/22/2009 - 02:53 am Title: One

ooh! I do like it! am headed to read the next chapter now.. well done

Author's Response: Thanks so much :)

Reviewer: scaryscouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/20/2009 - 12:55 am Title: Six

Great story. Really enjoying it. Hope Joyce answers the door and gives them what for. More please

Author's Response: Not sure if they'll come up and ring the doorbell.... :)
more to come soon and thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2009 - 11:10 pm Title: Six

Wow that sounds almost as if Xander will be able to learn not to hate Spike (maybe he'll forgot some of his prejudices regarding demons/Spike).
Good plan - I liked how Anya turned out to be helpful.
Riley? Not sure if he will help, he is too much soldier not to follow his orders. ~ Enjoyed the update. :)

Author's Response: Xander is always a tough nut to crack in his hatred of Spike department.... but maybe he'll learn eventually. And I'm trying something new with Riley so maybe he'll surprise you in the end ;)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2009 - 11:09 pm Title: Six

Wow that sounds almost as if Xander will be able to learn not to hate Spike (maybe he'll forgot some of his prejudices regarding demons/Spike).
Good plan - I liked how Anya turned out to be helpful.
Riley? Not sure if he will help, he is too much soldier not to follow his orders. ~ Enjoyed the update. :)

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Reviewer: IT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2009 - 10:40 pm Title: Six

Yikes, Riley's on his way!

Thanks for using Anya's knowledge. I like it when she gets recognized for who/what she is.

More soon, please.

Author's Response: That he is and it will certainly throw a spanner in the works. More to come soon!

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2009 - 10:05 pm Title: Six

I always hated the way the Scoobies dismissed Anya's centuries of experience and knowledge of the demon world, I blame Xander's influence when he kept telling her to shut up every time she mentioned her former life, so I'm delighted you're allowing her to shine a little.
Little bit worried about Riey's squad arriving at the Summers home now... although it's beginning to look hopeful for Riley becoming an ally.

Author's Response: I always hated that too. Anya had tonnes of both knowledge and experience and I always make a point of bringing that in if I'm using her in a story. And Xander was a bad influence in her life I think. Thanks so much for taking the time to review!

Reviewer: Pet Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/14/2009 - 06:19 pm Title: Five

I'm glad Joyce is on Spike's side. Great chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

Reviewer: Lou Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/14/2009 - 11:14 am Title: Five

Nice to Giles easing up a little on Spike - they'll all need to be on board to take on the ghastly Initiative

Author's Response: Yup, that they will... more to come soon

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/14/2009 - 01:11 am Title: Five

Heh heh, Giles was in watcher mood at once :)
But at last he raised a good question (hurting demons).
Loved supportive Joyce, defending Spike / wanting Spike to stay.
And the Ripper is back... can't hurt, fighting the Initiative. Especially because Maggie Walsh wants both back.
Loved the update :) Have a good (and healthy again) Valentine's day.

Author's Response: I don't think Giles can ever get out of watcher mode ;) But he's finally getting on the right track. Thanks so much for the review and I'm finally feeling better.

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/13/2009 - 12:07 pm Title: Five

Sorry to hear you've been poorly, but glad to see your illness hasn't adversely affected you writing talents. I can't believe the commandos will be happy about searching 'civilians'' houses, although it's going to be a bit tricky if they find Buffy & Spike at Joyce's house. I hope they don't hurt her...

Author's Response: Writing is always of the good and thank you for that lovely compliment :) I'm happy you're enjoying the story!

Reviewer: IT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/13/2009 - 05:35 am Title: Five

Thanks for the update. Hope you're feeling better now.

Evil, evil Walsh! Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: I am thank you so much. And Walsh is a bitch of the uber evil variety ;)

Reviewer: fyreburned Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/03/2009 - 11:34 am Title: Four

Love it! I'm hooked.
Now, just wondering WHAT those incisions were for on the Slayer's belly...?
Thanks, can't wait for more of this fic!
~~Kara

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I love how many conspiracy theories that are already popping up about this story too. You'll just have to wait and see ;) Thanks for reviewing and another chapter should be up soon

Reviewer: Pet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2009 - 07:40 pm Title: Four

Just started reading this story and now I'm hooked. Really love this and I can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks! The next chapter should be up soon

Reviewer: Lou Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2009 - 04:52 pm Title: Four

Sweet - though Buffy's scars are slightly ominous.

Author's Response: Are they? You'll have to wait and find out ;) Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2009 - 02:01 pm Title: Four

What do I think? I think this story is good and getting better. Can't help wondering what the Initiative has been doing cutting up Buffy's abdomen....

Author's Response: Thanks :) I'm happy to hear the story is getting better. Next update should be up soon.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2009 - 11:24 am Title: Four

I would have wondered if Buffy looked the same after the time in the Initiative; that's nothing that goes by you unnoticed. But she'll be (look better) soon; maybe it will still be in her eyes.
Loved Buffy's fun about the testing (un-scholarly/rocked the academics).
And it sounds as if Spike will enjoy being around :)
Loved the update.

Author's Response: Thanks so much. I try to be thorough with some details and realistically Buffy would be quite scarred both physically and emotionally after her time at the initiative. Spike will certainly see a different side of the scoobies. The next chapter should be up soon.

Reviewer: victoria2 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2009 - 06:53 am Title: Four

This is a great story. I love how the relationhip is developing between Buffy and Spike. Looking forward to the Riley/Walsh and associates major ass kicking as well. LOL Can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Next chapter should be up soon

Reviewer: DayWalker Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/25/2009 - 11:47 pm Title: Three

Great chapter! I loved that you gave Spike a little support in Willow and Joyce. I can't wait for the next update. Good work!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I always loved Joyce's soft spot for Spike and think she would have risen to his defense if she had the chance. I'll try to update soon!

Reviewer: Zaira Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/24/2009 - 09:33 pm Title: One

It's an interesting idea for sure. Most storys have either Spike rescuing Buffy or Buffy saving Spike. Them teaming up against a common enemy could be a cool twist.
This first chapter was a little hard to read though, because you changed the perspective so often. I couldn't really get a feel for either character that way. It was more like a summary really, but maybe that'll change now that you have them both in place.

Author's Response: The first chapter was meant to be more of a summary as I had to place the events in canon and bring them both to the same place at the same time so there was a bit of jumping around. But hopefully things will settle down and you can get a better feel for things now :) Thanks for taking the time to review

Reviewer: Aeryn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/24/2009 - 12:38 pm Title: Three

They finally got out, woe unto the initiative for the Slayer is unleashed. hopefully more soon pls.

Author's Response: Woe unto the Initiative indeed, I'm not sure they're prepared to deal with the slayer in all her angry glory. Will update again soon. Thanks for the review

Reviewer: IT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/24/2009 - 06:52 am Title: Three

Just caught up with two chapters. So glad they escaped! Great job with the story so far. Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Thanks so much, new chapter should be up soon.

Reviewer: Carol Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/24/2009 - 02:33 am Title: Three

Great chapter. I'm really enjoying this.

Author's Response: Thanks so much, more to come soon

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