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Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/15/2009 - 07:03 pm Title: Love You All My Days

*happy sigh* Loved the chapter - some happiness between that angst that still could come. And what a surprise that they are really married now - a good wedding gift :D
Hank still forgot Buffy's birthday; so he can't complain that he wasn't invited.
~ Hope you feel better soon - take good care of yourself.

Author's Response: Thanks Cordy! Yeah, they deserved some happiness there, didn't they? I'm still trying to figure out what's up with Hank. I don't know why I made him into such a bastard again. LOL

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/15/2009 - 06:26 pm Title: Love You All My Days

Sorry I fell so badly behind with reviewing. I've been busy and missed a few updates so I've just read a whole chunk all at once. LOVE IT! Still worried about the council and poor Dana and Faith...

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you've been able to catch up! :)

Reviewer: TammyAsh666 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/15/2009 - 05:10 pm Title: Love You All My Days

You know I will never complain about fluff, I love me some sugary sweetness. I loved this chapter, it was something to take my mind off of how badly I want to kill Travers. I know the problems are right around the corner for them, but I'm glad nothing happened to ruin the ceremony and that they're officially married for real.

Author's Response: ;) Thanks Tammy! Yesterday I kept joking that the chapter was going to give me a cavity, and this morning, I woke up with a jaw ache. LOL! Nah, but I had fun writing the chapter. Got a little swept up in the romance and the fluffy, but there's nothing wrong with that every once in a while, right? There's some intense Faith stuff coming around the corner, and you can probably bet money that she's gonna be in Sunnydale pretty damned soon. :)

Reviewer: Pam s Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/15/2009 - 04:50 pm Title: Love You All My Days

Loved it ... Buffy gets her wish... and a priest that marries demons and Spike a member of documented society.. bonus.

enjoyed..

Author's Response: Thanks Pam! Buffy and Spike are going to have a lot of fun with that camera....LOL!

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/15/2009 - 06:04 am Title: A Slayer's Work is Never Done

Travers really knows how to kill two birds with one stone, Dana kills Faith - another slayer is called and then Dana is disposable. Look forward to the wedding in the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks Vette! Don't count Faith out just yet...she's a strong gal...and maybe what's happening to her will give her some semblance of a clue of how to fix whatever it is they did to Dana. ;)

Reviewer: AMI Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/15/2009 - 01:49 am Title: A Slayer's Work is Never Done

OMG Poor Dana and poor Faith..Travers needs to get his ass seriously handed to him! What an utter bastard. And now he's controlling Dana, that is not good. *eep* Love the vamp fight, but things are gonna get hard for them I fear. And I can't wait for the wedding...I don't care , make it as sappy and fluffy as you want, cause they deserve it. :)

Can't wait for the next chappie, I lurve this story!

Author's Response: Thanks Ami! Yeah, Travers deserves a lot of horrible things, doesn't he? Well...lots more to come soon...so stay tuned!

Reviewer: Jenn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/15/2009 - 01:34 am Title: A Slayer's Work is Never Done

That sucks that they got Dana and now there going to try and kill Faith. I'm worried about Buffy and the baby I hope that they will be ok and that the counsel won't win.

Author's Response: Thanks Jenn....more on that soon! :)

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2009 - 11:15 pm Title: A Slayer's Work is Never Done

Loved the chapters! Can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response: :) Thanks so much!

Reviewer: spuffy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2009 - 10:23 pm Title: A Slayer's Work is Never Done

love it!!!!
i was so sure that faith will get away!! ho well i still trust you ! :) lol

so .. the wedding?! YES!!!!!!!
im so so excited!

cant wait!!



Author's Response: :) Thanks! Yeah, I've been getting some grief for Faith letting Dana into the apartment. But, for all Faith knew, the drug hadn't worked. I mean, the girl shows up frantic, and they don't know exactly what this drug is supposed to do. I guess Faith should have been smarter than to let Dana in, but at the same time, one wouldn't think a shot of something would screw up someone so completely that they'd become a danger. Anyway....more on that soon!

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2009 - 09:55 pm Title: A Slayer's Work is Never Done

grr, i'm yelling the whole time that it's a trap, i thought faith would have been smarter than that. travers needs his ass to be seriously kicked, please let it happen. i know faith doesn't want to kill anymore, but i'd make an exception for him. hopefully dana will come to her senses.

Author's Response: You're right. I kind of cringed writing this chapter, because while my head kept screaming at me that Faith would just get the hell out of dodge, part of me needed her to stay, because as much as Faith is self-serving, she's also not the same girl she was back in Sunnydale. There's a kinship between the two of them because they've both been through a hell of a lot. Anyway...I'm still working out the kinks. More up soon!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2009 - 09:39 pm Title: A Slayer's Work is Never Done

Neat - another update :) Good to see.
Too late for Dana... but luckily she has a friend in Faith that cares what happens to her (nobody else is near enough to do something).
Too bad that Dana forgot that Faith is her friend.

Author's Response: Thanks Cordy! Obviously, Travers is the one perverting the entire Council's name. So he's not going by the book at all. His idea for a little pain-removal was just the beginning. Essentially, what he's doing, is building a Slayer to his liking. Faith's too rebellious, and Buffy is too, in her own way, and Dana's his perfect opportunity to have a Slayer that'll do the things he needs her to do. Of course, this almost automatically spells doom for the Scoobies and for Faith. But that's something that only time will reveal...:)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2009 - 07:19 pm Title: Hotel Fun

Buffy is truly a lucky woman :))
Poor Dana though... so near to get out of it. Thank god Faith is suspicious - still I fear the worst for her.

Author's Response: :) Thanks again! Yep, Buffy is pretty lucky, eh?

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2009 - 06:44 pm Title: Out of the Woods

Hopefully the Council didn't trick Giles, bring another Council member he didn't see.
Good that Buffy isn't suspecting anything - she'll be surprise to have a wedding to attend :)
Now of to the other chapter, maybe to find out what will happen to Dana and Faith.

Author's Response: :) Thanks Cordy! I think Buffy's safe...for right now, anyway. :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2009 - 06:29 pm Title: Healing Scars

Awe, good to hear that the baby is okay :)
Not being able to walk in the sun starts to bother Spike. He wouldn't be in time to save his child if it is in the sun. Hopefully they'll find a solution in the long run, may it be through the claim or magic.
The Council in Sunnydale isn't out for something good :(

Author's Response: :) Yeah, that sun thing is definitely an issue, huh? Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2009 - 02:31 pm Title: Hotel Fun

I would have thought Faith would have taken off.. Good for her but up against a lot of men.. with weapons and drugs.

And loved the Spuffy lovin'



Author's Response: Thanks Pam! Faith's definitely changed from the girl she used to be. She sees a weird kinship with Dana, maybe because they're both so flawed. Glad you liked the Spuffy lovin!

Reviewer: Jenn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2009 - 02:28 pm Title: Hotel Fun

That was hot. It was nice that Buffy and Spike got some time alone for a little while. Dawn having sex wasn't a surprise I figured she would. I can't believe they did that to Dana but I'm not surprised I just hope that Faith can help her before it's to late.

Author's Response: :) Thanks Jenn! Yeah, it was only a matter of time. I kinda didn't buy it that they had Dawn lose her virginity somewhere between the end of Season 7 and the comics. I mean, Buffy was 17. And Dawn was getting kinda smoochy with vamp-boy in Season 6. I figured she'd have had a little more experience by the end of the series. Not that I would've wanted her to, because Dawn felt like a little sister to me (though and I are similar in ages, LOL) but still. Lots more to come soon!

Reviewer: Jaden Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2009 - 02:17 pm Title: Hotel Fun

Shit's about to hit the fan! I'm loving it. And can I give a resounding ewww to Dawn having sex? Cause eww. Keep up the awesome work!

Author's Response: LOL, thanks Jaden! I know what you mean about Dawn. It kinda irked me to write, but this day in age, it's not that uncommon for 15 year olds...heck, it wasn't that uncommon back in my grandmother's age...they just didn't talk about it. LOL

Reviewer: Jenn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2009 - 02:10 pm Title: Out of the Woods

I'm glad that the counsel is gone for now and I hope that Faith and Dana get out of England fast. Can't wait for Buffy and Spikes wedding.

Author's Response: :)

Reviewer: Jenn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2009 - 02:10 pm Title: Out of the Woods

I'm glad that the counsel is gone for now and I hope that Faith and Dana get out of England fast. Can't wait for Buffy and Spikes wedding.

Author's Response: :) Thanks, Jenn! I'm writing the wedding chapter right now! :)

Reviewer: Pet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2009 - 11:41 am Title: Hotel Fun

Hot and sweet, although now I'm a bit worried about Dana. Keep the lovely chapters coming! :)

Author's Response: :) Thanks Pet! I'm already done with the next chapter and almost through with the one after that. There'll definitely be an update sometime today. Just wanna give folks a little time to get caught up!

Reviewer: AMI Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2009 - 06:47 am Title: Hotel Fun

Loved their hotel interlude...so hot!! They're so happy now, hope nothing bad happens. So Dawn is having sex? Hopefully she'll be alright. And now the Council has Dana, please let Faith kick their ass!

Good chappie, more soon please! :)

Author's Response: ;) Thanks again, Ami! Yeah, Dawn's trying to grow up. Faith is gonna do whatever is in her power...but it might not be that easy!

Reviewer: AMI Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2009 - 05:44 am Title: Out of the Woods

Cute chappie, liked the Brad Pitt and Angelina Jolie and Jennifer Aniston comments.*giggles* Good that the Council is gone and they can go back home. Can't wait for their romantic weekend and the commitment ceremony.

Enjoyed..

Author's Response: :) Thanks Ami!

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2009 - 04:41 am Title: Hotel Fun

grr, stupid council, always sticking their bloody nose in. i hope faith kicks their asses.

Author's Response: ;) Thanks! Faith's definitely not gonna let go without a fight!

Reviewer: guest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2009 - 03:00 am Title: Out of the Woods

LMAO, that you used my idea of Angelina Jolie. I love it. Spike may be love's bitch and think Buffy is the sexiest woman alive. But he still has eyes. At first I didn't think Angelina Jolie was all that either. But now I do. Now, I see what all the fuss is when it comes to her. She is very hot. I think Brad Pitt is very attractive but he doesn't do it for me. He never has. Now Johnny Depp does. If James Marsters and Johnny Depp was ever in a movie together I would be in heaven. LOL

Author's Response: :) Thanks! Yeah, Angelina is definitely gorgeous! I thought so when I watched her in Mr. and Mrs. Smith. :) Johnny Depp is the man of my dreams...actually ties with James Marsters. I just can't pick! ;)

Reviewer: Pet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2009 - 04:42 pm Title: Out of the Woods

So now they can go back. Looking forward to see what happens next. Great update!

Author's Response: Aw, thanks Pet! :)

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