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Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/06/2009 - 10:33 pm Title: Confrontation

I can't believe I forgot Spike was already souled! Glad Spike decided on a commitment ceremony. It's the next best thing to a wedding! Can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response: Thanks PhotographyNut! Don't worry, you're only one of several that forgot about Spike's soul. LOL...:) Lots more to come soon!

Reviewer: Nibblet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/06/2009 - 09:25 pm Title: Confrontation

AWESOME!

One little problem though. When Buffy's at Giles' place, you wrote " Spike asked, gently placing his hand on Buffy’s back." Instead of "Giles asked..." You might wanna correct that.

Author's Response: Whoops! Thanks for that! :)

Reviewer: Pet Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/06/2009 - 08:30 pm Title: Confrontation

Loved these last couple of chapters. :)

Author's Response: Thanks Pet! I admit I've been slacking and getting behind a little in my writing, because I"m so busy trying to catch up on your story, Healing! :)

Reviewer: AMI Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/06/2009 - 07:59 pm Title: Confrontation

YAY! I guessed about the commitment ceremony.hehe
Spike is so sweet to think about doing that for Buffy. Can't wait to see her reaction. Poor Buffy was so worried tho, glad Giles told her to talk to Spike.
Travers is a total bastard. OMG he's gonna use drugs on Faith and Dana, and God knows what the side effects will be.

I love this story, and you rock with the quick updates! :)

Author's Response: Yeah Travers is a wanker. I'm not even British, and that's totally the word I would use. LOL...:) Glad you're enjoying the story, Ami! :) Your feedback always makes me smile!

Reviewer: Jenn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/06/2009 - 06:09 pm Title: Confrontation

OMG I'm so excited that Buffy will be getting her special day. You had me worried about Spike leaving but this is just awesome. I can't wait to see the next chapter :)

Author's Response: Aw, thanks Jenn!!! Hehe...more coming soon!

Reviewer: demona424 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/06/2009 - 03:04 pm Title: Road to Redemption

I guess my question was answered! Faith always throws a monkey wrench in any story. Can't wait to see how this develops!

Author's Response: :) Thanks Demona! Yeah Faith is always a wild one....so it should be fun to write her!

Reviewer: carrot Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/06/2009 - 10:37 am Title: Late Night Chat

Oh no! No-no-no-no-no-no!!! Please its going to be fine, right?


Author's Response: :) Thanks carrot! You'll find out very soon!

Reviewer: TammyAsh666 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/06/2009 - 03:44 am Title: Late Night Chat

Well, I doubt after Buffy's many speeches that Spike is stupid enough to walk away, so I think they're talking about something else. Could it be the possibility of him becoming human? Probably not, but he did go and get a soul, there's no telling what else he would do. It must be something big if he needs WIllow's help.

Author's Response: Thanks Tammy! Spike's not an idiot, but he loves his family...and that's all I'm saying for now! ;)

Reviewer: guest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/06/2009 - 03:16 am Title: Late Night Chat

I don't think Buffy should jump to conclusions. She doesn't know what Spike and Willow were talking about. I don't see Spike just leaving Buffy especially not after Spike telling her many times to he isn't going to leave. That he wants to be there for the family. But I also know that Spike is love's bitch. So, I really have no idea what Spike and Willow were talking about.

Author's Response: ;) Thanks! We know that Buffy's under some stress right now, and she's freaking out. She's about to be a mom, and she's already worried about this new danger that they know nothing about. Lots of stuff is coming up, and I'm trying to keep it straight in my head. that's not easy! LOL

Reviewer: AMI Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/06/2009 - 02:49 am Title: Late Night Chat

OMG what an evil cliffie! What is Spike planning? Could it be like a commiment ceremony? I know he's not leaving Buffy cause he would never do that , and Willow wouldn't help him anyway. So it has to be something else. I don't like Travers talking about erasing Dana's memory and side in a war,that sounds ominous.

Good chappie, now you have me anxious about Spike.
More soon please, this is so interesting! :)

Author's Response: Thanks Ami! :) You might feel a little better if you watched the trailer I made for it...but then again it might confuse you more. I guess it makes sense to me since the story's in my head. ;) Lots more to come soon!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/06/2009 - 01:28 am Title: Late Night Chat

Have a feeling Spike is making a big mistake by keeping things secret. I could be wrong but it sounds like Spike is going to get a soul. Can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response: Thanks Photography Nut! Spike already got his soul back earlier in the story....;)

Reviewer: Jenn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/06/2009 - 01:09 am Title: Late Night Chat

please tell me that spike is not leaving and this will be a good thing because i'm worried now. not liking travers wanting to erase dana's memories.

Author's Response: You'll find out tomorrow! ;) Thanks!

Reviewer: pixiecorn Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/06/2009 - 12:40 am Title: Late Night Chat

:O:O *gasp* is spike really going to leave??


update again soon.....

Author's Response: ;) You'll find out soon enough! Thanks!

Reviewer: Jenn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/05/2009 - 09:53 pm Title: Road to Redemption

wow didn't see that coming at all. not looking forward to having faith come back in the mix at all.

Author's Response: Thanks Jenn...well, Faith might actually not be such a bad addition...but you never know. ;)

Reviewer: spikeluv84 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/05/2009 - 06:05 pm Title: Road to Redemption

i'm sooo lovin' this story!! once one thing gets settled, another thing pops up. seems like a Slayer's life alright!

Monica

Author's Response: Thanks Monica! I'm actually about to do another video trailer for the story (it kinda gets me in the mood to write more) and it might reveal a little more where this story's heading. :) Maybe...hehe...I'm evil like that.

Reviewer: Rainey Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/05/2009 - 03:49 pm Title: Road to Redemption

I'm very curious now... Is it a coincidence that Dana called Buffy "B?" And what is with this Travers being a decent person. I'm still loving the story!

Author's Response: Well, we know how Travers likes things to go his way...and he's kinda developing a little God complex. Well, I don't want to give anything away. ;)

Reviewer: Jaden Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/05/2009 - 01:46 pm Title: Road to Redemption

Uh oh. Bad news bears!! Faith plus (formerly crazy) Dana? This is a recipe for no good. Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: LOL, thanks Jaden! I'm trying to remember how Buffy feels about Faith at this point. I know they had a moment toward the end of Angel, but Buffy was still pretty angry for everything that went down with the Mayor and Riley and also with her pretending to be with Angel...all that stuff. So I'm just gonna go with it..LOL

Reviewer: whenimfree Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/05/2009 - 08:58 am Title: Road to Redemption

I'm enjoying this story...can't wait to see daddy!spike

Author's Response: Hahah...yeah, daddy Spike is always so cute isn't he?

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/05/2009 - 08:23 am Title: Road to Redemption

Good job ! lol :)
no really I like this chapter : buffy just to cute... and just funny situation
I like faith so I'll see what you'll do with her

Author's Response: LOL! Thanks!

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/05/2009 - 06:14 am Title: Road to Redemption

uh oh, travers actually wanting faith out of jail can't be a good thing.

Author's Response: LOL...well...we'll see!

Reviewer: AMI Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/05/2009 - 06:14 am Title: Road to Redemption

Poor Buffy and her morning sickness.Spike is really trying to be supportive. Loved the comment about the bunny theme for the nursery and Anya's reaction.lol
Oh oh, now Travers is getting Faith out of jail. Hope that doesn't cause trouble for Buffy and Spike.

Good chappie, can't wait for the next one.=)

Author's Response: Thanks Ami! Yeah, poor Buffy feeling like crap. :) Hehe...I love getting bunny jabs in as much as I possibly can!

Reviewer: demona424 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/05/2009 - 12:51 am Title: Look Within

Awesome chapter! Buffy was marvelous. She is a way better gal than I because I would have stormed in there and kicked his ass, which would have been fun, but I guess he needed some hard love instead. That was a solid 9 on the freak-out scale. Can't blame him too much, that was a freaky dream. And it was lovely to see the Scoobies all being supportive and not yelling "Demon child!" and then conspiring behind Buffy's back. I hope that Dana does turn out to be trust worthy, her character is definitely a sad little story. Do you have any plans for Faith in this story? And what about Buffy's Dad, is he doing the disappearing act again?

Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, I knew Buffy's options were kick his ass physically or emotionally, so I went with emotionally. It's funny you should mention Faith...LOL..:)

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/05/2009 - 12:49 am Title: Look Within

Spike really got upset over his nightmare! Now everyone knows about the baby and xander handled it pretty well! Can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response: :) Thank you! Yeah, Spike's nightmare was kinda freaky now that I go back and read it...yikes!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2009 - 11:58 pm Title: Look Within

It's getting a bit late for me so this will be short:
Loved the way Buffy solved the problem, her talk to Spike.
Good to see that telling the Scoobies went well (and to see them so supportive.

Author's Response: :) Thanks Cordy! It's gonna take them some getting used to, but it'll get better. :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2009 - 11:43 pm Title: Self-Doubt

Didn't expect the twist now, Spike running for the sake to protect his family, just because of some dreams.
*Off to the last chapter*

Author's Response: :) Thanks! Don't worry too much about the ending...:)

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