Date: 03/25/2009 - 11:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
Well, I just read the first Chapter, I felt that the story line was really interesting, but it was really really rushed.
Author's Response: Chapter one is supposed to be rushed, this is a spuffy story and he doesn't show up till season 2. I didn't want to spend too much time in Season 1.
Date: 03/19/2009 - 03:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
So far this is an excellent bit of plotty goodness!
I really enjoyed the way you broke down most of season one into smaller paragraphs and did a side by side comparision of Beth and Cassie.
I also believe that Cassie is working out very nicely, the combination of her personality with the same external forces that made Buffy so different from other Slayers makes her sort of a askew Buffy if you will. The quotes that get that little tilt or the action of a more obedient Slayer than Buffy was just works for me.
Onto the familiar bond with the Master, which I did not see coming by the way, brilliant! I'm curious who it is. I'm sure we can write off Angel and I want to say it isn't Darla as she has been with the Master for the last few years in canon (which you seem to be following for most of the plot, it's just with a twist), so that leaves Dru, Spike, Penn, or a random minion. As it's just a relationship with the Master it is not necessary for them to be descended from the Master-Darla-Angelus-Dru/Penn-Spike line.
Off to read more, I need answers!
Date: 01/16/2009 - 01:11 am Title: Chapter 1
nicely done, Vamp buffy :) onto next chappy
Date: 01/15/2009 - 12:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love this story, I have already read this story on your other site and can't wait to see more.
I don't like it. I LOVE it!
Date: 01/14/2009 - 10:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
Loved the action packed chapter! Looking forward to the next update!
Date: 01/14/2009 - 10:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
One of my favorite stories of yours :D
Date: 01/14/2009 - 06:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
Loved it and cant wait for more!
Date: 01/14/2009 - 12:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
So glad you started posting here. With Vampires Kiss seemingly having expired I'm regretting not saving loads of my favourite stories!
Looking forward to re-reading as you post.
Date: 01/14/2009 - 06:21 am Title: Chapter 1
Interesting start. Look forward to seeing what happens next. I'm guessing that Darla was her sire? I'm sure all will be revealled.