Date: 04/14/2009 - 12:31 pm Title: chapter 2
Hahahahahaha, I loved William's confrontation with Angel!
What had him worried earlier, tho? Did he see Dru somewhere in the crowd? Dun dun dun duuuun!!!
And is Ripper, Giles here too?
Loving it!
*huggles*
PS. Yes, still at work, shame on me!
Author's Response: I really love your guesses, they make my day.....more soon promise
Date: 02/18/2009 - 04:00 pm Title: chapter 2
Love it!! Great to see Angel get his - as should any bullies!!
Author's Response: glad you enjoyed...and i love bullies being brought down
Date: 02/18/2009 - 02:32 pm Title: chapter 2
*Finishes reading this chapter and looks up at Vara who is on the pc and demands to read chapter 3*
Yeay come on woman out of the chair me wants the next chappie!
*pouts at being told that she wont be able to get a peek of chapter three unless review is left*
There now "Mum" review is now written and posted... shift your arse so I can get to your writing files!
*Flutters lashes* Pretty please!
Oh I do love living round the corner from You!
Author's Response: yep..stop nagging, i'll give it to you on a data stick:)
updated now.....can I have my cuppa?
glad you liked
Date: 02/15/2009 - 02:26 pm Title: chapter 2
Great scene at the food court, I liked how William handled the Angel situation. Loved the bit about Janus, Joyce is totally gonna freak if Buffy ever invites Wiliam and his Dad over for dinner... lol! Wonderful update!
Author's Response: have you been peaking at the outline:)
glad you enjoyed and more soon
Date: 02/15/2009 - 12:20 pm Title: chapter 2
haha second chapter in and there's already angel bashing lol... update again soon:):)
Author's Response: lots of angel basing. i like angel bashing:)
thanks for the review and more soon
Date: 02/15/2009 - 02:15 am Title: chapter 2
Looks like William can take care of himself! Can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response: William can take care of himself and anyone else that he has too:)
more soon
Date: 02/15/2009 - 01:09 am Title: chapter 2
Oh YEAH! Gotta Always Love that Feral William! Yummmm!
As always, thanks for the new chappie and MORE ASAP!!!
~~Kara
Author's Response: more coming and glad you enjoyed
Date: 02/14/2009 - 09:31 pm Title: chapter 2
And there I wondered about William's reaction to the music shop / the Janus CD.... if you stayed true to the names no wonder about William's reaction :)) His dad was in the band, huh?
Awe :) Loved the spuffyness. It was fun to read their thought about the other. And loved William defending Buffy.
Author's Response: i think you are the only one who picked up on that:)
more soon, thanks for reviewing Cordykitten
Date: 02/14/2009 - 09:09 pm Title: chapter 2
Ooh-I love a William with hidden talents.
Nice start. :)
I noticed that you don't mention a beta-reader. If you're ever interested, I'll be reading this one anyway.
Author's Response: thanks for the offer. I have a very long suffering beta in the form of my hubby:)
glad you liked
more soon
Date: 02/14/2009 - 06:27 pm Title: chapter 2
Oh I'm such a sucker for William stories. Really enjoying this J.L. Can't wait for an update.
Author's Response: thank you and more soon, when i get 5 mins peace
Date: 02/14/2009 - 05:39 pm Title: chapter 2
Loved it! Angel sure got what he deserved. Yay William! :)
Author's Response: more soon and thanks for the review
Date: 02/14/2009 - 04:57 pm Title: chapter 2
Great story. I will definately be reading. One thing, why didn't they meet up with "the girls" at lunch like Buffy said?
Author's Response: the girls on the way. thanks for reviewing
Date: 02/14/2009 - 02:31 am Title: chapter 2
Just read both chappies and I love it so far. Ok, why is William so strong? And why did he space out while talking to Buffy? The Greatest Hits of JANUS? That has to mean something.lol Questions , questions. ;) And of course Angel is a total prick, hehe.
BTW..just a small typo, at the beginnig of the chappie William was wearing jeans and while they were eating suddenly he had on loose fitting trousers. Thought you'd want to fix that.
Great story .more,more soon pleaz! :)
Author's Response: do not rewrite chapter more than 3 times when tired...now write that out 100 times vara....
thanks for the catch, both my beta and i missed it
Date: 02/13/2009 - 11:00 pm Title: chapter 2
Fabulous first two chapters. I'm looking forward to reading more.
Just thought I'd point out though that you have him changing clothes in the middle of the chapter. In the first part of the chapter you said he was wearing blue jeans and a white tee. Later in the chapter you said he was wearing loose fitting trousers as jeans would be crippling. (Sorry don't mean to be annoying or anything especially if someone else has already pointed that out.)
Author's Response: late night writing is bad...very bad:) i will try and do better
Date: 02/13/2009 - 10:43 pm Title: chapter 2
Oh I love it! Go William Go. Freakishly strong and knowing awesome grappling moves. woohooo. I like this Spike already manhandling football players like they are what he eats for breakfast every morning cuz Wheaties was too wimpy for him.
Author's Response: thanks brett, there's more to come as well
Date: 02/13/2009 - 10:08 pm Title: chapter 2
*big grin* Love that Angel gets his.. and in front of thoses snotty girl! couldnt be better! cant wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: yep, right in front of all his 'fans'
more soon
Date: 02/13/2009 - 09:34 pm Title: chapter 2
Was worried at first that William wasn't going to help Buffy .. Angel the whimp now? And what makes Spike so strong?
Author's Response: hehehe...more questions than answers..just how i love it..more soon