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Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/02/2013 - 07:44 am Title: epilogue

This story had some good points, but the writing could use some polish. Not quite enough tension for a good romance, and quite a lot of inconsistencies and places where the plot or details jumped around with no connections, so lot of things didn't make sense to me. As for the "step sibling" thing, that is such a non-issue, I can't imagine anyone truly getting upset by that. I mean, William and Buffy were adults when they met and aren't related by blood... They couldn't be less incestuous, really.

Author's Response: many thanks for a lovely critique. Thank you for the critism as well.. without it I can't improve. This story was written a long time ago, and hopefully I have improved. I post on Maplebookshelf now. As for the stp-sibling thing, yes people did complain! although I couldn't see a problem as they had never lived together etc.

Reviewer: Sotia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/02/2009 - 03:25 pm Title: epilogue

Awww! Such a sweet ending to a sweet story. Thank you for sharing,
*hugs*

(Also, sorry it took me so long to finish it. RL has being busy)

Reviewer: Jon< Andy and Deb Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/24/2009 - 11:47 am Title: epilogue

Excellent - sorry to see it end as we really enjoyed it!! Love happy endings!!!

Reviewer: Angie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/11/2009 - 12:28 pm Title: epilogue

Great story, thank you for writing it!

My only question is at one point u said Clem was married and at the last bit he was bringing a girlfriend. Did they break up?

Reviewer: KAte Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/04/2009 - 07:35 pm Title: epilogue

Cute story, I loved all the tie in's. Poor Clem though...in chapter 13 he had a wife, and now at the end he's bringing a girlfriend. Does this mean divorce? Poor Clem.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/02/2009 - 09:37 pm Title: epilogue

*sigh* Sad to see it end. But I liked the jump into the future a lot. They have a good live together there.
I liked the way it ended.

Reviewer: AMI Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/02/2009 - 07:58 pm Title: epilogue

What a sweet ending. I loved it. Everyone is happy. Yay! Happy, still in love, sexy domestic Spuffy! My fave.:)

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/02/2009 - 12:32 pm Title: epilogue

Loved this!

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/02/2009 - 10:31 am Title: epilogue

Lovely epilogue, happy Spuffy endings always make me smile. :D Thanks for another wonderful story!

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