Enjoying...

Waiting to see where Dru is in Spike's life.. and if Buffy will take him back..

Oh this was a nice chapter, but so sad. Now Joyce is dead and Buffy and Spike haven't seen each other in four years. But she still loves him and he loves her too. They have to sit down and talk. Buffy should stay in her house, not get an apartment, I think that way they can start to grow close again. And please let Dru be out of the picture.

More soon please. =)

I needed something to cheer me up...and this chapter did not help at all....even it is a really good part...don't let me wait too long, hun....*huggles*

I am disappointed that you only made Spike feel like he did something wrong. Like he is the bad man that hurt Buffy. Buffy should learn to take responsibilities for her own actions. Don't put the blame on Spike. Buffy is also the one who ran away without telling Spike how she really felt. I'm so piss of at Buffy right now. Now, you her mother passed away. So let us feel sorry for her and let Spike come begging back to Buffy and ask for forgiveness from her. That is going to make me upset because Buffy should be the one to ask for forgiveness not Spike. I also hope that Spike doesn't act like a jealous jerk when it comes to Riley. If you do that I'm going to be disappointed with you and this story. Cause that would just be another reason for Spike to have to ask Buffy for forgiveness. While people seem to think Buffy is all innocent in this. I mean Buffy didn't feel like she has ask for forgiveness from Spike. She was a bitch to him before she left. Which makes me to read that she doesn't feel like she did wrong. I'm surprised that Spike stayed in Sunnydale. I figure after Miss. I can't be honest with my feelings so I hurt my best friend ran away. I would have thought Spike would have left too. I mean there are so much memories there. I guess Spike is strong though and stayed. Unlike Buffy who is a weak little girl. More please

Author's Response: Easy lol I never had Spike begging or anything like that but yeah he does feel sorry for not being apart of her life for the past 4 yrs what best friend wouldn't. Read on and i know you'll like the out come. Thanks for the review.

I like this story. I think you are doing a nice job capturing the emotions of both characters, but especially Buffy.

You do still have a bunch of typos though: Barley should be barely. Inspirable should be inseparable. Ridicules should be ridiculous. And at least twice you swap your and you're.

I really think that elements of this are great, if you'd like another beta (I know that some folks have a few.) I'd be happy to give things a final read through for grammar and spelling. :)