Date: 12/03/2012 - 10:02 am Title: Post Blue
Steamy, great tension!
A few issues in this chap and the previous, mostly that I still think you are better off using "laying" all the times you've used "laid."
Date: 08/08/2009 - 06:06 pm Title: Post Blue
You painted a vivid, emotional picture of the confusion between these two. They're both feeling so pervy for being attracted to their sibling, it's making each encounter awkward. It's very entertaining.
Date: 04/22/2009 - 11:10 pm Title: Post Blue
The sexual tension is electric! Someone's gotta give in again soon! Love it :-)
Date: 04/15/2009 - 09:56 pm Title: Post Blue
They are both in denial about their attraction. Snuggling, huh? Silly Spike ;)
Wasn't so easy to ignore, the nearness.
Date: 04/15/2009 - 09:38 am Title: Post Blue
OMG...Lovely, lovely UUUSSSSTT
Date: 04/15/2009 - 07:17 am Title: Post Blue
Having slightly more Spike POV works well in this chapter because of how passionate we expect him to be towards Buffy. Who hasn't had those little moments of trying to reign their libido in during that awkward, take-it-slow stage. It's too bad that they don't quite realize that they have a budding romance.
What I love most about your story is the slow build you're giving us. It's like climbing a forest trail--you can feel the temperature cooling, the air thinning, catch glimpses of the view (the kiss), but enjoying the little things along the way until you can get the full panorama. Great chapter.
Date: 04/15/2009 - 07:07 am Title: Post Blue
oohhhhh, I am waiting for more....
Date: 04/14/2009 - 11:40 pm Title: Post Blue
Great chapter! Can't wait for more!
Date: 04/14/2009 - 10:27 pm Title: Post Blue
Sorry to hear about your back , sweetie. Maybe you should go and have a nice massage. Thanks for the chapter! Great tension building between the two.