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Reviewer: Charlie Aome Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/30/2009 - 02:36 pm Title: Chapter 4 & 5

Great chapter Chanty!!! i really like this story :) gotta go read more bye :)

Author's Response: Yay. I hope you like the rest. Thanks for reading! This was my first fic. I don't think it is all the great now. I hav ebetter ones, but I still have it up because it was my first lol. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: callmekitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/25/2009 - 01:18 am Title: Chapter 4 & 5

well done my dear, *beams wit pride at your smut writing*

keep going, you are doing fabulously :)

Author's Response: Yay! *smiles with pride with you* I'm glad you liked it!! I love how my first fic is turning out! Everyone seems to love it and that makes me smile = ) Thanks for all the reviews and confidence boosts! I love you for it *huggles and cuddles and smoochies*

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/24/2009 - 11:05 pm Title: Chapter 4 & 5

wow that was fast and just insane *depot shot doesn't prevent hiv/aids*. That being said it was a nice chapter overall.

Author's Response: That was kind of the point (the fast thing) Buffy like jumped him because she had all of theme emotions inside and she wasn't dealing with them properly. She hadnt allowed herself to actually feel in a little over 6 months... When Spike came along, he opened up everything and she kind of freaked out over it and did what she thought would make it better. Which only made it worse. As for the HIV/AIDs thing, I never even thought of that. Bad me... Sorry = ( Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/22/2009 - 03:32 pm Title: Chapter 4 & 5

Just caught up with your story; I like the chapters I've read so far.
Looking forward to read more and find out to where this story will go :)

Author's Response: Thanks :) Im happy with it! thanks for the review! I will update soon.

Author's Response: Thanks :) Im happy with it! thanks for the review! I will update soon.

Reviewer: eliseth Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/22/2009 - 03:10 pm Title: Chapter 4 & 5

I love this story...
And I cant wait for your next update
*hugs*

Author's Response: Aww! thanks :) I will update soon as i can!! Promise :)

Reviewer: lovemesideways Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/22/2009 - 02:48 pm Title: Chapter 4 & 5

Where the rest!!! I need more!!!!!!
I love this, so different! :D More more more!

Author's Response: lol im glad you like it :) I will post again soon! Promise thanks for the review ;)

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/22/2009 - 01:28 am Title: Chapter 4 & 5

Just found your fic and am addicted already! Can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response: yay! Awesome :) Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: PaganBaby Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/22/2009 - 12:51 am Title: Chapter 4 & 5

Wow! I thought we'd have to wait a lot longer for them to get physical lol

It was sad when Buffy broke down like that after the lovin'. I'm glad she didn't just run off into the night and stayed for them to talk things out.

Spike probably shouldn't have given into his desire for her (though I hoped he would! lol). He dodged a major bullet that she wasn't younger than she is hehe

And I like how you used "effulgent". That word always brings a smile to my face :)

Author's Response: teehee! Yeah.. He's weak when it comes to Buffy lol... Im so happy with how this is turning out! I'm glad you like it so far :) I had to use effulgent! It's just so.. so Spike lol it's like his word lol I'm happy with my first smut too... *giggles* other ppl like it too :)

Reviewer: Blazing Fire Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/21/2009 - 08:15 pm Title: Chapter 4 & 5

Okay, it's offical. You have me hooked. There's no way that I can go on with my day unless you update.

Great story.

Author's Response: Awww thanks... I was worried about this chapter. Its the best one I've written but I was worried becuase people might have thought that i moved to fast. thanks for reviewing! *hugs*

Reviewer: Slayerfest99 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/21/2009 - 07:05 pm Title: Chapter 4 & 5

Loved it!!! Can't wait for more, GREAT update! :)

Author's Response: Thanks! This chapters 4 and 5 were my favorite to write too :)

Reviewer: Brett Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/21/2009 - 06:43 pm Title: Chapter 4 & 5

Great chapter, I am pulling for these two peeps.

Author's Response: Thanks! This chapter is my favorite so far :) Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: NeomeBuffy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/21/2009 - 05:57 pm Title: Chapter 4 & 5

Awwwww. Awesome :) still loving the story, like that they are finding each other. Plus the sex scene was delicious. Thanks for writing!

Author's Response: Thank you :) It was my first sex scene so im quite proud of it. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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