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Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/22/2009 - 11:37 pm Title: Chapter 12

All hell's going to break loose when Buffy arrives at Spike's apartment!! Harmony has nerve and how did she get in!! Can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response: Just wait an see hun!! Its a good next chapter dont you worry!! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/22/2009 - 10:48 pm Title: Chapter 12

Ah I wondered... first trouble in paradise (Buffy really should just talk to him if she isn't ready to visit her parents but it should help her).
Evil cliffhanger... when Buffy catches them together her trust in Spike will be tested. I hope she'll believe him.
Till next part.

Author's Response: yes Im excited to finish this next chapter for you all to read! Im having alot of fun writing this story and im so happy ppl are likeing it! Thanks for reviewing! I hated writing that cliffhanger... but its all part of the story *giggles evilly* Till next chapter = )

Reviewer: sanityfair Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/22/2009 - 10:14 pm Title: Chapter 12

Thanks for the update... :)

Author's Response: Your welcome! Another coming soon! Thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: laemda Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/22/2009 - 09:11 pm Title: Chapter 12

OK the only way I will forgive you for putting that bitch in his bed is to update now!!

Author's Response: lol update soon I promise!! Thanks for reviewing and not throwing things of the vegtable variety at me lol

Reviewer: Pet Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/22/2009 - 08:18 pm Title: Chapter 12

Uh-oh! This can't be good. The nerve of that bitch! Need next chap now! :)

Author's Response: very soon! All the reviews im getting are making me write faster! I love that everyone is enjoying it and it is awesome to read everyones thoughts on my story! *hugs again*

Reviewer: Pet Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/22/2009 - 08:15 pm Title: Chapter 11

Wonderful chapter! On to the next... :)

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoy Pet! Thanks for reading and reviewing! *hugs*

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/22/2009 - 06:19 pm Title: Chapter 11

Heh heh even if Buffy teased him very hard, she made up for it. Really fair ;))
Good to find two chapters to read today. Enjoyed!

Author's Response: Im glad you enjoyed it cordykitten! Thank you soo much for reviewing it is awesome to read your thoughts about my stories. = ) *hugs again*

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/22/2009 - 06:08 pm Title: Chapter 10

Spike is very hard on himself...
I'm sure Buffy is right - his parents knew that he loved them. (But one is always the hardest on oneself.)

Author's Response: Very true... Spike did love his parents he just showed it badly because he wanted to be popular... now they are gone he is very unforgiving toward hiself because of it = ( thanks for reviewing! You always review I love that *hugs*

Reviewer: burnkitty Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/22/2009 - 02:19 am Title: Chapter 11

Oh what a sensual chapter! I love it how they are connecting on such a deep level, learning about one another. I can SEE what your writing, its like I am almost watching a movie its that good. Can't wait for more :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! That means alot to me!! I'm glad you enjoyed it = ) Thanks for reviewing! *Huggles and smoochies!*

Reviewer: sanityfair Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/22/2009 - 01:45 am Title: Chapter 11

Thank you so much for another update!

Author's Response: your welcome! I'm glad you enjoyed and thanks sooo much for reviewing! It's well appreciated = )

Reviewer: PaganBaby Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/21/2009 - 08:11 am Title: Chapter 10

Gah! *shakes fist at Buffy* Things were getting hot! lol I thought it would've been nice for them to make love in this chapter, like her wanting to comfort Spike after his rough emotional experience. But I'm sure it'll be nice when they work up to doing it again :)

Spike made me wanna cuddle him again with the scene in the storage place. Poor Spikey :( It's good that Buffy was there with him, and that he felt comfortable enough with her to let her see him like that. *smoochies*

Author's Response: lol! Its all good PB next chappie is good! Im glad you liked it tho = ) Yeah, i wanted Spike to becompletely open with her. To show her that it is okay to let go of the feelings she had inside and feel. At least I made him manly (angry out burst) while he cried = ) *huggles and smoochies!*

Reviewer: PaganBaby Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/21/2009 - 06:05 am Title: Chapter 9

Oh, you had me going there for a minute when Buffy was in the towel and Spike was feeling affected lol Thought they were gonna forego the trip to the storage locker and do more pleasant things :P I'm sorry that my mind is permanently in the gutter lol

It was a good chapter, nice and sweet, with them sharing more than just bodily fluids hehe

*smooches*

Author's Response: lol im glad you are enjoying this PB!! and thanks for all the reviews! i promise within the next 2 chapters there will be smut!! but if you want smut now read SJ2 lol it will have you giggling as well = ) *hugs*

Reviewer: PaganBaby Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/21/2009 - 05:02 am Title: Chapter 8

Some good stuff happened in this chapter, mainly Spike breaking up with Harmony! Yay! :D The part where Spike talks through Mr. Gordo had me giggling like crazy! lol I could see him doing that in my head!

I was hoping that Buffy would stay with Spike - so there would be more possibilities for naughtiness lol But I'll wait paitently for more Spuffyness :)

It's cool that they're going to help each other get the closure they both sorely need :)

Author's Response: thanks PB! this means alot coming from you! i loved the mr. gordo part too i thought it was funny. im glad you are enjoying and spuffyiness is coming up soon! *huggles and smoochies!*

Reviewer: PaganBaby Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/21/2009 - 03:58 am Title: Chapter 7

Aww! Poor Buffy and Spike have both had a rough time in their lives. But I'm hoping that they can help each other overcome all of the heartache :)

It's nice that you didn't make Angel totally unsympathetic, you could've made him a total a**hole lol Though that does make me worry more that he could come back into Buffy's life... I'll just have to wait and see what happens, I suppose :D

Author's Response: PB.. just you wait and see what the story behind Angel is... i dont bash him but he has a jerky side! Thanks for reviewing!! = ) *loads of love, hugs, and smoochies*

Reviewer: PaganBaby Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/21/2009 - 03:38 am Title: Chapter 6

I'm so glad that Spike and Buffy are talking! I was so sad about Spike's parents :( I wanted to cuddle him to bits at that part lol *now off to read Buffy's tale of woe*

Btw, sorry I haven't reviewed in so long! The good thing about that is that I have more chapters to read ;)

And *smoochies* for your shout-out to me in the Endnotes! :D I'm glad that I could help in any way! *huggles*

Author's Response: no problem about the reviews hun! getting lots at one time is great too!! as for the shout-out i give credit where credit is due! a few people have helped me along the way and and i like o tell readers how great you guys are! *smoochies*

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2009 - 11:58 am Title: Chapter 9

Not an easy journey for Spike; but Buffy being there helped him already. Yet the hardest part has still to come.
Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Yeah he needed someone there and Buffy was willing. They are both making this journey together. Yes... Buffy's closure is going to be a hell of a ride with what I have planned! Im glad you are enjoying this so far and Thanks for all of your reviews! Your awesome! *huggles*

Reviewer: Pet Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2009 - 07:14 am Title: Chapter 10

Poor Spike. Good thing he has Buffy. Loved the update!

Author's Response: Thanks! *hugs*

Reviewer: burnkitty Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2009 - 02:57 am Title: Chapter 9

Gosh, I don't think I have reviewed this story for a few chapters and for that I am really sorry. Its other been I have been too busy or sick. I quite enjoy the pace you have set for this story now. I am interested to read how Spike deals with facing his past.

Its good to hear you are writing and heaps too! I will have to try and check out your other WIP's when I get the chance. So, enough of my rambling and off to read the next chapter. Nice job for not being beta'ed by the way :)

Author's Response: Its all good burnkitty I still love you! *huggles* I'm glad you like the pace and Spike dealing with his past.. man, it was a hard chappie to write lol. I am happy with my writing im just cranking out the chapters :) Thanks about the beta thing! i was nervous about it, but i will edit it soon! Thanks for reading and reviewing hun Oh and the other ones are finished not WIPs which im very proud of myself for lol I will be even more proud when this is finished because its longer than 2 chapters = ) *hugs*

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/17/2009 - 10:56 pm Title: Chapter 10

Looks like Spike really needed Buffy with him. Can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, I wanted Spike to need Buffy just as much as she will need him in the up coming chapters... This story is almost complete = ( I am glad you are enjoying it!! Thanks for reading and reviewing *hugs*

Reviewer: CallMeKitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2009 - 01:26 am Title: Prologue & Chapter 1

I finally sat down uninteruped and got to read this thru and i must say I am impressed. Well done, good thought process. Keep it up :)

Author's Response: Awww! Thanks Kitten! I'm really glad you enjoyed it! RL has been hectic lately so I havnt been updating as fast as before, but and update will come soon I promise. I like that your impressed *giggles* makes me feel all good inside lol. Thanks for reading and reviewing = )

Reviewer: Pet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2009 - 06:58 pm Title: Chapter 8

Thank God Harmony's out of the picture. Loved the chapter and can't wait for the next update. :)

Author's Response: = ) Update is coming soon I promise. I'm glad you are enjoying my story! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2009 - 10:33 pm Title: Chapter 8

Really enjoying this! Can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you are enjoying my story! I will update soon! Thanks for reviewing = )

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2009 - 09:45 pm Title: Chapter 8

Getting closure - sounds like a good thing.
I'm glad too that Spike broke up with Harmony now. But I fear she didn't take it too well. Spike should watch his back.
Looking forward to more :)
Good wishes for your aunt.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. No, Harmony didn't take it to well did she? LOL. Im glad you enjoyed it and thans for the wishes for my aunt. I really appreciate it = ) Thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: sanityfair Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2009 - 08:00 pm Title: Chapter 8

Thanks for the update. I'm looking forward to reading more soon. Sorry to hear about your Aunt. Hope she's better soon!

Author's Response: Thanks hun. She is doing better, but she wont be home for a couple more days. Thanks for the review = )

Reviewer: Spikes_slayer08 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/29/2009 - 10:15 pm Title: Chapter 7

Sad but sweet chapter, more soon please.

Author's Response: more is on its way I promise!! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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