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Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2009 - 09:18 pm Title: Chapter 22

I'm glad that Buffy is okay; bad luck now to run into Angel when she didn't want the strangers in the hotel to see her and now Angel did.
Not many chapters left, or? But in a way Buffy can get closure.

Author's Response: Yup, that is why I added angel at the last moment but he isnt around for long and you get to find out why he left Buffy in the first place. The next chapter is the last and epilogue is with it too.. I hope you enjoy! Thanks for reading and reviewing so much, you rock!!

Reviewer: sanityfair Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2009 - 08:57 pm Title: Chapter 22

Loved the update! Sad there's only one more to go, but can't wait to read it!

Author's Response: I am sad that this fic is ending too! Im very proud of myself tho! Hopefully last chapter will be on tonight! I'm glad you enjoyed my story tho, i hope you like the ending! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Pet Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2009 - 06:53 pm Title: Chapter 21

Yaay, a new chapter!! *lol* So happy Hank got what he deserved, that bastard. Thank God Spike was there! Good that Joyce left him, finally. Eagerly waiting for more. :)

Author's Response: woot! I'm glad you enjoyed!! There is a new chapter being posted within the next 20 minutes! thanks for reviewing = ) second last chapter *cries* the last chapter i hope to get that up on the site tonight

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2009 - 02:50 pm Title: Chapter 21

Wow! That was jam packed with emotion i'm still reeling from it. can't help but feel bad for Joyce , maybe Spike's right with a little time Buffy can accept her into her life, hope so. Til next time , "great writer" , update soon.

Author's Response: Awww thank you! I'm glad you are enjoying my story. It was a bumpy ride, but the next two chapters are the last ones! They are both away being edited but I will post soon! Thanks for reviewing :)

Reviewer: PinkSatin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2009 - 04:09 am Title: Chapter 21

OMFG. Hank got what he desverved :) woot woot!!!


I can't wait for the next Chapter :) and If and when I get a chance. I 'll be reading the other fictions:)

Off to Cedar Point without a computer. for a little while.

KEEP WRITING :) Greatly :)

Author's Response: Woot! Yay! Thanks for review! The last two chapters are coming soon... I hope to have them up tomorrow so you can read them when you get back from Cedar Point and get to a computer! Thanks for reading! *hugs*

Reviewer: PaganBaby Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/09/2009 - 11:42 pm Title: Chapter 21

Yeah! So glad Spike kicked Hank's nasty butt! And that Joyce made the decision to leave that jerk.

*dreamy sigh* Spike proved what a great heart he has again by helping Joyce. Poor Buffy, that scene with her dad took a lot out of her emotionally and physically. But she has Spike to take care of her. I was worried that she might lash out at Spike because he urged her to get closure... I hope she doesn't! Despite the badness, Buffy really did need to confront her dad in order to move on with her life - with Spike :)

Great chapter, hon!

That was some fine pimpin' of Kitten's fic :D And thanks for the mention in the author's notes. You're such a sweetie *smooches*

Author's Response: Thanks PB! *love love love* You are awesome, I love your reviews! Thanks for everything that you have done for me!! And no, I don't think that I will have Buffy lash out on spike. I was thinking about her taking a break from him, but nah, I want buffy and spike together lol. and I agree, Buffy needed to confront her parents before moving on with Spike. Some people on other sites are wondering why I have Buffy so bitter toward her mother but I would react the same as Buffy if my mother was like that, you know? Anyway, Thank you for everything and yeah, i just had to pimp kittens fic for brett its going to be great and deserves lots and lots of reviews and hits! As do your fics too! *huggles and smoochies* Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/09/2009 - 11:28 pm Title: Chapter 21

Even if Spike got Buffy out in time there are still bruises that you can't see (like on her soul). It will need time to heal but Spike is willing to help, that's a good begin.

Author's Response: = ) It really is. Thanks for reading and reviewing, hope you enjoyed! *hugs*

Reviewer: CallMeKitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/09/2009 - 10:11 pm Title: Chapter 21

*twirls with you* nicely done :) this is wrapping up nicely and you are doing a fine job :) Thanks for the pimpin Chan, Three's Company was lots of fun to write.

Author's Response: WOOT! Thanks!! I am sad that this is coming to an end, but I still have like two more chapters to do.. I was thinking about bringing Angel in for a cameo, but I don't know.. don't want to drag my story on forever you know? Meh, I will figure something out! LOVE YOU TONS! *hugs and dances*

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/08/2009 - 03:23 pm Title: Chapter 20

Uh-huh, sadly Spike was right, Hank was hurting Buffy. At last she was able to tell her parents what she thinks of them.n

Author's Response: True. But things are not all doom and gloom from now on, I promise! Thanks for reading and reviewing = )

Reviewer: PaganBaby Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/08/2009 - 03:47 am Title: Chapter 20

Wow, Hank wasn't any prize before, but he's really a crazy bastard now! I feel bad for Joyce - at least she realizes now how badly she treated her daughter, and wants to try to protect her.

I hope Spike kicks Hank's ass! Go, Spike!!

*smooches*

Author's Response: lol, Yup, I made hank out to be a right asshole! Thankfully, he will get his due, no worries! Thanks for beta'ing and sending me that email afterward, you are made of awesomeness! *hugs and smoochies* Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: sanityfair Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2009 - 11:49 pm Title: Chapter 20

Thanks so much for the update! Waiting to see how Spike handles things from here!

Author's Response: Your welcome! I hope to get another chapter out soon! Thanks for reviewing = )

Reviewer: CallMeKitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2009 - 10:28 pm Title: Chapter 20

Good chapter! Nice to see Buffy stand her ground to some nasty as parents! More soon please :)

;) well done sweetie

Author's Response: Thank you Kitten!! I'm glad you enjoyed it *huggles* I will hopefully get another chapter up soon. Thanks for reviewing = D *smoochies*

Reviewer: burnkitty Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2009 - 10:27 pm Title: Chapter 20

Oh, if only that could happen in real life! I am so glad Spike is going to smash him into little pieces. (he is going to smash him right? *bites lip nervously*) Nice update luv and can I say, it felt VERY real to me.

Author's Response: lol Yes, there will be some Hank smashing!! Im glad you enjoyed it! I hope to update soon! *hugs* I'm glad it was realistic, thats what I was aiming for! Thanks for reviewing! = )

Reviewer: PinkSatin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2009 - 09:20 pm Title: Chapter 20

OMFG. I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE CHAPTER CHANT!!

I'm so worried now...I seriously do NOT like Hank. and Joyce. wtf. She soooo coulda beat the shit outta him :)

GO SPIKE! Whoop Hank's dead ass :)

Author's Response: lol! Nice = ) Im glad you enjoyed ! Thanks for reviewing and next chapter soon, hopefully. If all things go as planned that is.

Reviewer: flyingnicole Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2009 - 08:01 pm Title: Chapter 20

GO SPIKE!!! BEAT UP THAT A$$ HANK!!!!!
Post more soon!

Author's Response: Lol, I will post mor soon, hopefully = ) Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Pet Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2009 - 07:29 pm Title: Chapter 20

Omg, I've been waiting for an update for like ever! *lol* Uh-oh, Spike to the rescue! Thank God Joyce managed to get him. Have a feeling there will be hell to pay for what Hank did. Go Spike!

Author's Response: Sorry, hun! I didn't mean to make ya wait so long = ( Lifes been hectic and such, but I am better now! Yes, Spike is to the rescue and things are not going to be pretty! Thanks for reviewing! *hugs*

Reviewer: PinkSatin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/04/2009 - 09:03 am Title: Chapter 19

OMFG.
I seriously can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!

More Pwease :)

OMFG. GIVE ME MORE GIRL!!

Author's Response: lol. I love your reviews. So energetic. I think I'm going to be taking a short break from writing more of this fic. I cant seem to get anything going at right now = ( But I'm sure I will be back and writing again soon. *hugs* Thanks for reviewing = )

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/01/2009 - 09:48 pm Title: Chapter 19

I wonder how Buffy's parents lost all their money?? Can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response: Update coming soon, I hope. I'm having a little difficulty with it but I'm a trooper so I'm pushin through it lol I promise its coming along nicely with the help of CallMeKitten = ) I'm glad you enjoyed it and thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/01/2009 - 03:02 pm Title: Chapter 19

Wasn't sure if it wasn't an accident, didn't think that it could have been Buffy mixing the words :)

Oh! Didn't expect this. The tables have really turned for Buffy's parents. How things can change.
Looking forward to their reactions.

Author's Response: Yup, but thanks for pointing it out, hun! Yep, Buffy's parents are in some bad times right now! I'm still writing the chapter right now so i will update either tonight or tomorrow. Thanks for the lovely review as always! You are awesome = )

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/01/2009 - 11:59 am Title: Chapter 19

Hee Hee , shouldn't laugh at other's misfortunes but talk about poetic justice. Your something else , you know that , never saw that coming. well can't wait to hear what happened. Update soon.

Author's Response: Lol, not many people did lol.. Glad you enjoyed and Im glad i through you for a loop = ) Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Pet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/01/2009 - 07:55 am Title: Chapter 19

Interesting. Looking forward to this confrontation. Glad Spike's there. Great update, hon! And thank you so much for all reviews on A Second Chance, so happy you like that old story of mine. :)

Author's Response: Your welcome! I wanted to post more reviews, but I got so caught up with all the action I forgot to review lol (old habit coming to bite me in the ass lol) I really did enjoy it! It was great! I will be updating this hopefully tonight = )

Reviewer: msspikester Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/01/2009 - 04:46 am Title: Chapter 19

Ouch! I knew they weren't doing well with her before she left, but to see them living in such conditions is kind of a very twisted justice. Not with the abuse though. When you have money, your anger can be placated with things/people/situations you can buy. I know, that when you don't have money, people take their anger out on whatever is within their reach. Well written.

Author's Response: Thanks msspikester I'm glad you enjoyed! Thanks for reviewing :)

Reviewer: callmekitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/01/2009 - 01:57 am Title: Chapter 19

*smiles* I am no real beta and by no means am I awesome, but glad to help sweetie!

I loved the chapter :) nice to see she has lightened a bit. Curious to se what happened

Author's Response: Well, you made my fic easier to read, and you ARE awesome! Don't think otherwise! Talking to you always makes me smile and brightens my day which is a good thing lol *huggls* I'm glad you like my fic. It means alot when you and PB read and review! I love you ladies! *squishes and smoochies!*

Reviewer: sanityfair Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/01/2009 - 01:54 am Title: Chapter 19

That was priceless! Thanks for another great update!

Author's Response: Your welcome, sanityfair! I'm glad you enjoyed = ) Thank you for all your reviews! *hugs*

Reviewer: PaganBaby Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/01/2009 - 01:50 am Title: Chapter 19

Wow, I didn't expect her parents to have fallen on hard times! I don't blame Buffy for being smug about it, since they'd always looked down their noses at less fortunate people.

Sad that it sounds like Joyce is getting beaten by Hank :( Maybe Spike can somehow make things better? I like it when he saves the day :) lol

Author's Response: lol you will have to wait and see, PB. I mentioned it in the begining of the story too, in the prologue. After Hank hit Buffy for the first time, Buffy freaked on Joyce for not defending her. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter, hun! *huggles and smoochies*

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