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Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/25/2009 - 12:09 pm Title: Chapter 16

Awwwww! How sweet was that , honey in order to find a guy who would really do that , you would have to find the biggest scope in the world and search for a hundred years ( did i sound cynical enough) but it's a nice fantasy. Update soon .

Author's Response: Aww.. lol What can I say? 'm a dreamer! Thanks for reading and reviewing and im glad you enjoyed it! Will update soon

Reviewer: callmekitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/25/2009 - 05:17 am Title: Chapter 12

F'n harmony GAAA

you gotta be kidding me!
she sucks so bad

BUffy and Spike each laying in their own beds thinking about each other... *heart feels squeezed*

More!

Author's Response: Your up to the angsty parts now! = ) I NEED ANOTHER UPDATE OF PTF!! *huggles*

Reviewer: callmekitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/25/2009 - 04:43 am Title: Chapter 11

*dances in blooming relationship*

your writing improves with every chapter, *pats back* well done


must read more...

Author's Response: Thank you kitten! *pets kitten* Go read more! I will have another update soon, thanks to your advice! *cuddles*

Reviewer: callmekitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/25/2009 - 04:09 am Title: Chapter 10

LOVE LOVE LOVE the sweet kisses, moaning into his mouth..

*warm fuzzies everywhere*

MORE!

Author's Response: *giggles* Yay!! I like warm fuzzies!

Reviewer: CallMeKitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/25/2009 - 02:51 am Title: Chapter 7

awww her story is sad, but it as good he was there for her and good she was able to get it out,

Soul Cleansing

*tackles and tickles* keep going!

Author's Response: = ) Yay for soul cleansing! *giggles at tickles* I promise I will keep going!! *pokes Kitten* Thats for tickling me!! *huggles*

Reviewer: CallMeKitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/25/2009 - 02:36 am Title: Chapter 6

hehe so good, I see why this was nominated at COH... well done sweetie

I am so proud! *hugs and twirls*

*more happy dance*

Author's Response: ohh yay!! That was an awesome compliment!! I dont even expect to win but knowing someone loved my story enough to nominate it is bloody fantastic! I am very proud along with you! *giggles as I am eing twirled then joins in happy dance!* I wuv you Kitten!! *huggles*

Reviewer: callmekitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/25/2009 - 01:18 am Title: Chapter 4 & 5

well done my dear, *beams wit pride at your smut writing*

keep going, you are doing fabulously :)

Author's Response: Yay! *smiles with pride with you* I'm glad you liked it!! I love how my first fic is turning out! Everyone seems to love it and that makes me smile = ) Thanks for all the reviews and confidence boosts! I love you for it *huggles and cuddles and smoochies*

Reviewer: callmekitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/25/2009 - 12:17 am Title: Chapter 2 & 3

good lord, come on you two!

love the sweetnes an the attraction, hope they tell each oher soon.

must read more now

Author's Response: *giggles* I am having so much fun writing this story! The next chapter is coming soon I just have to smooth out ome rough patches then im good to post! Thanks for reviewing!!

Reviewer: PinkSatin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/24/2009 - 10:15 pm Title: Chapter 15

OMFG.

I need another Chapter.
I hate cliffhangers.

I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS.
Update Soon :)
-bats eyelashes- Cause you love me :)

Author's Response: Next chapter... Im not really motivated to write it right now *pouts* ive been cranking them out lately but i dont really feel like writing... Im going to go read some stories and hopefully get inspired in the mean time! *huggles* GO GET WRITING ON YOUR STORIES TOO! I need updates = )

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/24/2009 - 09:36 pm Title: Chapter 15

Sounds like Spike's on the right path and seems like Buffy is willing to meet him halfway. Can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response: Thanks! Spike is willing to do anythng and Buffy doesnt want to be mad at him anymore so things will be looking up soon! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Pet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/24/2009 - 07:33 pm Title: Chapter 15

Gaaaah! Bloody frustrating! Got 3 chapters to read, thank God! I feel really bad for Spike and want to yell at B to just LISTEN to him, dammit! Can't wait for more, loving this!

Author's Response: lol yes Buffy is being very stubborn.. trying to protect her heart. But things are looking up a bit! Thanks for reviewing! = )

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/24/2009 - 05:50 pm Title: Chapter 15

Ah good that Buffy found the flyer now. So hopefully she'll hear him out.

Author's Response: = )... Just wait till you find out what Spike is going to do! Its o sweet!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/24/2009 - 05:41 pm Title: Chapter 14

So he found her now... I thought it would have taken him longer; he was lucky. But Spike has hurt Buffy now, she thinks he broke her trust. He has to try to explain that. Not easy...

Author's Response: I know... Buffy wants to trust him again but she is still hurting from the harmony thing... Its like she wants to be mad at him but she wants to forgive him and go back to the way they were. Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/24/2009 - 05:35 pm Title: Chapter 13

That went really wrong.. first Buffy saw Spike responding to Harm's kiss and then he wasn't trying to find her. With bad luck she'll be gone from her hiding place in the next morning.
*nods* Spike was indeed an idiot.

Author's Response: *giggles* he is making it better tho = ) Thanks for reviewing! *hugs*

Reviewer: burnkitty Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/24/2009 - 12:30 pm Title: Chapter 15

Aww! how romantic!! I just know she will go to the park because her curiosity will get the better of her. What happens then, well....I can't wait to read to find out!

Author's Response: I know eh! wait till you read what Spike does... I would just die if Any guy did this for me... (especially if it was Spike!!) Thanks for reviewing burnkitty! *huggles*

Reviewer: PaganBaby Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/24/2009 - 06:27 am Title: Chapter 14

Aww! I'm glad that Spike found her more quickly than I thought he would. Buffy's song fit her feelings so well, so sad :(

I'm also glad that Spike isn't just going to step back and let her go :) Can't wait to see how he makes things right again!

*smoochies*

Author's Response: I know eh! I love that song... I only made a coupld of lyric changes nothing too durastic and it just fit so perfectly i couldnt pass it up! Spike wouldn't dare.. because I would spank him for letting her go *giggles* new chapter coming up tomorrow because I'm now on a writing binge! *huggles* Thanks for the reviews! = )

Reviewer: PaganBaby Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/24/2009 - 06:04 am Title: Chapter 13

*sniffles* Stupid Harmony messed it up. Good on Buffy though for smashing Harm in the nose hehe

I don't know how Spike's going to make it up to her (or even find her to try to explain!), but I'm dying to find out!

And THANK YOU for the primo pimping! :D *Hugggs & kisses* You are so sweet to do that! No one has ever pimped me in their Endnotes before! lol I loves ya, babe!

Author's Response: Yes, I thought Harmony face-bashing was in order. lol She really did mess it up. I'm writing the chapter where Spike tries to make it up to her right now! And its great... really sweet. no problem about the pimping honey!! I'm glad i could pop your endnote pimping virginity *giggles because that was kinda lame* I LOVE YOU TOO, HUN = ) *huggles and smoochies!*

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/24/2009 - 01:10 am Title: Chapter 14

Awesome chapters! I could feel Buffy's pain. Hope Spike is in it for the long haul. It won't be easy to win Buffy's trust back...if ever. Can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response: *giggles* Thanks PhotographyNut! Buffy is in alot of pain, but Spike doesnt want to keep it there. Spike is ready to do what it takes! I have some good plans coming up!

Reviewer: burnkitty Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2009 - 11:13 pm Title: Chapter 14

wow 2 chapters for me to wake up to! Woo hoo baby!! Very emotional last chapter. I so feared that Buffy was going to walk in on Spike and Harmony and it happened, poor Buffy! I hope Spike can show her that he really does care because she needs it, she needs to be shown that she is loved.

Wonderful spanner in the works luv, you did well. I can't wait to read more. N yes PB smut is awesome!!

Author's Response: PB is made of awesome! Im not quite sure what spanner is, but i think i will take it as a compliment lol. Everything is all turned upside down, but no worries. Spike has big plans coming up. She wiill know that she is loved soon! = ) Thanks for reviewing burnkitty! *huggles*

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2009 - 09:56 pm Title: Chapter 14

i'm really disappointed in spike, sure he seems like he loved her, but he did kiss harmony back. if there's one thing i can't stand, it's a cheating man, i hope things get better soon.

Author's Response: But, he didn't really cheat. They never declared a relationship. And He didnt really kiss her back but to Buffy it looked that way. Spike would have pushed her away if Buffy seen or not = ) Thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: sanityfair Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2009 - 09:16 pm Title: Chapter 14

Thanks so much for 2 chapters in one day! Harmony really did a number on things! Looking forward to more soon.

Author's Response: Yes, she did! No worries, its not all doom and gloom in Spuffyville lol! Thanks for reviewing = )

Reviewer: PinkSatin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2009 - 07:15 am Title: Chapter 12

OMG. Harmony. wtf. She's a total Skank and now Buffy's on her way over there. Bad-ness. I see it. It's not going to be great...

Ugh. Now I can't wait for the next Chapter..

Keep up the great writing :)

Author's Response: thank you PinkSatin! there will be two chapters later on today when Pari validates it! Thanks for reviewing, I will read your dix soon! RL is hectic right now! but i promise to review = ) *hugs*

Reviewer: PaganBaby Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2009 - 04:51 am Title: Chapter 12

Don't apologize for adding some complications! I like stories that aren't all roses and sunshine lol It's way more enjoyable if there are obstacles to overcome. With that in mind...

Damn that Harmony! lol Can't say I blame her, but I see a BIG Spuffy misunderstanding coming in for a landing!

Can't wait to see how it plays out! *huggs*

Author's Response: Yeah I wanted to make it as realistic as possible. I know that If i had my heart broken twice in the past andhad trust issues I would react the same way! *RUN AND HIDE FROM THE MEANIE* even if the situation could have been the total opposite, if that made sense lol Yes, Harmony shouldn't be in his bed... but I couldn't resist lol. It was either Harmnony or Dru, but Harmony is easier to hate I find lol. *hugs* In chapter 13... look for my announcement lol.. it will make you smile!!

Reviewer: PaganBaby Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2009 - 04:39 am Title: Chapter 11

Wooohoo! *hugs & squishes you* You little minx, I thought you were going to wait a while longer before any more naughty ;) Wow, that was hot *and* a nice surprise!

*giggles* Go, Buffffy! Nice deep throating skillz! :P I'd do my damnedest too if I were her heehee Love the mucho well-endowed Spike too, verrrry nice!

My favorite thing (besides the actual bj) was how she thought a penis never looked so "appetizing" hehehe Loved that line! Her pretending to be asleep to tease him a little was lots of fun too :D

*Smoochies*

Author's Response: Thanks PB!! Im glad you like it! I wanted Buffy to become more comfprtable with her so it would be a bigger blow when she finds him with Harmony the night of the bj. Because I'm mean to my charaters like that! lol. I'm currently writing the 14th chapter and will have it postd soon and chapter 13 is already posted. I liked the line appetizing too lol She was about to gobble him so I thought it was fitting! I give you full permission to use it if you like! *huggles and smoochies!* Im glad you enjoyed = )

Reviewer: burnkitty Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2009 - 12:24 am Title: Chapter 12

Zomg! How would you be? I just Buffy doesn't witness Harmony being there. Your evil you know that? I love it.

One thing that stuck out for me, was Rein check. Im guessing its a typo but I thought I would let you know.

Author's Response: *grins wickedly* I'm writing the next chapter as I reply to your review and I am sooooo excited to post!! Im so proud of where I'm taking this story and I cant wait to see what everyone thinks about it! = )Im glad you loved this chapter hun! *hugs* Thanks for that burnkitty. Will fix it now. = ) Thanks for reviewing!

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