Date: 05/21/2009 - 05:29 pm Title: Chapter 4: Interlude
I am typeing this with one hand as i eat cheese whiz on toast lol I liked this chapter. they are both wanting to continue the affair but buffy is worried = ( I hope things turn out okay! I'm off to read next chapter (and finish my slice of toast!)
*Smoochies!*
Author's Response: lol Mmm your snack sounded yummy :P Buffy shouldn't worry so much. I'd be packing my bags and leaving Riley already if I were her heehee
*huggs* Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 04/29/2009 - 05:43 pm Title: Chapter 4: Interlude
wonderful stuff! keep it up!
Author's Response: :D Thanks, Deb!
Date: 04/13/2009 - 02:46 am Title: Chapter 4: Interlude
Buffy's musings about waiter! William and how horrible it would have been to deflower a virgin in a taxi cab was so entertaining. You have a talent for humor and wonderful smut!
Author's Response: lol Thanks, lori! *Smooches* Buffy's face will be red too when/if she finds out the truth ;)
Date: 04/10/2009 - 12:18 am Title: Chapter 4: Interlude
Wow, hot story. I loved these first four chapters. The cab ride was simply stunning in its naughtiness *g* And I can't wait to read Buffy's shock when she learns Spike's age...SWOON!!!! THUD!
The next chapter looks promising and I can't wait to read it, which I hope is real soon, hint, hint :))
Author's Response: Thank you! hehehe Thanks for the great review! I loved "simply stunning in its naughtiness" - I'm reviewing your review lol I give it 2 thumbs up :)
Thanks for reading & reviewing! *huggles* Next chapter should be tomorrow ;)
Date: 04/09/2009 - 10:27 pm Title: Chapter 4: Interlude
Yeah Buffy - He thought she was perfect. that's not easy to find. :)
She has indeed chosen very well.
Fingers crossed that William can convince Buffy to see her again. And win her over from Riley :)
Author's Response: Yep, Buffy better hang on to him, if she knows what's good for her ;) *smooches ck* More soon :)
Date: 04/09/2009 - 09:59 pm Title: Chapter 4: Interlude
Aww, this was a great chapter, nice to see them interacting without (much) naughtiness! Looking forward to more :)
Author's Response: lol Thanks, xaph *hugs* I fIgured they both needed a little break after the cab and elevator heehee There's another scene in a later chapter without much naughtiness. The next chapter, however, will be smutty as all get-out :P
Date: 04/09/2009 - 09:11 am Title: Chapter 4: Interlude
William is SO sweet! I'm keeping my fingers crossed that when she realizes she was his first she'll wanna stay with him!
*hugs* loving it!
Author's Response: *Hugs* Thanks, Sotia :D I'm so happy you're digging the story! Next update might be tomorrow
Date: 04/09/2009 - 02:42 am Title: Chapter 4: Interlude
Oh this was such a sweet chapter. They both have feelings for each other,especially William. Liked how he was planning on continuing with an affair even tho Buffy said it was a one night stand. And Buffy wants it too, even tho she shouldn't. I wonder if B will find out that Will was a virgin? The old man in the elevator made me laugh, he knew what was going on.lol
This story is so good, I love it! And now waiting for the shower sex.;)
Author's Response: heehee! Thanks, AMI, glad you liked it *hugs* Mmmhmm there's lots of questions still to be answered... But first, more smut! :P
Date: 04/09/2009 - 02:29 am Title: Chapter 4: Interlude
Thanks for another update! I'm looking forward to reading more!
Author's Response: :) Thanks, hon! I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far! Shouldn't be too long before the next update.
Date: 04/09/2009 - 02:24 am Title: Chapter 4: Interlude
really cute interlude! I love this: He thought, 'Dear Lord, I want to carry on an affair with a married woman. I must officially be an adult.'
Author's Response: lol Thanks, gdo! I liked that line too heehee Thanks for reading and reviewing! It helps so much to know readers are digging it :D *smooch*
Date: 04/09/2009 - 01:52 am Title: Chapter 4: Interlude
Nice interlude.
Author's Response: Thanks, Jen :) They had to rest at some point heehee
Date: 04/08/2009 - 08:51 pm Title: Chapter 4: Interlude
mmmm they sure did need that nap! and shower next! Hot Damn, *trades places with LiR* love this chapter :) the moments where they were both deep in thought was very well written. I can wait for more!
I know theres more smut coming up! Bring it PB.
*sings* Bow chicka bow ow..... or Let's get it on.....
More soon PLEASE! >^.^< meow!
Author's Response: *giggles* Thanks, sweetie! Glad you liked - despite the lack of smuttage hehehe
And, oh yes, there's some steamy smut comin' up ;)
*huggles*