I am stunned Jake. The fear, and even the adrenalin to get him to stop was powerful enough to make me fear for her. Here this guy is feeding her lines that will deeply affect her in every way. I know. When you get more in depth with later rather than going back memory wise it will show. God I feel so deeply for her and can so relate. It's not easy. It never is. What really pisses me off is those who say leave it in the past. It's not about leaving it's in the past. This happened. It affected every fiber of your very being. To move past it you have to go to the past to work through it. Ugh it aggravates me when people have said then you are living in the past...

I really love how you are doing this. By bringing it to the present and the past...It feels so real at times and so very close to all those feelings I have ever had with my own experiences.

Thank you for giving this to us!!!!!

Now onto the story bit...The end I got confused it almost sounded like William raped her then I let out a deep breath when I read William implied that it wasn't his...Oh relief but I hope to whatever deity out there the baby is Williams even though I'm not sure who's just yet. IF the baby is John's it's not the baby's fault it just rather heartbreaking that it could be. God the emotion the details...Can't say I loved the chapter because of the horror in it, but you did a fantabulous job with this piece....God those words had so much power to them...that I am cringing in my seat to hear what Joyce will say to her.

More please as hard as it is to write? Pretty please. You have my support! More, more, more!