Date: 04/06/2009 - 05:02 pm Title: It Happened Before
Heartbreaking story. Still reading and enjoying, thanks for writing!
Date: 04/06/2009 - 04:24 am Title: It Happened Before
Oh, dear. If she starts talking in her sleep, Spike's going to find out whether she wants him to or not. And you used Snyder - lol Well done.
Date: 04/06/2009 - 01:36 am Title: It Happened Before
Poor Buffy. It is so good and I can't wait for more. Keep up the amazing work.
Date: 04/06/2009 - 01:30 am Title: It Happened Before
Jake, I feel so bad for Buffy... I need more info.. is it Hank? ewww more more more
Date: 04/06/2009 - 01:16 am Title: It Happened Before
I like this, but part of me really doesn't... If that makes sense. I guess I'm really curious where you are taking this. Looking forward to more.
Date: 04/06/2009 - 01:09 am Title: It Happened Before
This is highly scary for Buffy. I hope who ever this bad guy is he gets whats coming to him for taking advantage of Buffy.
Date: 04/01/2009 - 02:52 am Title: Chapter One
Strong start. Spike's going to have a fit when he finds out what she's hiding from him.
You mentioned it's unbeta'd, so thought you might like to know about one inconsistency that I noticed: in the first para you write, "Taking one last look over her nude form he stepped out...." In the next para you write, "She hurriedly shed the over-sized t-shirt she had been wearing, balling it up and tossing it towards the garbage can."
Thanks for posting. Looking forward to more!
Date: 04/01/2009 - 02:52 am Title: Chapter One
Yikes! This fic is definitely deep and dark. You really "went there" in chapter 1. Just wanted to let you know that I think it has potential. I get the feeling that Spike has no idea what's going on and will surely blow a gasket when he finds out because I don't think they're intimate yet. This seems like it was the escalating tipping-point event of Buffy's abuse with the sheet stain. Hope you get a beta to help you with story development--it will be a better story for having a beta.
Date: 04/01/2009 - 02:21 am Title: Chapter One
Oh my, I am so glad buffy has Spike to help through the tough time. I fear though that she is just hiding that it actually happened from her and Spike. I hope for more soon.
Date: 04/01/2009 - 02:19 am Title: Chapter One
love it so far...cant wait to see more =)
Date: 04/01/2009 - 02:18 am Title: Chapter One
Jake, you made me see I'm guessing John Ritter raping Buffy in my head.. ewwwww, but well done ;) keep going. Cant wait to see where this goes
Date: 04/01/2009 - 01:51 am Title: Chapter One
i LIKE THIS CANT WAIT TO SEE WERE YOU TAKE IT