Date: 07/19/2009 - 07:10 pm Title: Chapter 16
Ohhh so sad she is hurting so much... and him too. I wish there is hope for them!
Date: 07/19/2009 - 05:11 pm Title: Chapter 16
wow, that was harsh, but i'm loving this story.
Date: 07/18/2009 - 12:49 am Title: Chapter 16
I tried to respond to your response and it wouldn't let me. lol So I'm posting a new review. It's not that you've lost me as a reader, because I do think the story is lovely, but I think I need a break from angst in general right now. I don't know if you've read any of my fics, but I'm almost finished writing one called How to Save a Life, and I wrote several chapters of extreme angst recently. So I'm in the mood for fluffy things at the moment. I will probably come back and read the ending later though. I would like to see where the two of them end up. Also I do love your fiction. :) Take care and good luck!
- Kiera
Author's Response: Yeah, you can't really respond to the responses. Anyway, it's perfectly understandable. Believe me, I've stopped reading fictions that were too angsty, I'm more for fluff, so I can't say I've read any of yours. It's odd, usually people come to me for fluffy stories since I write that the most, I tend to suck when it comes to angst. I guess I just felt like taking this story in a darker direction. Thanks for reading up to this point, and I hope to see you again=)
Date: 07/17/2009 - 07:54 pm Title: Chapter 16
Heart-breaking but brilliantly written, I hope things get better for them, looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 07/17/2009 - 07:12 pm Title: Chapter 16
What a tragic situation, it just breaks my heart that Buffy had to suffer this way. :( Sad, but still a good update.
Date: 07/17/2009 - 06:42 pm Title: Chapter 16
Very well done. Depressing..? yes, but very well done. (Ben... did not see that one coming...) It's a hell of a thing for Buffy to try & comeback from, but..? we know Spike - he won't give up on her.
One question {or rather me begging for something} : Is there any chance of Ben getting the sort of torturous death he deserves for this..? (prepares gratuitous bribe) just asking...
LCF
Author's Response: Hmm, death is very tempting, but probably not what I'll be doing. I haven't exactly decided his fate yet, but you never know what could happen. Thanks for reading=)
Date: 07/17/2009 - 01:30 pm Title: Chapter 16
Oh God! Buffy lost the baby! More please!
Date: 07/16/2009 - 11:27 pm Title: Chapter 16
Oh God, poor Buffy! Ah, I know there has to be a lot of hurt before it gets better but it's just heartbreaking. Great update, can't wait for more!
Date: 07/16/2009 - 09:58 pm Title: Chapter 16
Uh-huh... so the worst happened. Not only raped, she lost the baby too. That's very hard for her. I hope that won't break Buffy and Spike up.
Date: 07/16/2009 - 09:43 pm Title: Chapter 16
NO!! She lost the baby! :( This chapter was depressing but written perfectly. I feel like crying now. I better go find a happy spuffy fic so I don't cry.
Don't take too long on the next chapter
Date: 07/16/2009 - 07:14 pm Title: Chapter 16
I think this is a great story, and definitely an interesting plot, but I'm going to politely say I don't know if I can read it anymore. I'll consider it, but I'm not sure I'll come back to it. The whole losing the baby and her pushing him away thing is depressing me, more so because I just finished writing an intensely angsty fic. Good job though and good luck with finishing it. :)
Author's Response: Aw, well, I'm sorry you feel that way, but I can understand it. I was worried about losing some people with the direction I decided to take this story, even though I wasn't going to show the rape, just the aftermath. Yes, it's all bad now, but things will get better soon, and I always have a happy ending. The pushing him away will pretty much only be in this chapter, I couldn't keep them apart for too long.
Date: 07/16/2009 - 06:47 pm Title: Chapter 16
OMG this was so sad. Poor Buffy, poor Spike. it's so horrible and she lost her baby.*cries* I hope Buffy doesn't remember and is not just saying that for fear of Ben. Stupid, disgusting, rapist pig. It looks like B is really pushing Spike away now that she needs him more than ever,.*sigh* Hope it gets better soon.She has alot to work thru.
More soon please, it's dark and angsty now but it's so good.
Date: 07/16/2009 - 05:59 pm Title: Chapter 16
wow that was an intense update. poor buffy :( that's so awful. how will they ever be able to get their relationship back on track now? i hope they work things out. great update. ps. spike can really be a douche sometimes
Date: 07/16/2009 - 05:17 pm Title: Chapter 16
aw, this chapter was heartbreaking. i have tears in my eyes now, you're doing a great job.
Date: 07/16/2009 - 05:16 pm Title: Chapter 16
Wow. That was an emotional one. I thought she was pregnant and its really sad that she lost the baby. You did a great job writing this chapter though. I could really feel the emotion from both Spike & Buffy. I really hope they work through it.