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Reviewer: liz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/17/2010 - 12:58 am Title: Chapter 1

Love the story so far, can't wait for more!

Author's Response: more here, and more to come! Thanks for taking time to comment Liz. *Hugs*

Reviewer: Sotia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/10/2009 - 12:56 pm Title: Chapter 1

I'm so bad for reading at work, but had 10 mins free and thought I'd at least read the first chapter. I'm glad I did :D

Will catch up this weekend, but until then I wanted to let you know again that I'm loving this!
*hugs*

Author's Response: I giggle to think you got into this a few chapters in, but am so glad you did! Catch up, there may be some details you might need for upcoming chapters! Love ya Sotia! Thanks so much!

Reviewer: Spikelissa Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/04/2009 - 02:03 am Title: Chapter 1

I'm a terrible reviewer because I usually get so caught up in stories and end up doing it at the end or having to go back...I tried posting but my browser crashed on me. Let's try this again! I love it! Great start. 1st. I love the banner by xaphania! 2nd. Love Buffy and Spike. You are actually very subtle in this but you still keep it very hush hush between them. Like it's still like runaway Buffy on the show but not. THIS Buffy, I actually like. Spike still seems wary but still gives her what she needs. Its oh so very subtle that they are different than the actual series until you say 'Buffy was thankful for Spike' then she proceeds to cuddle closer to her lover. She isn't shameful but she talks to him about what bothers her but not what she feels about him. Though, that right there, is too soon to tell. 3rd. Willow is going to be Big Trouble. I hope they all survive what she does. Kaia will be interesting to know who she is and what this different is. I think potential because the First Slayer was dark skinned. I personally never read the books, but this is definitely an eye turner. Well done, kitten! Keep it up and I'm on to my next chapter!

Author's Response: *giggles and blushes* I am thrilled you liked it. This story is "haunting" me and I think its coming out of my fingertips just as I see it in my mind.. it that makes sense. I highly recommend the book series, very addicting. *hugs you tight* keep reding!

Reviewer: Kirsty Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/03/2009 - 09:39 am Title: Chapter 1

Interesting start. I'm guessing it will be a bit of on the angsty side..
Spike was sweet and understanding.
Now, off to next chapter..

Author's Response: Thanks Kirsty, and yes, angsty is a main theme. I appreciate the review *hugs*

Reviewer: LoobyLoo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/18/2009 - 12:42 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh you've got me hooked!! love it!!

Author's Response: thanks Deb :) I really hope this reads as well as it sits in my head.. if that makes sense

Reviewer: xaphania Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/18/2009 - 12:22 am Title: Chapter 1

Good chapter :D

Really interesting start, very intriguing *goes to chapter 2*

Author's Response: Thanks so much for coming back to review :) and am glad you are enjoying!

Reviewer: T-Cook Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/17/2009 - 05:10 pm Title: Chapter 1

I really like the start of this I want to know more! Kaia is interesting and she sounds like she looks like a mini Buffy... How is she different to the rest I wanna know now!!!!



Author's Response: Thanks T-Cook *huggs* Hope you stay with me for the journey ;)

Reviewer: Brett Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/16/2009 - 09:31 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh this is looking interesting. I can't wait for Buffy to help Kaia. I wonder who Kaia is..Is she special? Special how? A Slayer? Questions questions questions. Keep it up, I hope Willow can help.

Author's Response: Thanks Brett :) I am really glad you liked, hope the updates are enjoyed as much *huggles*

Reviewer: Jake Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/16/2009 - 09:13 pm Title: Chapter 1

Wow Kitten! That is a great beginning. Can't wait to read the rest of it. I'm intrigued now

Author's Response: Thanks, Jake! Am so glad you liked it : I hope you enjoy future updates as well.

Reviewer: IT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/16/2009 - 04:55 pm Title: Chapter 1

I love the Clan of the Cave Bear series - perhaps becuase it was my first true introductin to smut! lol This is a good beginning. Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing IT! I remember being so sucked into the world of the Ayla and it has stuck with me for years. I truly hope I can write the great story I have in mind.

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/16/2009 - 02:53 pm Title: Chapter 1

I'm a great fan of the 'Earth's Children' books so I'm well and truly hooked. I love the way Buffy is still confiding in Spike even after the physical relationship has begun and the way the Scoobies went merrily on with their lives without noticing Buffy's pain is very true to canon. Love your portrayal of ComfortSpike.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing, All4Spike *huggs* I read the books a few years ago, before I ever watched my first Buffy episode. But since I found fanfiction, this story has been in my head. Ayla in the books always seemed so strong yet so broken.. so much like Buffy. I hope I can do a good job expressing my vision to you.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/16/2009 - 01:48 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh now I know what you mean; I've heard about the Clan of the Cave Bear books but I haven't read it yet. Good twist :)
I like the start too; looking forward to more. Kaia looks a lot like Buffy (except that BUffy is a bottle blond).

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing Cordykitten! I am tickled to finally be able to get this story out. I has kinda haunted me for awhile.

Reviewer: _3xy_ Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/16/2009 - 08:29 am Title: Chapter 1

Interesting plot! This is very different, and I'm looking forward to more. It's great that you branched out and gave us this wonderful piece.

Author's Response: Thanks, Trixie! I hope you continue to enjoy this story. Its been swirling around my noggin for a while.

Reviewer: Andy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/16/2009 - 07:45 am Title: Chapter 1

Well a very different tack for you - great start, enjoying!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing, Andy! I hope you continue to enjoy *huggles*

Reviewer: msspikester Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/16/2009 - 04:01 am Title: Chapter 1

I think this is a wonderful plot. I love your writing, and you have me very intrigued. I just want to smack Willow! How could she not catch the "I was able to guide her, comfort her." line? If she was in hell, how could she comfort someone else if she herself was being tortured? Tsk, tsk - someone's got some smackdown coming to her....

Author's Response: WOW I am so flattered! AND Happy to know that you are interested. I am excited to take you guys on this adventure with me. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: PaganBaby Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/16/2009 - 01:08 am Title: Chapter 1

This is going to be such a cool and different story! I'm hooked already :D

*dreamy sigh* I loooove how you write Spike! He's even hotter than usual -- being so comforting and listening to her -- the way he's just there for Buffy in any way that she needs him. And she's *letting* him without getting all freaked out and running off! Hooray! I like this Buffy better than the one on the show lol

I'm looking forward to seeing the story unfold -- and also looking forward to the promise of smut :P I do so love your smut! heehee

Keep up the great work! *huggles* And that's a gorgeous banner! My compliments to Xaph :)

Author's Response: Thanks PB! What a huge complement on my writing of Spike :) Yeah I havent read on like this before either, so I hope people enjoy it as much as I do. Xaph does amazing banners!

Reviewer: AMI Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/16/2009 - 01:07 am Title: Chapter 1

Wow, I really like it so far, Kitten. It looks so interesting, And I like that Buffy is not abusive with Spike and admits she feels something for him. Willow is making me nervous tho, she sounds kinda arrogant ..you know thinking she'd done a good thing and it was no one's business.

Can't wait for more and I don't mind plot as long as there's some smut. =) *hugs*

Author's Response: Thanks AMI, there will be some smut very soon, but plot driven story is on its way :)

Reviewer: Carol Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/15/2009 - 11:56 pm Title: Chapter 1

I appreciate you not writing smut - thank you. An interesting start - I'll continue to read this.

Author's Response: There will be a little smut in the story and it was noted in the author notes as well as warnings. BUT this is not PWP. Thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: Blazing Fire Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/15/2009 - 11:52 pm Title: Chapter 1

I like to story so far. I think you have been reading "Clan of the Cave Bear" lately. Kaia sounds like the girl there. This is one of my favorite books. You have me hooked aready.

Great Work!!!

Author's Response: I read the books years ago and yeah I noted in my author notes this has influences. Stay with this and I hope you like future updates :) Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: badalyce Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/15/2009 - 11:22 pm Title: Chapter 1

why do i have the feeling willow is a stupid and arogant willow? anyway comfort spike is always good. you got me interested with this first chapter and i'm waiting for the next one. who could this kaia be ... i have an idea but i will wait to see ... maybe i am wrong.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing BadAlyce! This fic is very different from my others, but I have had this drifting in and out of my mind for some time and am happy to share!

Reviewer: xoChantelly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/15/2009 - 09:53 pm Title: Chapter 1

wow! This is interesting! I cant wait to find out what is going to happen. Kaia sounds alot like Buffy in description. I think this will be an interesting fic and very original! Cant wait for moree!!!

*cracks whip* Luv ya Kitten!! *hugs tight*

Author's Response: I am so glad you liked, this is very different from my usual fics. Stay tuned for updates :)

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