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Reviewer: xaphania Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/06/2009 - 03:53 pm Title: Chapter 17

Oh. Poor Buffy/Kaia. I'm glad Kahn's dead, but I'm curious as to where they're going to go, now that they won't let Kaia back into the caves.

Willow's getting scary, too. Felt bad for Spike :(

Good chapter!

Author's Response: This was a tough chapter, but it was needed to progress the story. Willow *shakes head* she needs help.

Reviewer: Andy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/13/2009 - 05:31 pm Title: Chapter 17

Poor Kaia/Buffy having to endure that evil Kahn - glad he's dead! Hope Buffy doesn't beat herself up too much about killing a human! And loved Willow dealing with Angel, even though she's bad now. Groma will be missed when she leaves the clan, Hourak should have thought it through more! really enjoying this!!! update soon!!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review andy :) Groma will be missed more than the clan realizes.... Hourak really should have thought this through. Updates to come soon :)

Reviewer: Spikelissa Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/11/2009 - 06:38 pm Title: Chapter 17

I wanted to wish you a Happy Birthday Kitten!!!!!! I'm out and this was all I could get on to send you huggz and smoochies for your happy day!!!! Oh and still can't wait for an update, :).

Author's Response: *bounces* Thanks! Birthday was good, and an update soon, I promise!

Reviewer: AMI Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/09/2009 - 11:40 pm Title: Chapter 17

Oh God I knew it was gonnna happen but it was hard to read. Poor Buffy/Kaia. I'm glad she killed him I hope Buffy doesn't feel guilt for too long.Yay! the cave perv is dead! Loved Willow using that forgetting spell on Angel. lol and Spike feels that Buffy is in trouble. Poor Groma too, she has to leave her home. but she won't leave Buffy/Kaia and maybe she can help Buffy.

Good chappie, even if it was rough. Can't wait for the next one!

Author's Response: Thanks for the R&R AMI, yeah, I warned it from the beginning. Its a very important part of the story, so my apologies, but I made sure it was as none graphic as possible. *flicks angel* spell was funny :) much much more to come. *hugs* thanks for being a loyal reader!

Reviewer: Kirsty Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/09/2009 - 07:47 pm Title: Chapter 17

Well. at least the gross bastard is now dead. But just a bit too late, though. I do hope Buffy/Kaia will survive and be ok.
Now what will happen to her, in the new cave.. Whar dangers will come upon them. And will Ullah leave them be?

Angel not able to babysit Willow afterall.. bad Willow! Will he remember after a while what happened.. then how will his ego react.

Spike is trying, but more needs to be done..

Loved the update, despite it being hard to read, but luckily not too hard nor too into detail.
Do keep on writing :)



Author's Response: Thanks for the R&R Kirsty. Kahns death is good, but there are repercussions as we've already seen. Angel... are we done with him...stay tuned. Spike will be doing more very soon. Much more coming !

Reviewer: Spikelissa Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/09/2009 - 05:26 pm Title: Chapter 17

Oh god! I knew it! Buffy is still going to place Kahn in that 'human' equals innocent category. I have a really bad feeling when they finally get Buffy back that she won't see anything wrong with what Willow did. It's infuriating how she lets sins go when they are human, but, yet, demon transgressions are never forgotten. Don't get me wrong I understand that mentality because she is the Slayer. Oh no, this could mean bad news for Spike when she comes back. I hope she hangs onto that mantra that Spike is changing. God this was one thing that bothered me with this show!!!! Soul vs. No Soul. There are many 'innocents' who have souls doing evil and wretched things! I say innocents loosely because the way it was put was humans are innocents whereas demons aren't. This pissed me off but still made me understand it because the Slayer can't guess who is evil or not. Though you would think that she had some internal radar for that. Hmmm
Ok rant over. I said this because of one sentence you have Buffy speaking. It pissed me off lol.

I killed a human. As the slayer, I am here to protect humans. Not kill them, Kaia. No matter what.

This just bothered me. It was accidental and she was defending herself. SO had she not been a Slayer she would still be "OH GOD I killed someone!!!!" "I'm bad I deserve punishment"

Whereas in a court of law they would look at facts and determine was this accidental - a fight for your own life? Or was it in fact pre-meditated murder. So this is also why I have problems with AR scene too...

Nuff bout that lol! Great update! I had a feeling you would lean towards Buffy accidentally killing him while defending herself. I just hope she gets off the pity party and realizes it was in defense and look at it from a victim point of view. She's blocking that out!

Still loving the Tara/Spike interaction. Spike is being incredibly intuitive to all in the house....I LOVE it!

Typical Willow with Angel. Wonder if this is a good thing or bad thing? Can't wait for more! So sorry I ranted on your reviews!!!!! I am sure this was incredibly hard to write. I congratulate you! Well done! I so hope Groma helps Buffy/Kaia heal both mentally and physically as well as emotionally. GOD I LOVE HER!!!! Update soon!!!!!!

Author's Response: I love your review :) I left you some clues/answers on EF... dont forget to look. I responded there first cuz TSR was being bitchy. Oracles and Spike playing a larger role coming soon. Plus life in the small cave, not gonna be without problems. Thanks for being such a loyal reader and awesome reviewer!

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/09/2009 - 04:57 pm Title: Chapter 17

I think you handled a difficult passage very well. Poor Buffy/Kaia. Now she doesn't need to leave the home cave to remain safe, she has to leave anyway! Typical S6 Willow, casually telling Angel off and instead of explaining, exerting her power to force her will upon him. More please...

Author's Response: Thank you so much All4Spike, it was hard, but a very important part of the story. There is so much more, I hope you enjoy upcoming chapters too :)

Reviewer: maryperk Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/09/2009 - 04:06 pm Title: Chapter 17

Hmmm, consequences for Willow need to happen soon before she gets even more stupid.

Author's Response: Hmmm, I think some consequences for Willow will be happening soon. Stay with, much more to come.

Reviewer: PaganBaby Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/09/2009 - 03:41 pm Title: Chapter 17

Poor Buffy/Kaia *shudders* I was hoping Kahn wouldn't go that far. I know it must've been hard for you to write *hugs* Thank you for not going into graphic detail. The incident itself was scary and sad enough.

The part with Spike was as sweet as I've come to expect from the peeks back at SunnyD. You've done so well with showing his devotion to her *sniffles*

The part with Willow and Angel was interesting too -- lots going on in this chapter! I'm glad to see Angel go on his way, but Willow going unchecked is not a good thing either.

You did a great job on this difficult to write chapter, nicely done, my friend *Smoochies & Lurve*

Author's Response: Thanks PB. This was a diffucult chaper to write and it bugged me for days, even prevented me from writing other things, damn it! *shakes fist at story* I knew before I started writing that this was an important part of the story and had to bid my time to get it set up just right. Spike is doing a fine job watching over the girls :) Angel set home...*sigh* good move, but unsupervised Willow with magick issues cant be good. More to come, much much more. *huggles and keeps you close*

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/09/2009 - 03:25 pm Title: Chapter 17

Oh why could Buffy defend her own now after Kaia and Buffy were raped? That should have happened earlier, before she was raped. I just hope she isn't pregnant but Groma should see to that.
And as I feared Kaia can't stay with her clan now. Things got a lot harsher in this chapter. *sigh*

Author's Response: Thanks CK, I didnt know how you would react to the rape. I tried hard to be as non-graphic as possible. Times are harsh for the "3" of them now, but the do have each other. Kahn out of the picture is a blessing, but at what costs...

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