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Reviewer: Annie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/26/2009 - 03:57 am Title: Chapter 24

Well, the beginning really hooked me into the story and i was eager to find out more and how Tara and Spike were going to save Buffy.

I think that this is a highly original story! I have honestly never read a Spuffy story like this before.

Though, I seem to skim now instead of read. I thought adding Angel was kind of pointless and used as a way to get cheap laughs (yeah, him acting 4. Not funny). Also, the Oracles. THEY ARE ORACLES! I am sure they know what orange juice and pancakes, and utensils are! Even if they never see them. They are higher beings as well, so getting a "gift" from the Key or a mystical ball of energy doesn't seem like something to freak out about...they are connected to the PTB, way more impressive. Plus, their reactions again reminded me of 4 year olds.

The only other thing that bothered me was that you had such a good idea of the story and wrote such amazing and REAL first chapters to about the middle, then it just seemed like you ran out of ways to make it longer, so added Angel and a pregnancy.

I will still read it as I am hoping some of the earlier sparks from the first chapter return.

I'd give it a 5/10 so far, mainly because right now the bad is out weighing the good.

Author's Response: Thanks for the reading and reviewing of my story. I appreciate that you even gave it a chance from the beginning, and am sorry you are feeling negative about it. This story was plotted out completely before a word was ever put to paper, and no, all the parts you disagree with were never added to 'make longer'. I will however, because you took the time to point out exactly what you disliked, address them. Angel-was always trying to save the day, and yes it was added for a bit of humor (Joss did that on the show too) to lighten the mood so to say. The Oracles-sure they know everything, really? you seem so sure. Are YOU an Oracle? (JK) The rape/pregnancy is a major part of the story. It is what creates the turmoil and chaos within the character at this point of the story. If you choose to continue reading, I hope you enjoy the rest. If you don't after reading this review, I will thank you anyway. I appreciate any review, and the time you've invested in reading what I have poured many hours of thought into.

Reviewer: xoChantelly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/25/2009 - 08:07 am Title: Chapter 24

Yay for Spike's victory. Buffy is so hurt right now, all the hormones and emotions are getting past her stiff upper lip facade. I hope Spike will get to her soon. I think she needs a friendly face. Specially Spike, someone to hold her and to share her pregnancy with. I hope they meet up soon.

Poor Groma, she isn't doing too well either.

Ah, Willow got a tste of her own medicine with the flaying, huh? But, I really really hope that nothing baad happens to Tara. Please update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks for the read and review chan *hugs tight* I hope all is well with you, its been a while! I promise they will meet up soon, very soon, maybe even next chapter. As far as Tara.... stay tuned!

Reviewer: AMI Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/24/2009 - 08:16 pm Title: Chapter 24

Wow.. Intense Willow flaying. Liked how you put that in, parallels what she did to Warren S6. I kinda feel sorry for her but not that much. I'm really worried about poor Tara now that The Beast knows about her. :(

Good for Spike kicking UberVamp ass. Go! Spike.
LOL... Not so fast there, great-great-great-great granddad. Gotta love Spike.
I hope Spike finds Buffy soon, I'm getting worried that she seems to want to stay in Caveville. Hope that changes once Spike arrives. But I know she does have to stay until she gives birth. Can't wait for Spike's reaction to that.

More soon Kitten! Loved it as usual. =)

Author's Response: Thanks AMI! Willow, Tara... bad bad bad, but have faith (not Faith...) I will have an update on that soon. Spike was lucky to get thru the fight as quickly as he did. He will find her soon, but yeah. Then what :P more next week!

Reviewer: Spikelissa Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/24/2009 - 07:17 pm Title: Chapter 24

Spike is getting closer and Buffy is missing him. She will recognize him, but will he? I'm gonna go with he will. He is always so intuitive to Buffy.

The flaying from the best seems enough to scare (and gross us out lol) Willow although, it's not breaking her.

What I am beyond worried about is...This beast going after Tara. I really hope nothing happens to Tara. How is going after Tara going to make her listen? It will only push her towards anger and revenge - not to the point of breaking. Tsk Tsk Tsk Mr. Demon to break Willow you must take away something that means a bit more to her - and that's power (magic). Tara means a lot to her but it will only serve as means to come back with a vengeance. Ah you make this so edge on the seat! More Kitten definitely more!!!!!

*Send lots of hugs n smooches for an awesome update*

Author's Response: Thanks for another awesome review Lissa. Willow is in a bad situation, the Beast knows what he's doing, be patient, but Willow, skinless, and magically bound! wtf is she gonna do? another update soon!

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/24/2009 - 04:03 pm Title: Chapter 24

Well done, Spike! Oh dear, it sounds as if Buffy is resigned to staying. Hurry up and find her, Spike! Poor Willow! Gruesome! Still she still fails to recognise that she deserves punishment. Eek! No... he can't go after Tara! I'm on the edge of my seat here.....

Author's Response: Thanks All4Spike :) Spike grabbing Buffy and going home isnt going to be as easy as he thought.... and Tara, stay wiff, answers soon!

Reviewer: PaganBaby Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/24/2009 - 03:46 pm Title: Chapter 24

Spike dusted those ugly uber vamps - Yay! And without getting too messed up himself :D Now, if he can just find Buffy... It's good to see that she still feels the same way about Spike, and regrets the way she left him without explanation. She's going to be super suprised to see him too!

Eww Willow's punishment was creepy - and ironic, considering we know what she did in s6 on the show. I'm worried about Tara now. Willow's arrogance and stupidity is going to end up hurting someone else *shakes fist at Willow again*

Great chapter, Kitten! I can never get enough of this story! More soon please :D *huggles and smoochies of love*

Author's Response: Thanks for the review and all the other stuff you do *sings*
Buffy will be surprised, and soon. but will she be happy? Willow ... so sad what you've become... *shakes head* More answers to all the questions in coming chapters.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/24/2009 - 03:27 pm Title: Chapter 24

Oh I hope Spike will find Buffy.
For Willow it looks even worse. But Tara hasn't done a thing. Hope she won't be in trouble.
PS: Fangfetish is down at the moment and should come back but the button from "thereadershavechosen" isn't visible either.

Author's Response: Thanks CK *hugs* Willow..Willow..Willow.. answers in next chapter.

Reviewer: Andy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/24/2009 - 03:26 pm Title: Chapter 24

Hmm! I see, like that is it hmm....

Author's Response: Thats right *struts*

Reviewer: xaphania Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/24/2009 - 03:15 pm Title: Chapter 24

Ahh you're torturing us with the non-meetingness of Buffy and Spike :P Was it Spike Buffy sensed?

Great chapter! I'm worried for Tara, now. Hope Willow's arrogance isn't going to get her hurt :(

More, please? :P

Author's Response: Thanks for the review Xaph *hugs* Spuffy reunion coming up. Tara... you just have to wait and see ;) but answers soon, I promise.

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