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Reviewer: PaganBaby Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/16/2009 - 03:15 pm Title: Chapter 18

We got a peek at what all the characters are up to :D It's sad that Hourak has to banish Kaia. I can understand his decision, but still... *shakes fist* I doubt the other clan members would let her back in even if Hourak said it was okay, anyway :(

Tara's still uber-cool :D Very brave of her to meet with those creepy Oracles by herself - and they like the gift. Can't wait to see what it is :P

Uh-oh, Willow's getting deeper and deeper into the mess she created. She's having thoughts that she f'd up royally, but will it be too late? *bites nails*

Another great chapter! Loved it, Kitten *smooches & cuddles* Go ahead with yo bad self :P

Author's Response: *tackles and squishes PB* The clan has its rules, and Hourak as leader must follow them... even if they dont seem right. I think the girls will be safer away from the non-trusting cave people. At least the blood drinkers only come out at night... Tara Rocks, nuff said. Willow, shes in a world of trouble. Hope the consequences arent to great for her.. or the scoobs. Stay with, much more tale to tell!

Reviewer: Andy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/16/2009 - 02:41 pm Title: Chapter 18

So Hourak regrets the decision he's got to make - but Groma was very good saying the clan could still go to her.

So what were the gifts? Argh!!

And willow....she's shaken hands with the Devil himself now, and must pay the consequences....more please!!!

Author's Response: Thanks for the R&R Andy! Groma rocks, dont ever forget that! and the gifts... you should know me better than to give you all the info :P, and Willow, what will become of her.. and her friends? More to come!

Reviewer: Andy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/13/2009 - 05:31 pm Title: Chapter 17

Poor Kaia/Buffy having to endure that evil Kahn - glad he's dead! Hope Buffy doesn't beat herself up too much about killing a human! And loved Willow dealing with Angel, even though she's bad now. Groma will be missed when she leaves the clan, Hourak should have thought it through more! really enjoying this!!! update soon!!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review andy :) Groma will be missed more than the clan realizes.... Hourak really should have thought this through. Updates to come soon :)

Reviewer: Spikelissa Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/11/2009 - 06:38 pm Title: Chapter 17

I wanted to wish you a Happy Birthday Kitten!!!!!! I'm out and this was all I could get on to send you huggz and smoochies for your happy day!!!! Oh and still can't wait for an update, :).

Author's Response: *bounces* Thanks! Birthday was good, and an update soon, I promise!

Reviewer: AMI Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/09/2009 - 11:40 pm Title: Chapter 17

Oh God I knew it was gonnna happen but it was hard to read. Poor Buffy/Kaia. I'm glad she killed him I hope Buffy doesn't feel guilt for too long.Yay! the cave perv is dead! Loved Willow using that forgetting spell on Angel. lol and Spike feels that Buffy is in trouble. Poor Groma too, she has to leave her home. but she won't leave Buffy/Kaia and maybe she can help Buffy.

Good chappie, even if it was rough. Can't wait for the next one!

Author's Response: Thanks for the R&R AMI, yeah, I warned it from the beginning. Its a very important part of the story, so my apologies, but I made sure it was as none graphic as possible. *flicks angel* spell was funny :) much much more to come. *hugs* thanks for being a loyal reader!

Reviewer: Kirsty Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/09/2009 - 07:47 pm Title: Chapter 17

Well. at least the gross bastard is now dead. But just a bit too late, though. I do hope Buffy/Kaia will survive and be ok.
Now what will happen to her, in the new cave.. Whar dangers will come upon them. And will Ullah leave them be?

Angel not able to babysit Willow afterall.. bad Willow! Will he remember after a while what happened.. then how will his ego react.

Spike is trying, but more needs to be done..

Loved the update, despite it being hard to read, but luckily not too hard nor too into detail.
Do keep on writing :)



Author's Response: Thanks for the R&R Kirsty. Kahns death is good, but there are repercussions as we've already seen. Angel... are we done with him...stay tuned. Spike will be doing more very soon. Much more coming !

Reviewer: Spikelissa Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/09/2009 - 05:26 pm Title: Chapter 17

Oh god! I knew it! Buffy is still going to place Kahn in that 'human' equals innocent category. I have a really bad feeling when they finally get Buffy back that she won't see anything wrong with what Willow did. It's infuriating how she lets sins go when they are human, but, yet, demon transgressions are never forgotten. Don't get me wrong I understand that mentality because she is the Slayer. Oh no, this could mean bad news for Spike when she comes back. I hope she hangs onto that mantra that Spike is changing. God this was one thing that bothered me with this show!!!! Soul vs. No Soul. There are many 'innocents' who have souls doing evil and wretched things! I say innocents loosely because the way it was put was humans are innocents whereas demons aren't. This pissed me off but still made me understand it because the Slayer can't guess who is evil or not. Though you would think that she had some internal radar for that. Hmmm
Ok rant over. I said this because of one sentence you have Buffy speaking. It pissed me off lol.

I killed a human. As the slayer, I am here to protect humans. Not kill them, Kaia. No matter what.

This just bothered me. It was accidental and she was defending herself. SO had she not been a Slayer she would still be "OH GOD I killed someone!!!!" "I'm bad I deserve punishment"

Whereas in a court of law they would look at facts and determine was this accidental - a fight for your own life? Or was it in fact pre-meditated murder. So this is also why I have problems with AR scene too...

Nuff bout that lol! Great update! I had a feeling you would lean towards Buffy accidentally killing him while defending herself. I just hope she gets off the pity party and realizes it was in defense and look at it from a victim point of view. She's blocking that out!

Still loving the Tara/Spike interaction. Spike is being incredibly intuitive to all in the house....I LOVE it!

Typical Willow with Angel. Wonder if this is a good thing or bad thing? Can't wait for more! So sorry I ranted on your reviews!!!!! I am sure this was incredibly hard to write. I congratulate you! Well done! I so hope Groma helps Buffy/Kaia heal both mentally and physically as well as emotionally. GOD I LOVE HER!!!! Update soon!!!!!!

Author's Response: I love your review :) I left you some clues/answers on EF... dont forget to look. I responded there first cuz TSR was being bitchy. Oracles and Spike playing a larger role coming soon. Plus life in the small cave, not gonna be without problems. Thanks for being such a loyal reader and awesome reviewer!

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/09/2009 - 04:57 pm Title: Chapter 17

I think you handled a difficult passage very well. Poor Buffy/Kaia. Now she doesn't need to leave the home cave to remain safe, she has to leave anyway! Typical S6 Willow, casually telling Angel off and instead of explaining, exerting her power to force her will upon him. More please...

Author's Response: Thank you so much All4Spike, it was hard, but a very important part of the story. There is so much more, I hope you enjoy upcoming chapters too :)

Reviewer: maryperk Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/09/2009 - 04:06 pm Title: Chapter 17

Hmmm, consequences for Willow need to happen soon before she gets even more stupid.

Author's Response: Hmmm, I think some consequences for Willow will be happening soon. Stay with, much more to come.

Reviewer: PaganBaby Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/09/2009 - 03:41 pm Title: Chapter 17

Poor Buffy/Kaia *shudders* I was hoping Kahn wouldn't go that far. I know it must've been hard for you to write *hugs* Thank you for not going into graphic detail. The incident itself was scary and sad enough.

The part with Spike was as sweet as I've come to expect from the peeks back at SunnyD. You've done so well with showing his devotion to her *sniffles*

The part with Willow and Angel was interesting too -- lots going on in this chapter! I'm glad to see Angel go on his way, but Willow going unchecked is not a good thing either.

You did a great job on this difficult to write chapter, nicely done, my friend *Smoochies & Lurve*

Author's Response: Thanks PB. This was a diffucult chaper to write and it bugged me for days, even prevented me from writing other things, damn it! *shakes fist at story* I knew before I started writing that this was an important part of the story and had to bid my time to get it set up just right. Spike is doing a fine job watching over the girls :) Angel set home...*sigh* good move, but unsupervised Willow with magick issues cant be good. More to come, much much more. *huggles and keeps you close*

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/09/2009 - 03:25 pm Title: Chapter 17

Oh why could Buffy defend her own now after Kaia and Buffy were raped? That should have happened earlier, before she was raped. I just hope she isn't pregnant but Groma should see to that.
And as I feared Kaia can't stay with her clan now. Things got a lot harsher in this chapter. *sigh*

Author's Response: Thanks CK, I didnt know how you would react to the rape. I tried hard to be as non-graphic as possible. Times are harsh for the "3" of them now, but the do have each other. Kahn out of the picture is a blessing, but at what costs...

Reviewer: Kirsty Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/08/2009 - 10:05 am Title: Chapter 16

You just had to bring in Angel.. like this story already didn't have enough annoying and stupid idiots.. So many people to hit some sense into.. *sighs*
But then again Angel does bring out the best of Spike.. ;)

Willow is getting into more and more trouble.. And that just means more trouble for all.
Angel looking for brownie points .. yeah, please like those would help her to choose him over Spike..

Looking forward to the meeting with the Oracles.. and dreading the confrontation between Kahn and Buffy/Kaia.. I guess more Angel would be alright too.. and Willow..and Spike..


Author's Response: Thanks for the R&R Kirsty. Angel ... what can I say, I like him and Spike arguing :) And making him look like an ass... but, just keep reading. He and Willow will learn valuable lessons. Oracle visit coming soon.

Reviewer: spuffyistruluv Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/07/2009 - 10:46 pm Title: Chapter 16

Angel anoys me, but he's probably a part you need so I'll bare with it :P

I'm loving your story(: ..and hating Kahn and hating a little Willow too.

Hope Buffy finds her way to Spike (:
Keep it up;)
XXX

Author's Response: Thanks for the R&R Tru, keep reading, I think you will like future updates.

Reviewer: xaphania Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/05/2009 - 10:51 pm Title: Chapter 16

Ack I spoke too soon about Angel XD

And ahh you're evil to leave it there :P I hope Buffy will be able to stop Kahn doing what he's planning to do.

Great chapter!

Author's Response: *smirk* Angel is an ass isn't he :P Kahn is a slimey cave perv... and he's making his move. *shudders*

Reviewer: xaphania Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/05/2009 - 10:47 pm Title: Chapter 15

Uh-oh... Kahn is disgusting :/ So were they turok-han? Nice idea. Loved Tara's conversation with Angel, glad she convinced him to stay away.

Author's Response: Thanks for the R&R Xaph! So glad you are enjoying *huggles*

Reviewer: xaphania Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/05/2009 - 10:43 pm Title: Chapter 14

Finally catching up on this! Interesting chapter, I'm worried about what Kahn's planning, and Tara going to the Oracles is a good idea.

Author's Response: YAY Catching up! Kahn is an ass, and Oracles are a great idea :P

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/05/2009 - 10:04 pm Title: Chapter 16

Oh! I forget, Willow is in the mansion right now.... Angel will have a guest then. *reads on* He noticed.
And Spike is right - if Angel takes care of Willow (even if it is out of selfish reasons) at last Willow is out of the way.
And hi, another cliffhanger! More soon?

Author's Response: Yup, Willow is at the mansion making a mess :P Willow .. *shakes head* yeah, another cliffhanger :P

Reviewer: AMI Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/05/2009 - 07:55 pm Title: Chapter 16

OH GOD !! Evil Cliffie! Angel is a sanctimonious jerk, and Willow is totally out of control. Maybe Willow will do something to Angel?LOL Loved Spike's convo w/ Angel . Where does he get off thinking he always knows best? Can't Kahn be eaten by one of those Uber vamps? Slimy cave perv!

Great chappie, Kitten! The next one's gonna be bad isn't it? *bites nails*

More soon please...

Author's Response: Thanks AMI, *snickers at cliffie* Angel= Older doesnt always mean wiser *ass* Kahn= cave perv extrordinaire! Next chappie will be ruff I'm afraid :(

Reviewer: xoChantelly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/05/2009 - 05:23 pm Title: Chapter 16

good chapter. I like the part with Willow. Once again, it was like watching a movie.

And the bit about Spike and Angel.... priceless. I just love Spike's glib attitude, but I can't help but be nervous about it. Angel did have some pretty important things to tell him, but he just shooed him away.

I hope it wasn't a mistake. And it's good to see Buffy alright from the fight, but what is she going to do what Kahn steps up to attack her... And silly Angel. Always going where he isn't needed. *shakes head* He just can't stay away when Buffy doesn't need him. But leaves when she does... no sense of direction, huh? I so can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks, Chan! major compliment about it being like a movie! I love it! Angel is such an ass... cant wait to see what happens to him when he confronts Willow :)

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/05/2009 - 04:48 pm Title: Chapter 16

I knew it! Willow's sinking into the dark magic in an attempt to 'fix' her screw-up and Angel's coming to 'save the day' whether he's needed or not. Patronising git.
Buffy/Kaia doesn't realise she's in danger 'cos she doesn't feel any demon tinglies... LOOK BEHIND YOU!
Oracles next....
Soon please...

Author's Response: *giggles* Thanks for the review All4Spike! Oracles soon, I promise!

Reviewer: Spikelissa Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/05/2009 - 03:57 pm Title: Chapter 16

Ok now I'm getting irritated lol! Angel is such a pretentious bastard! Why is it that I am coming to the conclusion Kahn is just like Angel? Angel is so going to screw up and get himself roped into whatever Willow is trying to accomplish. I just hope that Tara and Spike find what they need to bring Buffy back. Crosses fingers for what comes with the visit to the Oracle's. Another thing that really made me peeved was Willow's whole theory that Buffy is on a freaking vacation! I know Buffy has learned quite a bit where she is, but for what's coming - I truly, very truly, feel for her. I am cringing - will it be she hurts (quite possibly kills) Kahn and is accused or hides this fact or she lets him to protect herself but shame herself at the same time. Tough spot to be in. Why is it the freaking vamps didn't attack the sick bastard???? Oh I am really deep into this story Kitten! Definitely know how to bring out the emotions for the reader! Love the update! Sorry been MIA lately have only come on to read at work - been excercising like mad! Hugs wonderful update!!!!!

Author's Response: Excercizing like mad! Thats great!!! I am all bouncy with your excitement at the story and the chapter! I have so much more to share... so stay wiff, updates soon !

Reviewer: PaganBaby Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/05/2009 - 03:42 pm Title: Chapter 16

I was like "Oh noooo!" when Angel decided to stick his big brow into it despite Tara telling him not to lol But Spike sent him away easily, what with the wards on the house and all *smooches Tara for doing that :P* heehee

I don't like the sounds of that demon in the stone thing. Willow's all dark-eyed, veiny, and nuts. And - Awww! - the poor bunny lol

Worried about Buffy too! I'm hoping she has enough strength to pop Kahn's head off like a champagne cork :)

Loved the chapter, babe! *hugs & smoochies*

Author's Response: OK>>> ONE> MORE>TIME> I am thrilled at your enthusiasm with this story *bounces* There is so much going on and you are keeping me on track :) I love Tara and I think is shows, and Willow.. WTF was she thinking, and Buffy... :( Spike is so hot when hes telling off Angel isnt he :P So much more to come, stick around :P

Reviewer: Spikelissa Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/01/2009 - 07:05 pm Title: Chapter 15

Cringes for Kaia/Buffy. I knew she was a Slayer! It explains the feelings that Kaia felt leading Buffy to ultimately think this! Oh and I'm still loving the Kaia and Buffy talking/working together. I'm just hoping Buffy will go back when it's her time. Gulps at that. Cus I had the impression other than Spike she was reluctant in wanting to go back. Another question that has been dancing around in my head - Is the possibility of Kaia being the First Slayer, Senaya. My head's playing with the theory of this that your First Slayer is Kaia...Hmmm let's my mind run, lol.

Can I just tell you that I LOVE your Tara! She kept Angel away, but for how long? If given the opportunity I think Tara would have done so much better on the show than quite possibly Willow did and I love all the characters but some more so than others. Tara just amazes me here. You still give her this air of insecurity but you have managed to gain her some confidence. I swear I think it's having someone like Spike on her side that is bringing this out! Love it! And...GASP...she swears! Finally, because I love quiet shy Tara but self confident wise Tara is even better. I Loved the update. EEK, the vamps you have are freaky. Now, finally, Kahn I have a feeling is going to be shoved off and Kaia/Buffy run away in fear. I'm wondering if she will run to her cave or run to Groma should anything happen. Oh so many questions but having a feeling something will happen Kaia/Buffy will protect themselves. I don't think they will kill Kahn but just hurt him really bad and run. Ok maybe I should stop and start begging...Kitten pretty please update soon!!!!!!! Loved it as always!

Author's Response: I am guessing that you really liked this updaye :P Lots of info huh? much more to be revealed and soon, I promise, really I do :) Love your reviews, so full of questions and ideas, but you know I cant tell you! heehee Evil aren't I :D

Reviewer: Brett Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/31/2009 - 10:57 pm Title: Chapter 15

Oh No! What is Kahn going to do? I am worrying now.

Author's Response: Oh Brett, Kahn is a bad, bad, man... you should worry.

Reviewer: spuffyistruluv Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/31/2009 - 08:01 pm Title: Chapter 15

Ugh, Kahn just creeps me out, hopefully Buffy/Kaia will protect them selves;)

The vamps of the race of the master, are those like Turok Hans's or just the race of the master? xD

Oh and Tara refusing Angel to come to help, way to go Tara! :)

Loving your story, it's so original;)

Keep it up
XXX

Author's Response: Thanks tru! Kahn os bad, and yes vamps are the Uber vamps from season 7, Tara rocks *hugs*

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