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Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/17/2009 - 12:23 pm Title: Chapter 2

Duh... Buffy trusts Willow too much. Willow doesn't think, just 'tweaks' the spells to her liking. She has no clue what she will do.
But I'm looking forward to 'see' it happen.

Author's Response: hehehe Thanks Cordykitten! Stay with me, theres much more to come.

Reviewer: badalyce Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/17/2009 - 10:23 am Title: Chapter 2

"I only have your best interest at heart" yeah right! she is going to screw things up like always. ok i waiting for the next chapter to see where buffy ends up and the catastrofic results of willow "i'm better than anybody" spell. more more and soon

Author's Response: *hugs badalyce* You like this and I am happy :) thanks for reading and reviewing. Willow was a bit smug wasnt she ;)

Reviewer: msspikester Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/17/2009 - 04:04 am Title: Chapter 2

“Trust me Buffy, I only have your best interest at heart.” (And let me push you through the portal to the "Land of the Lost.")
You know there is going to be trouble when almost-dark Willow starts with "trust me..."
Still looking forward to that witch's smackdown...even though we'll have to wait a little bit. (And btw, enjoyed the smut included in this chapter, LOL)

Author's Response: Thanks Msspikester! :) glad you are enjoying! much more to come

Reviewer: IT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/17/2009 - 03:15 am Title: Chapter 2

"Trust me." Uh, oh! Looking forward to more!

Author's Response: Thanks IT! more soon I promise :)

Reviewer: PaganBaby Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/17/2009 - 01:13 am Title: Chapter 2

Uh-oh, Willow's goin' all kracky and thinking she knows best. That ain't gonna be good for Buffy!

The way Spike woke Buffy up, however, was *very good*! :P I loved that scene! The tenderness between Spike and Buffy is...well it's just awesome! lol I get verklempt when I read happy lovin' Spuffy :D

*smooochies* More, please! :)

Author's Response: Thanks PB! I dedicate lovey ComfortSpike to you ;)

Reviewer: AMI Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/17/2009 - 12:56 am Title: Chapter 2

OMG this is so good! I don't like Willow at all, she's arrogant and a know it all. God only knows what that spell will do...don't get why Buffy trusts her. I do love Buffy being kind to Spike and not a bitca as in canon.

Can't wait for more of this, it's gonna be really great. *huggles*

Author's Response: *hugs AMI tight* Thanks you so much! Nice Buffy lives in my story.

Reviewer: Sibb Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/17/2009 - 12:17 am Title: Chapter 2

Very interesting! You paint a very realistic picture of Willow's hubris. And I love the fact that even though Buffy is depressed she isn't being cruel to Spike. I can't wait for more updates!

Author's Response: Thanks Sibb :) More soon I promise! No mean Buffy in my stories, I saw enough of that on the show to last a lifetime.

Reviewer: Jake Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/17/2009 - 12:16 am Title: Chapter 2

Ooh now I'm really intrigued. Can't wait to see where you take this. Great job!

Author's Response: Thanks Jake *bouncing in happiness* So glad you are still liking :)

Reviewer: xoChantelly Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/17/2009 - 12:13 am Title: Chapter 2

Uh oh... I am nervous about the spell!! I don't quite know what to expect. Buffy was dead when she first started to see Kaia, so does that mean by sending her back to her, will Willows spell kill Buffy? There are so many questions running through my mind about what can and will happen during the spell. I cant wait for more!

I am very interested in this story. And I am very impatient... so MORE!

Author's Response: *hugs you for taking the time to read this* Willow is a bit smug in this story .. a little to sure of her gut feeling. You will have to wait and see what happens, I will update soon Luv Ya!

Reviewer: Brett Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/16/2009 - 09:31 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh this is looking interesting. I can't wait for Buffy to help Kaia. I wonder who Kaia is..Is she special? Special how? A Slayer? Questions questions questions. Keep it up, I hope Willow can help.

Author's Response: Thanks Brett :) I am really glad you liked, hope the updates are enjoyed as much *huggles*

Reviewer: Jake Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/16/2009 - 09:13 pm Title: Chapter 1

Wow Kitten! That is a great beginning. Can't wait to read the rest of it. I'm intrigued now

Author's Response: Thanks, Jake! Am so glad you liked it : I hope you enjoy future updates as well.

Reviewer: IT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/16/2009 - 04:55 pm Title: Chapter 1

I love the Clan of the Cave Bear series - perhaps becuase it was my first true introductin to smut! lol This is a good beginning. Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing IT! I remember being so sucked into the world of the Ayla and it has stuck with me for years. I truly hope I can write the great story I have in mind.

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/16/2009 - 02:53 pm Title: Chapter 1

I'm a great fan of the 'Earth's Children' books so I'm well and truly hooked. I love the way Buffy is still confiding in Spike even after the physical relationship has begun and the way the Scoobies went merrily on with their lives without noticing Buffy's pain is very true to canon. Love your portrayal of ComfortSpike.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing, All4Spike *huggs* I read the books a few years ago, before I ever watched my first Buffy episode. But since I found fanfiction, this story has been in my head. Ayla in the books always seemed so strong yet so broken.. so much like Buffy. I hope I can do a good job expressing my vision to you.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/16/2009 - 01:48 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh now I know what you mean; I've heard about the Clan of the Cave Bear books but I haven't read it yet. Good twist :)
I like the start too; looking forward to more. Kaia looks a lot like Buffy (except that BUffy is a bottle blond).

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing Cordykitten! I am tickled to finally be able to get this story out. I has kinda haunted me for awhile.

Reviewer: _3xy_ Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/16/2009 - 08:29 am Title: Chapter 1

Interesting plot! This is very different, and I'm looking forward to more. It's great that you branched out and gave us this wonderful piece.

Author's Response: Thanks, Trixie! I hope you continue to enjoy this story. Its been swirling around my noggin for a while.

Reviewer: Andy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/16/2009 - 07:45 am Title: Chapter 1

Well a very different tack for you - great start, enjoying!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing, Andy! I hope you continue to enjoy *huggles*

Reviewer: msspikester Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/16/2009 - 04:01 am Title: Chapter 1

I think this is a wonderful plot. I love your writing, and you have me very intrigued. I just want to smack Willow! How could she not catch the "I was able to guide her, comfort her." line? If she was in hell, how could she comfort someone else if she herself was being tortured? Tsk, tsk - someone's got some smackdown coming to her....

Author's Response: WOW I am so flattered! AND Happy to know that you are interested. I am excited to take you guys on this adventure with me. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: PaganBaby Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/16/2009 - 01:08 am Title: Chapter 1

This is going to be such a cool and different story! I'm hooked already :D

*dreamy sigh* I loooove how you write Spike! He's even hotter than usual -- being so comforting and listening to her -- the way he's just there for Buffy in any way that she needs him. And she's *letting* him without getting all freaked out and running off! Hooray! I like this Buffy better than the one on the show lol

I'm looking forward to seeing the story unfold -- and also looking forward to the promise of smut :P I do so love your smut! heehee

Keep up the great work! *huggles* And that's a gorgeous banner! My compliments to Xaph :)

Author's Response: Thanks PB! What a huge complement on my writing of Spike :) Yeah I havent read on like this before either, so I hope people enjoy it as much as I do. Xaph does amazing banners!

Reviewer: AMI Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/16/2009 - 01:07 am Title: Chapter 1

Wow, I really like it so far, Kitten. It looks so interesting, And I like that Buffy is not abusive with Spike and admits she feels something for him. Willow is making me nervous tho, she sounds kinda arrogant ..you know thinking she'd done a good thing and it was no one's business.

Can't wait for more and I don't mind plot as long as there's some smut. =) *hugs*

Author's Response: Thanks AMI, there will be some smut very soon, but plot driven story is on its way :)

Reviewer: Carol Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/15/2009 - 11:56 pm Title: Chapter 1

I appreciate you not writing smut - thank you. An interesting start - I'll continue to read this.

Author's Response: There will be a little smut in the story and it was noted in the author notes as well as warnings. BUT this is not PWP. Thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: Blazing Fire Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/15/2009 - 11:52 pm Title: Chapter 1

I like to story so far. I think you have been reading "Clan of the Cave Bear" lately. Kaia sounds like the girl there. This is one of my favorite books. You have me hooked aready.

Great Work!!!

Author's Response: I read the books years ago and yeah I noted in my author notes this has influences. Stay with this and I hope you like future updates :) Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: badalyce Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/15/2009 - 11:22 pm Title: Chapter 1

why do i have the feeling willow is a stupid and arogant willow? anyway comfort spike is always good. you got me interested with this first chapter and i'm waiting for the next one. who could this kaia be ... i have an idea but i will wait to see ... maybe i am wrong.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing BadAlyce! This fic is very different from my others, but I have had this drifting in and out of my mind for some time and am happy to share!

Reviewer: xoChantelly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/15/2009 - 09:53 pm Title: Chapter 1

wow! This is interesting! I cant wait to find out what is going to happen. Kaia sounds alot like Buffy in description. I think this will be an interesting fic and very original! Cant wait for moree!!!

*cracks whip* Luv ya Kitten!! *hugs tight*

Author's Response: I am so glad you liked, this is very different from my usual fics. Stay tuned for updates :)

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