Date: 10/07/2011 - 09:04 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
oh I loved it
Date: 09/21/2009 - 10:05 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
That was completely wonderful fic! I'm really sad to see it end so soon. I was kinda hoping to see how Spike kept Buffy from having to sacrifice herself for her sister. But I guess I'll have to just imagine it. lol Great work I look forward to reading more from you. And whoever does your banners kudos to them too they are Really awesome! ~ZLB
Author's Response: Thank you very much. We decided to end the story there. I can tell you that the solution to the Glory problem would be to have Spike or Giles kill Ben. Then Buffy wouldn't have to jump off that tower. :)
The banners were all done by me, Dawnofme. Thank you so much for the kind words about them. I enjoyed writing this story with Mabel so much that I was inspired to do all those banners.
~ Dawn
Date: 08/23/2009 - 10:33 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One
Aww, the story's over? *pout* Gonna miss it. Loved the ending though, absolutely perfect. Amazing story, well done! :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much! We're thrilled that you enjoyed the story.
~ Dawn
Date: 08/23/2009 - 05:38 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One
*claps* you guys did great. Enjoyed every chapter :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much. We're so happy that you enjoyed our story.
~ Dawn
Date: 08/22/2009 - 10:47 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
i enjoyed reading this!..i hope there's a sequel? :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much. Mabel is in charge of the creative end for any story we might do next. So a sequel would be up to her. I'll do whatever she wants.
~Dawn
Date: 08/22/2009 - 04:14 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
Nice piece. I think you did a fine job of crafting a plausible Buffy who, without exposure to Angelus, as yet hadn't become a user and defensively manipulative. Your Spike is equally good: smart but impatient, putting his foot repeatedly in his mouth but finding the right words when caught in a quiet place with his better emotions. Nicely plotted, reasonable selection of incidents, and a smirk-inducing end to the Initiative. Could have wished for a bit more glints of character from the others--Giles in particular seems kinda flat--but it was already a long piece, and I can see why you'd want to keep the focus where you did. Thanks for writing it!
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your detailed review. We can't tell you how much we appreciate it. I have to agree that we did gloss over Giles and some of the other characters. It really was a focused piece. We both tend to write long stories, so it was our goal to write one at a reasonable length to kept interest all the way through. Thank you so much for reading it and being thoughtful with your review. *hugs*
~ Dawn
Date: 08/22/2009 - 01:49 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
One of the best time-travel fics I've ever read! Well done! Kinda sad I'ts finished though... the updates of 'Anticipation' has been one of the highligts of my weeks. :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the kinds words! Best time-travel. Made me smile. It's a little different than what's out there, that's for sure. But I love time-travel fics. There are so many great ones. Reviews like yours are what make us want to continue writing together, so thanks for that.
~ Dawn
Date: 08/22/2009 - 10:31 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One
Wait what, the end? I don't want it to end :/ Now you're definitly evil x)
...I have loved the whooole story, excellent work:)
And smart idea that with the protest thing against the initiative :)
XXX
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you liked the story enough to not want it to end. We figured we could keep going on, but it would only drag it out. It's nice to leave a little to the imagination. Or perhaps a sequel, if we ever get around to one.
~Dawn
Date: 08/22/2009 - 02:41 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One
Enjoyed!
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
Date: 08/21/2009 - 11:05 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
Great ending ladies! Loved how the Initiative was taken down by protesters lol. Buffy and Spike are happy, and Spike is accepted as Buffy's bf.Finally Giles believes him and Dawn won't have to go thru the Key trauma. YAY!! What a great, great story!
And Spike's thought about protesters,---> These people needed to get laid or something OMG LMAO... too funny!
I'll miss this story, thanx for sharing. =)
Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked the protesters angle. We really wanted to do something fresh and different with this story.
Thank you for the kind words about the story. We're so happy you enjoyed it.
~Dawn
Date: 08/21/2009 - 10:21 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
I cannot believe I won't have this story to "anticipate" any more. Thank you so much for pooling your considerable talents and sharing with us.
Author's Response: We are thrilled that you were anticipating the chapters. LOL! It was a joy to write and to share it with wonderful readers, such as yourself.
~ Dawn