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Reviewer: PaganBaby Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/05/2009 - 04:29 am Title: Chapter 7

Darn it! I can understand William wanting to get validation, to know that some women would still want him even if Buffy doesn't, but Grrr! lol Can't wait to see how Buffy handles this.

And I love when 'Jizz In My Pants' is used in a story :P Gave me a big giggle! hehehe

Great chapter, babe! *smoochies & hugs*

Author's Response: lol I was going to use the Why Bunnies are Great song, but it wasn't as good as Jizz in my Pants lol. I have it as my ringtone too lol. I'm glad you liked the chapter. Thanks for reviewing! *smoochies and lurve*

Reviewer: laura_exist2inspire Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/03/2009 - 04:39 pm Title: Chapter 7

Uh Oh! Totally understand William's reasons for coming on to Faith but hope him and Buffy work things out with as little confusion as possible lol =D

Author's Response: lol little confusion as possible, coming up in the last chapter! Glad you are enjoying. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: CallMeKitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/03/2009 - 02:03 pm Title: Chapter 7

*shakes head* Poor William and his bad timing. Hope that he doesnt make the error of sleeping with Faith, but who knows.... maybe I see a 3sum in my head HEHE

Author's Response: lol Hmm, 3sum would be good, but not part of this fic lol Naughty Kitten! Glad you are liking. Thanks for the R&R!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/03/2009 - 04:53 am Title: Chapter 7

Love Faiths timing. Sure it works well against our couple, but Girl is an opportunist for sure. Hope Buffy sticks around. Seeing her will at least get things moving in his head. Looking forward for more.

Author's Response: I agree, seeing Buffy would help him along, but hmmm... what is Buffy's reaction to hearing the message he left on the machine? Well, next chapter is updated *hint hint* =P Hope you enjoy! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/01/2009 - 09:45 pm Title: Chapter 7

Ouch... Spike/Faith? :(
I didn't think that things could go more wrong. *sigh*

Author's Response: lol Don't worry, cordykitten. Aside from One Good Day, I like to have my fics with a happy ending. This is all just part of the master plan =P Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: guest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/01/2009 - 08:03 pm Title: Chapter 7

I don't blame William. He was hurt badly from the woman he likes a lot. On a subject that he is sensitive about. On his personality. He already feels that most people just see him as a big nerd and nothing more. But to hear that from someone you are interested in must hurt so much. So I can understand why William would need to feel that a very sexy woman wanting him and thinking of him as more than a nerd. I love what you had Cordelia say......"William may be the poetry reading, honour roll student, 'I do my parents proud' type, but he isn't really a nerd. People can have layers, you know?"
I think William needs to realize that too. That he is more than being really smart and writing poetry. That there are other parts to him. I feel that while he may be channeling Spike sometimes that Spike is slowly becoming one of his many layers. That Spike is becoming part of who he is. If that makes sense. LOL I can relate to cute and "nerdy" William and that is why I love him. I always thought that Spike and Faith would make a hot couple. I don't mind reading Spike/other either. It is Buffy/other that I have a problem with. I can only read Buffy with Spike. Spike with almost anybody. I think it may be because Spike is so hot and I want to imagine it being me on the receiving end of Spike's affections. LOL Anyways, while I find Spike and Faith hot. I hope that William realizes that sleeping with Faith may not make him feel better. Poor William.

Author's Response: Woot! I'm glad you understand why William is trying to hook up with Faith, I was beginning to be afraid that I didn't elaborate on his feelings well enough for people to understand why he was acting out. I loved that line too, Corsy is really close with him so she knows him best. Plus, its just true in every way. lol yeah, that makes sense. Thats what I'm trying to do, have him... establish his William-ness but understand his Spike-ness, lol if that makes sense.LOL and I can also relate to it too, I love William for that as well. I agree, Spike and Faith are a hot couple, but Buffy is definitely the one for him =P I can't do Spike/Other, unless its a threesome with Bufy/Faith or Buffy/Cordy. I don't read Buffy/other either, specially not with Angel lol. Oh lol what a life it would be if we were the ones with our very own Spike *sighs*. Thank you for the great, long, fantastic review, and I hope you enjoy the rest! *hugs*

Reviewer: AMI Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/01/2009 - 07:15 pm Title: Chapter 7

Oh Oh...bad William. I hope he doesn't do anything with Faith. That would be not of the good, even tho I guess I can understand why he's doing it. I loved Xander/Anya in this chappie. Too funny. And Cordy is my fave, she's funny and honest. Loved her shallow bitch line. LOL.
Now let' s see what Buffy does after hearing that message, she does have an apology to make.

More soon please, Chan. It's so good...loved it! *hugs*

btw I'm still hoping you update "His Death Wish" =)

Author's Response: Am still working on the next chapter of HDW, just having muse problems with that fic and IDWTR. I hope to get them both up and running again, glad to know that you are still going to read it when I finally update though =D

Yep, William is acting out on his sadness and anger and hurt, I'm glad you understood that, seems someone didn't understand that. lol I love writing Cordy, I try to keep her funny and bitchy and honest like her real character, so I'm glad you like her. I also loved writing the Xan/Anya scene, was very cute/funny. I'm glad you are liking and I hope you enjoy the rest. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: xaphania Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/01/2009 - 04:46 pm Title: Chapter 7

Uh-oh... bad William :( I hope Buffy waits there for him and kicks Faith out XD The Xander/Anya parts were very funny, definitely in-character.

Looking forward to more! :D *hugs*

Author's Response: I agree, William is a bad boy =( You will have to wait and see in the next chapter what happens =P I'm glad you liked the XanAnya parts, I was kinda nervous that they wouldn't be as funny as I hoped, but I think its okay now. Thanks for reviewing! *hugs*

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/01/2009 - 04:08 pm Title: Chapter 7

oh, come on, he's being an idiot. he could at least give her a chance to explain, not screw the first slut he sees. i really hope spike doesn't go through with it, i would be very disappointed in him if he did, and i might not be able to continue with this. i don't do spike/other.

Author's Response: I guess you should have read the warnings before you were so hasty, huh? People do things they might regret later when they are upset/hurting. I hope you enjoy the next chapter. Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/01/2009 - 11:52 am Title: Chapter 7


One mistake leads to another..

Author's Response: Very true. Thanks for reviewing!

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