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Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/25/2009 - 08:33 pm Title: Chapter two

Even if you post the chapters at the same time because they have to be approved by the mods they'll be up at a different time. So I can check what's up first. ;)
Good to hear you like happy endings :)
Spike/Dru isn't my favorite but it's better to bear when Buffy and Spike aren't together yet. And this scene only showed Spike getting hurt again (rejected, the mating).
And Buffy, this sounds like a planned attack. Hard for Buffy too avoid, there where simply too much of them.
More soon? Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: LOL Yeah you're right-they are up at different time, and I promise you the happy ending...well, at least you can be sure I won't kill off Buffy or Spike! lol Sorry for the whole Spike/Dru ordeal but as you cleverly noticed it only ended up with Spike being hurt by Dru...like he always does, poor guy. And it was a planned attack, even Buffy couldn't fight off that many! Thanks for reviewing, you make my day!!! :)

Reviewer: sue Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/25/2009 - 02:55 pm Title: Chapter two

Graphic between Spike and Drusilla - but their two cold bodies radiate nothing. Nothing. His body is used but his plea is rejected - tossed aside and laughed at. Similar treatment to the cooling cadavers at his feet.

Meanwhile, Buffy is receiving too much attention ...... and William the Bloody has yet to see her -

Great.

Author's Response: Exactly!!! It was nothing but a collision of bodies, there was no emotional connection at all...in my mind Drusilla is far too gone in her own world to love Spike the way he'd want her to. Thank you for leaving me an awesome review, Sue!!! :)

Reviewer: iris Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/25/2009 - 01:08 am Title: Chapter two

I think this will be a terrific piece - I only wish that Spike had not tried to claim (or "mine ') Dru; that he would not have had those feelings until later for Buffy - he would not know what that even meant - but PLEASE DO CONTINUE!!

Author's Response: We always knew Spike loved Dru and was truly devoted to her, hed do anything for her...before he met Buffy that is and realized that what he felt for Dru was nothing but a shadow of what he felt for Buffy. He will realize his mistake sooner rather than later, no worries! :) I have already written next chapter, it just needs some polishing. Thank you for reviewing!!! :)

Reviewer: Jenno Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/25/2009 - 12:22 am Title: Chapter two

I like it alot!! Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: I'm happy you liked and I can't wait to post more!! :) Thank you for leaving a review!!!

Reviewer: Shakes Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/25/2009 - 12:04 am Title: Chapter one

Hey there, The Enemy of Reality! Great to see you posting here at the SR and I really liked the update! Incredible writing skills! Keep up the awesome work!

Author's Response: Hey Shakes! :) You're making me blush with all your compliments! lol Thank you for always leaving awesome reviews!!! :)

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/24/2009 - 10:52 pm Title: Chapter two

Really loving this! Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for loving my story and leaving a review, I appreciate it!!!! :)

Reviewer: CallMeKitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/22/2009 - 10:50 am Title: Chapter one

OOOooooOOOOoo I cant wait for more! Truly loved this start, thanks for sharing!

Author's Response: I'm happy you loved it!! *g* Thanks so much for leaving a review!!! :)

Reviewer: scaryscouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/22/2009 - 12:17 am Title: Chapter one

yes I'm hooked, just wondering who has her captured, is it Angel? More please

Author's Response: Nope, not Angel, poor guy is all soulful and suffering, he won't be revelant to this story, I hope you'll keep reading! Thank you for leaving me a review!!! :)

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/21/2009 - 11:41 pm Title: Chapter one

Excellent beginning! Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: I'm really happy that you liked the beginning, hopefully you'll keep liking it! Thanks for leaving a review!!!! :)

Reviewer: spikeluv/84 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/21/2009 - 06:42 pm Title: Chapter one

well...u already know what i think!!! what's up gurlie?! how've u been? i've been getting better. my ankle is such a bitch!! i hope ur summer is going awesome! sorry i haven't wrote u in a while. between PT and doc visits, i have very little energy to write. hope everything is great on ur end. tell ur bro to lay off that Coke! :)

Moni

p.s. bout tme u posted this story!

Author's Response: Hey Moni!!! I really hope your ankle will get better soon, it looked pretty scary! My summer sucks so far, can't find any part-time job, but I keep my fingers crossed, hopefully I'll find something soon! I totally understand the lack of energy, and I'll tell my bro! LOL I finally posted it, took me ages though...anyway, yay me! lol

Reviewer: iris Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/21/2009 - 06:23 pm Title: Chapter one

This could be very very good......please don't wait centuries to continue like some writers do. I would love to read more! Thanks.
Iris

Author's Response: No worries Iris, I have some chapters written in advance and I'll post the next one when I get it back from my betas! :) Thanks for leaving a review!!!!

Reviewer: sue Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/21/2009 - 05:09 pm Title: Chapter one

A good first chapter, setting she scene well and an effective contrast between the world of Spike and the world of Buffy.
When two worlds collide .......

Look forward to chapter 2.

Author's Response: YAY I'm glad you liked!!! And gotta say, that contrast is exactly what I was going for, so go you for being a perceptive reader, and for leaving me an awesome review!! :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/21/2009 - 10:25 am Title: Chapter one

I didn't know that you post here too; maybe I'll read the rest here then.
Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: I was told by my betas that I should so here it is! lol I'll post chapters here and on EF at the same time. :)

Reviewer: immortalangel08 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/21/2009 - 01:44 am Title: Chapter one

Interesting start and I can't wait to see where you go with this.

Author's Response: I'm really glad I piqued your interest with this, hopefully I'll be able to keep it! :)) Thank you so much for letting me know! *hugs*

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