Date: 07/21/2009 - 08:50 pm Title: Chapter Three
favorite line in this chapter? "Buffy thought how weird it was that a vampire had better manners than some people she'd met in the past." What's really weird is that neither Buffy, the Scobbies, nor I had even ever given a second thought to this fact.
Author's Response: Hee, well we do see this sometimes in the episodes (eg. Crush). Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 07/12/2009 - 04:11 am Title: Chapter Three
Yeah, Ned may be pushing it just a bit there. Buffy sure can make it painful for that guy. Wonder what he'll try next!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 07/08/2009 - 07:01 pm Title: Chapter Three
"As Spike’s face moved between expressions of shock, confusion and lust, and Buffy grew more and more thin-lipped, Dawn couldn’t help but giggle. She didn’t know what was going on, but it was funny."
LOL! Great chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 07/05/2009 - 07:10 pm Title: Chapter Three
Imaginary friends are supposed to me friendly and not mean.. and he's only causing more trouble for Buffy..
loved the chapter.
Author's Response: I'd say Ned was more mischevous than mean. Glad you liked the chapter!
Date: 06/30/2009 - 10:27 pm Title: Chapter Three
hehehe I enjoyed all of it, but that last part was priceless! Ned trying to make Buffy touch Spike's goodies! God bless Ned :P I could see Buffy moving all jerky-like, so funny heehee
Great chapter, hon! *hugz*
Author's Response: Hehe, he's a little mischevious, huh? That last scene was actually quite difficult to write, so I'm glad it came across okay :D Thanks for the review!
Date: 06/30/2009 - 08:31 pm Title: Chapter Three
Still loving this! Can't wait for the next chapter! More Please!
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you're still liking it :)
Date: 06/30/2009 - 08:35 am Title: Chapter Three
*lol* Too funny! Loved it! :)
Author's Response: Hee, thanks Pet!
Date: 06/30/2009 - 05:49 am Title: Chapter Three
hahahah that was great! I love that Ned stepped in there! Effin priceless! That would have been excellent to see on TV! You wrote this chapter really well!! Cant wait for more! We are at the parts where I havent read now, and Im all excited lol.
MORE MORE MORE!
Author's Response: Thank you! Hehe, hope you'll like what I have coming next... thanks for the review!
Date: 06/30/2009 - 01:02 am Title: Chapter Three
hehe LOVE Ned! I cant wait to see how he handles buffys issues with spike.. such fun!
Author's Response: Hmm, well he certainly seems to have a handle on them here XD Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 06/30/2009 - 12:33 am Title: Chapter Three
lol Naughty Ned!! :) Thanks for the update.
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed, thanks for the review!
Date: 06/29/2009 - 10:40 pm Title: Chapter Three
Heh.. and I bet Ned things now he is the reason Buffy acts better towards Dawn, huh?
Spike (and Dawn) are suspicious already (about who Buffy is talking too). But they'll never guess that (what's the matter).
Author's Response: Hee, nope, don't think they'd guess on their own... but perhaps Buffy will confide? Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 06/29/2009 - 10:38 pm Title: Chapter Three
Looks like Ned was taking Buffy's relationship in his own hands! LOL. Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Hee, literally into his own hands :D Glad you're enjoying, thanks for the review!
Date: 06/29/2009 - 08:23 pm Title: Chapter Three
Heehee . Loved how they spent Halloween at Spike's crypt. And Buffy waking up with her hand where it shouldn't be. Yay for Ned for pushing Buffy onto Spike and trying to get her to touch his naughty bits, LOL
So funny. Love Ned.
More soon please, I love this story! :)
Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying, and that you like Ned :D He'll be causing more mischief before the story's done, stay tuned :) Thanks for the review!
Date: 06/29/2009 - 08:16 pm Title: Chapter Three
Two words! ; NEED MORE!! Tell me as soon as you have written them!!
Author's Response: Hehe, glad you're liking. I'll let you know when the next chapter is updated (if you're on skype lol)
Date: 06/29/2009 - 08:05 pm Title: Chapter Three
Ahahahahaha! That was hilarious! Buffy getting moved around by Ned. Talk about getting a push in the right direction.
Author's Response: Thanks, Brett!
Date: 06/29/2009 - 07:57 pm Title: Chapter Three
once again loved it. too funny.
p.s. really love that you're updating everyday. it's awesome!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! I love it when authors update every day, so I thought I'd try it too. Although I only have 2 more chapters ready to post, need to get writing!