Name: AMI (Signed) · Date: 07/01/2009 - 02:59 pm · For: Chapter One: Everything Changes
Was this reposted? I know I read it before.
Anyway, I really liked it alot. I like that Spike has a friend in torch and she's gonna help him. Can't wait to find out her story. So funny when torch called Buffy a blonde bitch. LOL.

Hope you'll be updating regularly cause it's really good so far. =)

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review, and yes I did repost this story, it went and changed on me, so what was supposed to be a short, nicely smutty spuffy fic turned into, well I'm still not quite sure yet, and I just couldn't leave it in the same category. Oh yeah, that B.B. comment had turned out to be a major hit and I'm thrilled that you like it! I'm just having so much fun with Torch, she cracks me up! And not to worry, I'm hard at work on the next chapter, so it'll be updated shortly! Again, thanks so much for the review and I hope that I continue to please.


Name: CallMeKitten (Signed) · Date: 07/01/2009 - 11:09 am · For: Chapter One: Everything Changes
Very interesting must say. Torch has me intrigued. What is she, what's her interest in Spike? All things I'd like to figure out.

I am anxiously awaiting the next chapter for more info, surely you wont leave us hanging too long *wink-nudge* Cool and original idea for a story.

One small comment: You didn't list a beta and I noticed a few things I wasn't sure were intentional or not.. ie: thru vs through and k vs. ok. Fine by me if intentional, but I know I've been ragged for similar, so just a heads up.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! I'm surprised that Torch is as big a hit as she is, I kinda expected her to fall flat. I'm hard at work on the next chapter so it'll be updated soon. And yeah, those are intentional mistakes, and I greatly appreciate the advice! I just can't seem to make the back-and-forth between them more formal, and well, grammerly correct, the pull to let them be loose and playful is just too strong. Again, thank you so much for the review and I hope that I continue to please :-}


Name: Lou (Signed) · Date: 07/01/2009 - 10:56 am · For: Chapter One: Everything Changes
Interesting start, I look forward to more.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review, it's greatly appreciated! And as I'm hard at work on the next chapter, it'll be updated soon! I post as I finish, not the best course of action, but oh well, it's fun anyway! Again thanks so much for the review and I hope that I continue to please :-}


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