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Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/04/2009 - 05:53 pm Title: The meeting

PS: As for italics, you need to do some coding if I'm not wrong. HTML tags. See the help section under Posting a story./Account page . You need to open and close a tag; the text comes in between. I can't show here, the text will vanish if I do. The "i" is for italics. See here for opening and closing a tag. Look here for how it's done.

Author's Response: Thank you so much. Being a newbie I need all the help I can get. You rock!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/04/2009 - 05:46 pm Title: The meeting

Huh? No clue why Buffy and Spike were fighting like they did. I hope I understand it later.

Author's Response: I'm trying real hard to have this make sense but I think that I might have messed up in the transition from the first chap to the second one. I'm thinking of reading it all over and maybe editing a bit. I posted the third chapter but I think I messed up somewhere since it never showed.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/29/2009 - 05:16 pm Title: The search

I like the start, will look out for more.

Author's Response: Thx. I hope I don't disappoint.

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/29/2009 - 04:36 pm Title: The search

Intriguing. Not clear about the timeline but I'm thinking Post-Chosen? Just guessing the crashing is being made by Buffy & Spike... More please...

Author's Response: Yes the it is post-chosen. I've been reading the comics so some of that might show up in the story. Yes the crashing is Spike and Buffy. I have two versions of the next chapter and I'm still deciding which one to submit.

Reviewer: Lou Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/29/2009 - 04:21 pm Title: The search

This will go well, I'm sure!

Author's Response: Thanks for the encouragement.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/29/2009 - 04:32 am Title: The search

Love that they ran into a "battle." Can't wait to see what the reactions are going to be. Got to love it when it's so good that the wild life suffers. Nice start.

Author's Response: Thank you for letting me know specifically which parts you liked. It makes this easier for me. I'm so nervous about this.

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/29/2009 - 02:32 am Title: The search

looks interesting so far

Author's Response: Let's hope you keep finding it interesting.

Reviewer: Brett Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/28/2009 - 08:51 pm Title: The search

Oh what is it that they found...can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: Whine** I just hope I live up to your expectations.

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